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    Mistakes: 1.6

    Interesting chapter, strange developments, going on around them , I wonder what is going to happen next,
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    Chapter 15

    Great chapter, things are definitely getting together with everyone's help , Charlie did what he could given the time limits, I hope he keeps the secret, I think that he will definitely be back soon
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    Chapter 14

    Great chapter, Charlie has been a really good help getting the chev going, definite progress around he estate, I am sure there is still a fair bit of things and places to find on the estate
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    Chapter 13

    Interesting chapter, things are going well with the estate, soon more animals will take up residence
  5. Wow that was a bit of a curve ball, getting hold of that manual, is going to be an eye opener no doubt, he will learn more than he expected. Interesting times ahead
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    Mistakes: 1.5

    Interesting chapter, so they albeit accidentally, they could make quite a team , the trio , sensing, flying and beating
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    Embers 1

    Awesome start to this New story, sad how he arrived at this point but some people are just idiots, and welcome back to entertain us with this new journey
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    Chapter 12

    A smooth start to this semester, I wonder how soon a bump in the road will occur,
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    Chapter 11

    Great chapter, so they helped themselves to some chickens, but more to add to the residents of the estate
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    Mistakes: 1.4

    Interesting chapter, I like that he decided to tie himself down to practice, Tasha hashed her entry just a little bit
  11. Oh sh*t drama is definitely on the way and It looks like an evil alpha is there to cause trouble , handy to have Vinnie around for take outs from anywhere they like
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    Chapter 10

    Great chapter, the boys are going to be adopted into the family, all systems go for the next semester
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    Adam's Apple

    Jesse needs to taken down a few notches on his ladder , preferably by crashing down to ground level
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    Chapter 9

    Great progress on the barn I would think that they will need another source of heat in the winter , chicken 🐓 could be great meat and eggs , seems like a good idea
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    Mistakes: 1.3

    Awesome chapter, sad but uplifting and inspiring to see that he is trying to get over his rape ,however he will no doubt find help
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    Chapter 8

    Great chapter and getting things done is good therapy to move things along , the barn should be great when it is done
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    Chapter 7

    Great chapter progress on getting the barn repaired, I am glad that they will move In. It gives them way more privacy and it will save them money, plus it will feel like home to them
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    Mistakes: 1.2

    Interesting chapter, a meeting of like minds and souls, I hope that he keeps fine without too much drama
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    Chapter 5

    No it just seems that the two boys just want to be there. It is almost like home
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    Chapter 6

    Interesting chapter it would seem that the boys will be great helpers around the house
  21. Well talk about getting conflicting information, no wonder he is somewhat confused, his mentor is a bastard but I hope that they get to understand each other without getting any more derogatory to each other
  22. Wow interesting chapter, well he has decided that he is in so I hope he has the guts to see it though
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    Chapter 5

    Great chapter, I think that the two of the farm could end up moving in interesting times
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    Mistakes: 1.1

    He is going to have to get his father taken down a notch or two, plus what a way to brings bad people down
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    Chapter 4

    Great progress in getting the house ready to really live in it. I think there a few more surprises in store for him
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