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Wow!!! I don't know what to say!!! This is one of the most erotic stories I have read...like, in forever! I kept waiting for it to go evil. It kind of circled that subject but never really went there. Sasha Distan, I am a fan and will be on the lookout for your future stories. Thank you!
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It's wonderful to have you back and for this story to continue. I'm worried about your encounter with Hurricane Ian. What a jolting return to reality. The amount of damage and carnage is breathtaking but I am glad you personally didn't experience the devastation that so many people did. As usual, your story telling skills are riveting. I'm enjoying the ride and am envious of the ability to "shift." Thank you.
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Quite simply, a beautiful story. Your writing always amazes me!
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I had the same experience, the infatuation, the one-way love, the need for acknowledgement or recognition and the need for physical love...followed by his dismissiveness, anger, rejection and cruel ridicule. This happened to me in college and played havoc with my life and my academics. He subsequently ended up in a private psychiatric hospital and had years of electroshock therapy. I still look back on those years in pain! Thank you for writing this, James.
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Okay, you've got my attention James Matthews! This is the second story of yours that I'm following. You have such a sweet, descriptive way of telling a story and I'm loving it. Your characters are real, with foibles, and believable. I find that I'm a stickler for spelling and grammar. Either you or your editor are doing a great job. Thank you for your contributions to our reading pleasure.
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Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
Ford48 commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
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Chapter 17 - The First Date
Ford48 commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 17 - The First Date
After all these chapters I'm finally getting into this story. I like Luke and his relationship with his father but think he's being an ass to Elaine...and to Josh. There is so much to follow-up on there that I hope we get the chance to pursue it in future chapters. Or...maybe I'm speaking prematurely since there are chapters I haven't gotten to yet. James Matthews, I haven't read any of your previous stories but will. I'm not going to comment any further on this story until I catch up with your later chapters. I enjoy your style and look forward to following this story and you. -
I continue to love the story and the "realness" of your writing. I'm anxiously waiting for the answer to why the parents left Loe, took Lars and ran away. It certainly wasn't to pursue some big adventure, it seems. Lars description of his life afterwards was anything but good...pretty dismal, in fact. So much going on!!! I look forward to the remaining chapters.
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I love the way you're slowly breaking down Loren's defenses. It seems very real. He may never be totally comfortable with small children but he is becoming more "real" in my mind. I can relate to this side of Loren. Plus he's becoming more available to Jay. I also love the way you are integrating the two stories and the two sets of characters. Seamus, Matt and Aidan were people I hated to leave. So, to have them be part of this...and, I hope, future stories...is a beautiful bit of writing. Thank you, Mrsgnomie
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Ford48 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrs Gnomie, I'm commenting at the end of Chapter One. I don't know if you can see that...but...after reading Chapter 9, twice, I felt that I needed to be more mindful of everything leading up to Loren's beautifully written recapture of his childhood. So I am rereading your entire story. You are an incredible writer and your wordsmithing has often brought tears to me. I have nothing really to add to the other comments regarding the progression of your story but I have always loved your characters and their complexities. And...I look forward to more!!! Santé- 57 comments
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"I write what the characters tell me." That has to be the goal of every fiction writer...to be so in touch with your characters that it is the characters, who are so real, who tell you tell you what is happening. I think it's called confidence in your characters and your story line
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Wayne, I feel very much like I'm back home. Your Camp Refuge stories...in fact all of your stories... seem so real from the situations to your characters to the progression of the story line. As I've confessed before I've researched the Camp Refuge locale and can visualize just where it is. I'm a stickler for editing, not to the point that I don't enjoy various stories, but the you're, your, you are, and the they're, there, their put me on edge. I never feel that with you. So, I'm happy to have you back. What a great start to a new story. Keep it coming!
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I have loved this story from the beginning and have appreciated the character development, the progression of the story and the neurotic behavior of both Matt and Seamus. The world will be a little emptier without Matt, Seamus and Aidan. Would love to check back in at some point!
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I love your stories and am hooked for the long haul. So happy!
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Ford48 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
"I don't know what you mean when you say "you could end it right here?" That sounds terrible. There's so much growth left. We don't even really know Seamus! Tell us more about Kelly. Or Matt. How does Matt grow as a parent? They haven't even consumated their relationship. Who causes the conflict? Climax? Resolution? End now? Blasphemy." The best news I've heard in a while. I love your characters and their situations. I agree that both Matt and Seamus are a little dense, Matt for not getting it and Seamus for not being clearer about his intentions, but I really want to see this play out. I always feel a loss when a story ends. I'm so glad this one is going on.- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Ford48 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Matt is so incredibly dense! And Seamus is hardly any better. Uncommunicative!- 50 comments
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I'm slowly becoming aware of how brave Mrsgnomie and all authors who post here are. (?) They write their stories telling them in their best storytelling fashion, exposing themselves through these stories and have them criticized or praised by us, the readers. Bravo to all the authors. I think we, the readers, are a friendly bunch but we have our favorites and, let's face it, some stories are better than others. I love this site and am so happy that there are so many who share their imaginations and their creative efforts. I'll shut up now!
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AND...BACK TO THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY and away from the too cool football love fest. What's the world coming to??? I'm loving the complicated story line, the mystery of Seamus and the, kinda, density of Matt. I'm gaining a handle on Seamus and can't wait for fleshing out of his back story. This is such a delightful read, never mind the original premise, and I thank you, Mrsgnomie, for the entertainment... and for the erotic implications.
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Wow, Parker, I just happened onto this lovely story while perusing GA and loving your writing style and abilities. What a gentle and heartwarming story story of two people who may have thought that they were over the hill. My "relaxed" abs even flexed when I thought that maybe I have a future.
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My sentiments exactly! Thank you, Parker, for giving Rick, and Gus, the strength to be true to themselves and for Rick to be released from the inner workings of his mind. We all needed to see him act instead of think and dream. A beautiful chapter.
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Ongoing fun!
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What a lovely gritty story filled with so much humanity! Thank you, Wayne, for writing and thinking so beautifully.
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Wayne, You quietly mentioned that there are only two chapters to go. I always have a great sense of loss when I finish a story, especially yours. Your characters are real and their situations are believable. I also love your story settings. I hope we haven't seen the last of Camp Refuge. It's a perfect place to explore so many characters and their storylines. Thank you for your great storytelling >
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This is the longest foreplay I've experienced. Thank you Parker for allowing Rick to have a moment of initial release. He needed this immensely. Hopefully his courage will stick with him and so will Gus. I'm loving this sweet, frustrating story, as I have your other stories and your contributions with editing and advice. I'm hooked. My thanks!
