Thanks for all the help and lovely review. I have learn more from the knowledge you have shared on Tanka. And I'll be glad for that. More!!! Deifnitely...
~Emi.
First of all Thank You so much for the editing on instant and doing the re-check on limited time.
Coming to the story. I agree with you, the chapter itself looked as perfect story. But life don't go so easy on us. And that too, I had already planned more that one chapter, even before the chapter itself written. So mind me. And be ready for 2nd chapter as it soon gonna be at your door step, knocking...
Thanks for the review though...
~Emi.
Thanks for the enthusiastic review. And definitely there going to be more emotional fluctuation other than romance. I just hope you guys stick to it. I planned more than just two chapters...
Thanks again...
~Emi.
Yeah, so many 'Elliott's. And I started to like that name. More! Yes definitely. And this time there are going to be issues that are more than romance. Just hope you people like it.
Thanks for the Review...
~Emi.
A wonderful person, I met today.
His demeanor is outstanding,
so is his charming smile.
With an enchanting physique,
plus magnificent articulating;
he tempted me so much.
It's a quite surprise,
for I am being very talkative.
Is it my enthusiasm high,
or him being too cute!
It's never like our first meet
for us being too friendly.
Even to talk, him being cut or not.
Is it just the positive vibes,
or I was expecting something more.
I raced on continuously,
eager to settle down everything.
As they pester me conspicuously,
but, to complete the task in hand, I just cling.
As the horde of workers demand,
to pile up their each and every gear.
With all the things, I had already planned,
every claim and rush they made, are just got clear.
Full of interaction, intimidation, pleasures and and Love. Its not about who win or who lose. Its about sharing the passion and love. Yeah their mind games with humans looks wicked. But the management play with their recruits is double wicked, I say.
Fantastic story Tim. I loved our little demon and Angel. They are perfect together. Love to hear(or read ) more if you planned to do so. Really fantastic idea and implementation. Loved it...
~Emi.
Wow!!! I don't know what you people call when you are reading something and found exact person and dealing the same thing. Terry resembles so much to me. But there had no 'Gillette' in my life until now.
I read it so calmly and clearly. It was fantastic. I don't have any word right now, but want to say a lot of thing about you story. It was great. You have written it with such passion, anyone and everyone will like it. Awesome story.
I want to tell more, but don't know what to say. A great story. And I loved it. A big thank you for sharing it.
~Emi.
I browsed to find who Zaidu is! But what I found is this. Check if if you haven't checked it before...
http://www.sacred-texts.com/ane/iai/index.htm
Its a terrific job to write about these kinds of ancient things. They are so cruel and horrified up to the bones. Those terrific things, evil and such sadness. You have mixed them well and presented outstandingly. I can feel the fear as well as the sadness of Adam throughout his life sufferings.
You have done very well on this. And do think about continuing the story. I can see a great story out of it. And definitely waiting to see more of it. Great job...
~Emi.
Love is definitely a wicked game. Some times it will turnout to be positive and some times otherwise. I liked the concept of bewitching. Who? How? and Where its been led?
You have given such great description of love here. Bewitching and playing games with a person may have its results. But true love!!! Its a different kind of boat.
I liked the way how you have explained. I Loved the story's end. Nice story Val...
~Emi.
Wow!!! That was really wicked and full of humor. Its definitely another way of your writings. And I liked it. I hope to see more of these kind, full of humor and all.
Your are terrifically done great on this story. Yeah everyone expect continuing of your work.
Great job and thank you for sharing/writing.
~Emi.
I've waited enough,
just come to me my love
and say that you would love me.
Give me the solace,
I had doubted to find,
by sharing your simplest hug.
Grant me the pleasure,
I never got to feel,
by planting your lovely kiss.
And for me than this,
what can I ask instead?
Your love was enough for me.
Nice starting with all the mysteries to be unfold. You have got my attention. And Wow!!! What an idea to be get at the age of 15. Nicely done. Awaiting for the future chapters...
~Emi.
A nice take-on on the theme. Your poems stunned me with their simple gesture and perfect maneuver...
I found 'Found Poem' rather interesting and very thoughtful form. They will made us think. To write and to read. You have done very well on those poems. Thank you for writing and/or sharing...
~Emi.
I haven't been so observant,
not until that very moment;
where they all gawking at me.
And was shocked to see,
all the Greek swains
roaming around the town.
Some flung charming looks,
as some heaved stunning forms,
and some tossed blooming demeanor.
And for what I'd fallen for, —Nothing.
Ok. I am on to reading too. And no writing to distract me, and I can relax too.
Thank you for the whole team worked behalf the anthology. I appreciate their hard work. Thank you so much guys...