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I have just finished doing fast read of the entire story, bloody brilliant, I was just wondering when the next chapter will be posted online
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A very good trip , they all enjoyed it, Armand always seems to have been a secret helper wherever needed , he is the angel which he paints over the entrances of the various homes , they all had an extended break but unfortunately life has to carry on , the boys will no doubt want to go fishing soon
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A really good uplifting chapter, it was really very beautifully described, the home now has a guiding angel to look after the boys , now onto the next stop
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Another awesome chapter, Louise obviously recognised herself, and she and David I think have finally bonded , all over a really good start to ti European holiday
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Well I think that "drama" is this families middle name the youngest always wants the spotlight unfortunately David fell right in the middle but he is making progress, Louise will I imagine settle down and received whatever is given , just like everyone else, I have lost track, how many children do Armand and Colin now have , I have lost count, next stop Europe and holidays
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Awesome chapter, Pat has come home but nearby, she can visit but leave whenever she needs to, I think that is an awesome way to go, David will blossom into a smart young man , he is making great strides, all is well at home
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Well definitely congratulations on your new home from home , it was awesome that the entire family arrived for breakfast, David is making real progress all round, a happy home is a healthy home, now onto the next wedding,
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A very merry Christmas to all in the the story, a good board exam , wedding, and a very emotional David , this chapter had it all without forgetting GG, everyone has a great time , it is the season to be jolly and they were most definitely jolly
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Well done, this was a really feel good chapter, it looks like David has not just survived but thrived on the love and care from all the boys and not forgetting Armand,Colin and GG , he can only go forward and thrive
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I think if she treated me like that I would have dropped her on her back end and politely told her to completely f*CK off permanently and stay the hell away from me
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Wow no surprises with the 2 faced b*tch Shannon, he should have just put her down but he is going to be doing well by being a great friend with a lot of blokes , and looking forward to the next book , I really enjoyed this escapade, and thanks for this story
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Happy Thanksgiving, well Armand need to pack a huge plate for himself so the children can share off his plate , moving his studio will cause some disruption but I think after a few disturbances it will settle down and be "normal" once again, David is making good progress, which is good , a happy home is a good home
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A great chapter, the kids had a good time fishing, they get to do things that children with families do , here the family is just so much bigger , it is almost like they have a better end of the stick , the family is growing not just in size but in closeness, the dream was not a good one, but it did show moving is not always a good move or option
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A happy shopping expedition, always dreaded but necessary plus it eventually results in a great time had by everyone. David is making progress by great leaps, his new brothers are definitely helping him along, GG was very helpful again
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Another awesome chapter, a really good get together with the 3 of them , a bonding that was just great , the group of 6 always bond when they are together, this they had a wicked groupie , they all came out unscathed , at least Seth is making really good progress, now onwards to the future for the 6 of them
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I am really glad that David made such tremendous progress , I think that the encouragement of all at home gave him the needed help , he can only go forward from here ,
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Another awesome chapter, so Jackson tried one last time and in doing so totally f**ked up his life , his 2 brain cells just did not connect , but that is what karma does , I am glad that he and Corey connected so very well, and progress on all the fronts at home , I am happy that the brothers have really reconnected, so all is well for the moment,
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Interesting chapter , I hope that young David recovers , whoever's at fault had better be worried I don't think GG will take kindly to him , he deserves all kind of hell to rain down on him , however Armand has now got a new project,and a new son who is going to need a whole lot of help
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I suppose that the boys getting hitched was always in the background but this has suddenly appeared in the foreground, but such is life , I am glad GG gave a helping hand when it was needed, and welcome back
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So the triplets have gone away for a break , it would seem that it is well deserved and they are making the most of it I think that it is a worthy place to make the change to convert , he will not make mistake by doing that, a nice calm chapter, I wonder what drama will hit the fan soon
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Well the bitch really did lay charges, her husband seemed not to agree with her and put a definite stop to her pathetic actions , it enabled her husband and grandson to be able to meet whenever, the grandfather really understood what his daughter wanted , but in the end they successfully ended together and grannies attempt to slander him ended up being nothing, so they have ended living happily ever after
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"I'm Taking You Home"
mikedup commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "I'm Taking You Home"
Finally, the grandmother is an absolute b*tch, she hopefully doesn't get her way , I think that Sam needs to get the upper hand and hit her with a slander lawsuit before she can lay any charges and also get a restraining order against her from David , David is home let's hope it stays that way , this was quite an "explosive" chapter -
Chapter 4 - Truth and Lust.
mikedup commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Truth and Lust.
Wow, finally they connected, max could be a bit of a spanner in the works ,but I hope not ,at least nate has lost a lot of his anger , I am glad Chris is doing better , he definitely has his brother's interest in his heart- 22 comments
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Interesting chapter, they have reached a point from which I doubt that they can come back from , what happens in the morning will define what happens going forward
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Chapter 3 - Things Break
mikedup commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Things Break
Wow this was quite an explosive chapter, just about everything blew up , I never expected Chris to have an episode but looking back his powder keg finally exploded, Corey has eventually calmed down, I imagine that they will be on a new page going forward.- 27 comments
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