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Great pressing of the oil , it shows that there have swindlers around since the beginning of time , he is going to get a great following when he starts to sell directly
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Great chapter, so now he can have a fully equipped operation to sell produce
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Awesome chapter, his father will never change, it is always take ,take and more take, he wants everything, he will never give his son the credit he deserves, Lucinius is way more wiser than his brother, I hope he learns from him. The villa is going really well, Apollo is definitely looking after them
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Awesome chapter, his father is more than pig headed he is an abnoxious idiot , karma has obviously not finished with him yet
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Great to have the family together again , his father it would seem is reaping his rewards from the Karma God, a lifetime of payback,
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Awesome chapter, Apollo is definitely looking after them, he is helpful to the entire farm and it's inhabitants
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Great chapter, I like how when a problem pops up he tackles it with vigour to get a resolution, his brother is slowly getting to grips with how he operates
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Awesome chapter, I think that he will be caught and sold as a slave again, time will tell, his brother is in for an education.
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Great chapter, I agree he can go ,the old saying the grass is not always greener on the other side, he may see his folly, his father is still an ass
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Great chapter, it seems everyone is on his side and helps where they can, prosperous is on the cards
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Great chapter, excellent opening of the Cameron everything is going great guns , Merry Christmas 🎄 to them
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Great chapter, so the visitors went home and he rapidly increased his household staff, Apollo is definitely looking after them
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Awesome chapter, so his father got an excellent slap by the God Apollo, karma is best served ice cold, I wonder what the letter says
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Great guns , lots of progress on all fronts , soon he will be in his rebuilt villa
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Everything is definitely looking better now that the well has been discovered, with help all around, things can move along rapidly, his father is not going to be happy when he finds out but that however is a moot point,
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Awesome chapter, so they made some progress, at least the foundation of the villa , I think that he is about to discover something great soon , his father is at the moment an non entity, exciting times ahead
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Awesome chapter, freedom at last, his father is a horrible person but he will no doubt reap his rewards, I think that with his grandfather's help and everyone else he is going to make a monumental success of the old battlefield
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Interesting chapter, so dad is full of crap but grandfather is helpful and I think will help Lucinius a world of opportunity has opened
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Interesting chapter, so we have a a little Einstein around very imaginative
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Some father's, well they are in name only , kids who outshine their fathers are often looked down on by their fathers and often treated like trash
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Interesting chapter, time to go to war
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Interesting chapter, a different story to start this new journey,
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An awesome end to this excellent story, I am going to miss the two chapters every day, but nonetheless thanks for such an inspiring and emotional story, it just shows how screwed up the people on this planet are.
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Great development, and awesome that "The Cameron" opened on time it sounds fantastic, I wonder who the VIP guests are
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Great chapter, another Holiday, I suppose you have to give kids the tools to let go but home is always going to be the Sanctuary
