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    Chapter 7

    This was great uplifting story off the beaten track but good , thanks again for the entertainment
  2. Great chapter, I think that they will be back before the 2 months are up , I also hope that Seamus makes a turn to visit often, Aiden is going to demand to see Seamus
  3. Awesome chapter, that saying that goes don't mess with my family is really apt right now grandfather and grandmother are seriously peeved and are now hell bent on revenge, I pity whoever it is o. Second thought I don't pity them at all they will deserve everything that lands on their lap , karma is a real b*tch on the return journey
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    Chapter 6

    Awesome chapter, it seems that they are having a great time. I am glad some issues have been resolved, time will no doubt tell , the boating and fishing experience has grounded them well, nothing is taken for granted
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    Chapter 5

    Great that she now knows what is expected of her and what is going to happen,
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    Beacon

    Well they certainly have a bit of a stuffed up relationship, I hope that they can get their act together and get on with it
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    Prologue

    Interesting start, violence against anyone doesn't end well
  8. So some family secrets are out , his father is going to be crucial to getting everything together Casper is going to have come clean about father
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    Chapter 4

    It will be interesting to see what will happen on board, I hope he gets the chance to explain everything to his future wife, so that everyone is on the same page, we certainly don't want unnecessary blood spilt is could up disastrous
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    Embers 9

    Interesting end I wonder what has happened to Brandon to be so anti Ethan and crew, time will tell us , the front line crew are getting more intense front line fires
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    Chapter 3

    Interesting scenarios that have been painted, time will tell what is going to happen
  12. Oh this keeps getting better, I don't care who raped him but they are. I For one think that they are going to be in sh*t load of trouble,
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    Chapter 2

    Great get together, definitely looking good
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting chapter , it seems that David is going to be leading a bit of a double life in the very near future
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    Prologue

    Interesting start
  16. Well as they say keep it in the family, so now grandfather knows which means granny will know it will be interesting to see the end result
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    Chapter 12

    Great ending to a really feel good story . Thanks once again
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    Chapter 11

    Great chapter, congratulations are in order life can now proceed with new vigour
  19. Ok so we have another intense battle in offering, I just wonder how they can't seem to work issues out without using extreme violence
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    Chapter 10

    Interesting chapter, I think that the 2 council people the woman and the man are going to be in for a wake up call, his lawyer is going to surely pull a nasty on them which they will definitely deserve, I also suspect that they are related to each other
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    Chapter 9

    Great feel good chapter, I agree when called him dad is was just awesome, let's hope the visit goes off great
  22. Great that Casper could say everything that was needed to be said, he needs to vent about his parents, it makes it easier to deal with, he carries a lot of hatred
  23. Ok so Tyler will no doubt take the job , G is a real "dick" in the worst possible way ,
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    Chapter 8

    Great chapter, awesome bonding between them, they are definitely becoming a tight family unit
  25. Interesting chapter, so we have a human kettle, can you just imagine getting into fight with her if she gets angry she could just cook them, no need to run away, cooked bodies could be a problem though
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