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All's well bringing the old souls back together, it is almost like bringing things together for the end of their time , but I suppose we need friends who actually mean something to each to be there for each other, now to find Christian, he needs to pay his dues and pay he will, an interesting time in the gallery, I wonder when the guide will realise who he was guiding, interesting times ahead
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Family Life: homophobia rules
mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: homophobia rules
Well Colin's brother and mother can go straight to h#ll no pit stops or deviations , lets see miles do all his mothers running around and be at her back and call , I serious doubt he could do it long term , without getting angry and refusing, I can see his wife leaving him with the children, then the 2 bigots can live together, what fun and games , but Colin and Owain are made for each other, plus they have a lot in common with each other, a perfect relationship- 18 comments
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Well the young priest certainly felt the wrath of GG, plus all the souls , I doubt he will try such a stunt against, he will get a personal rain shower alk over again till he learns a very hard lesson , and pierre is home from home , a really good chapter
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A great ending, it had it all justice, karma and love , a really good story from start to finish , so next story please
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Interesting start , the undercurrent is looming very large , it seems just about ready to break free, weird dynamics between the gang
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Somehow I can't see Owain being a floozy , a handsome hunk yes floozy no, but it was about time Colin told them where the train stop was and he got off there and they could quite simply go to h#ll , I am proud he finally had the balls to tell them off , I think the fallout could minor or earth shattering, his brother must get over himself and accede to his mother's demands or also tell to do it herself or move to a retirement village where she can pretend to be queen again,( Ha Ha ha)
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Christian and co are going to be paying a big price for trying to steal from Pierre, all hell to pay and pay they will. Pierre has realised that he is part of the family finally,
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Well finally the rooster has come home to roost , he was, whichever one has used up all his options , he slipped up badly, regardless both are guilty as sin , the correct one is in jail the, the other one who is injured will join his brother, in life in prison or death , this story just gets better with each chapter
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Interesting chapter, who are the evil dogs trying to upset the cart , I think that they have underestimated the family clan of Armand and Colin , no one screws with this tight-knit family, al, sorts of hell will descend on them , and rightly so
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Well interesting family get-together, it seems everyone is quite happy, he certainly helped the brothers, better safe than sorry, interesting driver, he got everything he hoped for except spending the night, I hope no hiccups during the wedding, a really great chapter
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A great meal, an awesome conversation plus great sex , he just needs to chill a bit more and I think it is about time he told his mother to can it, he is no longer her slave , if she can't handle the house she should move to an old peoples home where she can have everything done for her. She no doubt would throw a wobbly but she has emotionally abused him for years, it needs to just stop. I look forward to them going away together it can only spell good things
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A great family breakfast, everyone enjoyed it, but they all got on with their daily lives, now Pierre is a totally different ballgame, we will have to wait with baited breath,
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Well some development after all, however I don't think that they will be successful very fast there will no doubt be one speed hump after another but they are becoming very relentless, they can now continue bonking to their hearts content
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Well his sister has just proved that she has not changed one bit of anything, she must have pretended to want get together and put the past aside , she seriously needs her head read , she is treating her son just like their father treated them and him in particular
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Oh hell, double the trouble, double the murders , he has hit onto something that I don't think others have realised, I hope all hell breaks loose on both twin brothers, a very interesting chapter
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As the saying goes from the pot into the fire , this just gets more crazy as time goes on , I think that soon the fire is going to hit back and spit out the piece that does not fit in
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We'll talk about a blind shock , Pierre certainly got into it , but dad's being dad's saved the day , Armand is in charge wherever he is he has protected his children everywhere, a good chapter
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Bingo a "hole" in one , success for both of them no doubt, his demanding mother can also go to hell and pay someone to do her dirty work, Colin is most definitely not her slave, a great chapter
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What an odd situation, I don't know if I would go down that road , but different strokes for different blokes , good luck is all I can say
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Chapter 1 - An Accidental Meeting
mikedup commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 1 - An Accidental Meeting
Interesting chapter, he certainly got what he was, but he got so much more than he expected, I somehow don't think he will let it go as a once only a one time event, I think that Skye is going to come up well short- 14 comments
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A smell a herring here , there is far more to this than what we read. Let's hope the cops are on the ball , a very well planned murder
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I like that his memory is still okay, a few lapses are all about life , he still has a heart full of love to give and give he does , all his children have learned his life lessons and are passing them on to next generation,
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Great that they have assessed what want and great that they decided nothing a one date wonder but something that can be developed over time
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Jitters like a first date
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Well progress on both home fronts , they seem to have clicked well very well indeed
