Emi GS

Prologue: Tom could smell the distinctive odor of blood as he coughed. He had failed to defend his love for Tim and to reduce the pain; he had done the last thing he would do. He believed ‘A person has learned much who has learned how to die.’ So he had consumed the poison he’d bought for the rats in his dorm room. Letter from Tom Hey Tim, I know you’ll want to kill me the moment you hear my name. I will spare you the trouble by opening the wound you have inflicted on my heart and drai

Formal American Cinquain: Cinquain with Stress Words. Keep up Until you win Come here and take my heart I wait, but you had best be quick And flirt Formal Cinquain: Cinquain with syllables. Propose Horse-drive thy grit Blush, tremble, be honest —Will you accept my life-time quirks— I do Cinquain form #1~ Didactic Cinquain: Cinquain with title and its description. Love Amorphous, affection Yearning, entrancing, cherishing Pure and pleasure filled Amity Cinquain form

He never cared about me— Was it I who blindsided him? He never stayed with me— Was it I who sourly bugged him? He never rang up for me— Was it I who so miss him? He never again talked to me— Was it I who hugely hurt him? He never even loved me— Was it I who was hopeless for him? Is it just him and me— Or the villainous envy of the other one? Is it just him and me— Or a play of vicious fate that we performed?

Yearning for some care, Is what I do all the time. Wishing for a simple love, For that was all I could do. Love is such a wicked game. Wah... Oh Ho... Oh!!! Ho... Love is so so wicked game. Wah... Oh Ho... Oh Ho Ho Ho... On one normal day, Comes an unexpected night. He comforts and embraces, And now we start making love. Every breath, touch; Felt like absolute heaven. Every kiss, thrust and moan; Is both pain and great pleasure. Love is such a wicked game. Wah... Oh

A vicious brain can play evil games to snatch the happiness from others, even though it had cost a life...

Love can play so vicious games with your life. With your relations. With your emotions...

To rattle my deficient world to perfection and he may kiss now

Astounding factum that sparkled with summer glee. Dainty and comely; fixed on a wood vanity. The house of Citrine —A fish.

Poetry Prompts I am seriously working hard to write...

Like the sun and rain, you both look just fine. Through the morning shine, Both enjoy your eminent domain... Yeah, I can't resist but its a limited time. So take it as it comes. They are very nice, especially the gardening one. I loved it. It has the more romantic aspect containing itself. The fine description of a fine sunny day turned out to be the rainy and romantic has been precisely structured here. I love the way/flow you presented the Cinquains. Even though they look so easy to write, but its rather difficult to put it perfect. I have my set of experience with them. They have to be very carefully handled. Or otherwise they twist you so much. You have done a great job parker. And simple mistakes, if there are any, forgiven by the pure affection throughout the poems. They are really beautiful... ~Emi.

I am a new reader for you. You have written so good so far, other than the feeling of you are rushing the things from very first. Just like telling a story. And I liked it about your writing. But this chapter was just wow! I mean you have been so careful to not let you writing style go, but you slowed down the pace. And coming to the Ani and Dom, I am not judging right now and I had a feeling that there is more story behind this misunderstanding. I hope its just a misunderstanding.(finger crossed) Waiting for the next chapter... ~Emi.

I looked so different on that day to me. I was glad with the new guy that abducted me. I wish I will be like that every time. May be going out and be as independent will make that kind of things, which is I am planning to do. And thanks for the review Tim... ~Emi.

It was so great to observe such little creatures do something like that. Yeah summer heat was killing us all. Even those little things. But they are so adorable to watch... Thanks for the compliments and thanks for the review... ~Emi.

I am not happy about my Ex and the guy he was now with. And I cuss myself for letting him go away like that and accepted the other guy. After all I am human too. I feel some what angry about my stupidity. This type thoughts come and go now and then... Anyway, thanks for the review... ~Emi.

My cheeks are hard by smiling so widely. You guys are making me like that with you complements. And I am glad for that. Its really a great thing to say. Thanks for that... ~Emi.

Wow!!! That was a huge complement Parker. You made me smile. Thanks for the great review man... ~Emi.

Thanks Gary. I am glad no one laughed at me even though I explained it damn clearly. Yeah those last three line are given it another perspective. You guys are so great that you understand it. And I am so thankful to that... Thanks for the review Gary... ~Emi.

I laughed at myself while I was writing this. But the three lines are fitted perfect to told what I exactly feel other than the other things... I am glad you liked it and enjoyed/lived with it... ~Emi.

Those three lines are the ones I had written first. But they looked great on last stanza. Yeah, such a desire but unable to do or say anything. Its a different floating of the feelings. Desire to depress to sad to again desire. I am glad and thank you people for not laughing at my uncomfortableness... ~Emi

It not just a family event but also a marriage ritual. And we enjoyed a lot too. And if you don't mind it, the food is great too. A nice party indeed. Thanks for the review... ~Emi.

Yeah. We all love her mother so much that we care for her so much because of truth of her mother, my cousin, not with us anymore. So I became an adviser sort of support. So its became my responsibility to advice on her marriage. I am glad she was happy with her new family. R.I.P cousin, she is happy now. Thanks for the review My Friend... ~Emi.

A perfect image of blossom and the stunning fact of being retard. Nice view and nice Haiku man. I liked it very much... ~Emi.

Fantastic form of Haiku the Hunter is. And the another one is as good too. Nice poems. Thank you for sharing... ~Emi.

With a perfect sense I am perfectly articulating This poem is simply perfect. I love it. Love the simplicity of the poem, which became my strength in poetry always. So I can say it's my kind of poem. Perfectly written... ~Emi.

Me too Tim. And Thanks...