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Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
mikedup commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
Wow excellent chapter. Burnt bridges are hard to overcome but overcome they must for one move forward. I certainly hope that Jaime has really learnt that lesson . I hope his stint in the states is productive both personally and professionally.m -
Interesting chapter. Life and death go hand in hand. That saying the best laid plans can go awry. Fate is a terrible master. But this story still keeps getting better and better. The kids are in for a few surprises no doubt
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Well interesting chapter, I see some government people are helpful others not so much. But I see interesting times ahead. I expect some drama as well, life cannot always be hunky Dory. thanks again
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Interesting facts. I seems that that this is going to be an edge of my seat story. I cannot wait for more much,much more
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Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
mikedup commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
Awesome chapter. Absence makes the heart grow fonder. I hope that proves to be true. -
Another amazing story ahead. I await with eager anticipation. Thanks
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Very interesting turn of events. This seems to be more intriguing than ever it makes for very interesting and intense reading. It just draws you in . I can't wait for more.
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Another amazing story. thank you. I hope that you will continue the story
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Chapter 30 - Family Matters
mikedup commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 30 - Family Matters
Interesting that Derrick's parents are getting more weird or should I say weirder. I suppose that the best intentions are not always the best. Sometimes they turn around and bite you on the backside -
Another awesome chapter. I knew something was up. I hope that this means that there is a second part to this story. It has been a really interesting and intense story.
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Another excellent chapter. Something is up and I wonder what
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Wow a new home from home and I think that they are going to have a good time there working to get the island established. Great chapter. Thank you
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Excellent chapter. Intense but brilliant
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A great chapter. Things seem to be settling down at the moment. I wonder what is going to happen next
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Good chapter. Interesting times ahead.
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Another amazing chapter. Punishment to suit the offence.
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An excellent chapter. This is going to be an interesting story ahead.. thank you
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Another awesome chapter, and another cliffhanger. You seem to enjoy giving them to us .
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Excellent chapter
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Interesting. Recall in a previous comment about the ex captain being a thorn in the side it seems to have happened. I wonder if the previous captain signed a non disclosure agreement. If do his butt is going to get burnt. Another excellent chapter.
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Great chapter. Well you really know how to toss curve balls around. You really know how to keep us glued to the story
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Great to have you back. I have just finished reading part 1. I can't wait for more chapters. This has been really good. Thank you
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Awesome chapter. He is certainly taking control of his department. The captain it seems will be a thorn in his side.
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Wow You certainly enjoy leaving us with a cliffhanger. Another excellent chapter.
