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Ford48

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  1. Ford48

    Chapter 12

    I really like your writing style. Brisk and not wordy. I am thoroughly enjoying the story and the characters. Children with disabilities are heartbreaking, I know from experience, and I am familiar with therapeutic horseback riding programs.
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    Chapter 9

    An incredibly beautifully written chapter. What's more it's medically accurate. I enjoy your writing and look forward to the coming chapters!
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    Connections

    You had me at Bluegrass Symphony, which, by the way I hope to see more of, and now I'm a blubbering mess with Fleeting Eternity. Your writing style is so realistic, so believable, that I am immediately brought into your world. I love your characters and am waiting for more of Markus' story. BTW I grew up in WV, the Kanawha River Valley, so not far too far from you. Keep up the good work, my friend!
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    Chapter 1

    Great beginning for a new story! I found "A Tattoo..." captivating and love your writing style and attention to detail. I also love the continuation of characters. I'm glad Jarren finally "spoke" to you. I look forward to more adventures!!!
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    Chapter 3

    Well written and meant to be intense. It's an engrossing first hand account of what it must be like to fall further and further into the submissive role. It becomes unbelievable only in the light of day.
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    Not Boyfriends

    I'm hoping the cameras don't pick up some private action between Wren and Caleb. That could be used to their disadvantage!!! I'm enjoying the story. I grew up not far from there and find the dialogue quiet authentic.
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