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Interesting chapter, he really needs to learn t his builders crack show some more I wonder what would happen if he felt a hand on his crack 😂
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Interesting chapter, some more information, I think that the previous lawyers and their father were up to no good , it will be very interesting to see what another lawyer can uncover , he is definitely lusting over his builder ,
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Well the flip side of the coin, this family are like leeches tolerant maybe but clueless, use and abuse the single brother who is so far in the closet that you would need a miners rescue team to find him in there , a very interesting chapter
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Their father and his cronies were absolute ba#tards how can a person be so absolutely horrible to his own children, and no doubt their mother was in on it, Willingly or otherwise, it feels good to slander the dead
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An interesting start filled with drama, heartache, help and a bit of hate , a great chapter
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Well it started out great then exciting stuff then oh hell what happened
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I can really understand Carl 's paranoia, his father was absolutely horrible to him , I am surprised that he did not meet with an unfortunate accident inside , but people like his father have unclaimed favours so I cannot blame Carl, he will have to let go at some stage, however I duthi k it will be anytime soon, I wonder if GG can assist, as she knows everything
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A very interesting chapter, it made me think that, Pierre is wanting to show his fathers that they saved him and that he has made a success of his life , and he needs their approval of where he is in his life , a place he would not have been had it not been for them , GG is making herself known among their children and grandchildren, the continued link from the past continues into the future, and as such that is secure, a thought provoking chapter.
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Another awesome chapter, I had a sense of doom when I started to read this chapter, but you very skilfully diverted us away , a great legacy having the apartments built, a just continuos event in their lives,
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A very entertaining story, I would have hated the 2 women who made his life hell, I am glad he reconnected with his dad , an awesome story, thanks,
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Interesting chapter, a strange but very good way to share the day with someone, a new tradition started by Pierre, one which will continue, all the loose ends are coming together, the circle seems to be closing rather fast, all well that ends well
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Ah the circle of life, it starts with a dot and then starts moving, it will have a few bumps and squiggly bits , but it still runs in a circle, unfortunately one never knows when it decides to be complete and it surprises most everyone when it completes. We start life, we live , we die . That is the inescapable fact of life , Armand has realised that he and Colin are getting to the end , hopefully sometime in the future, their legacy though will live forever through their deeds , family and grandchildren, a truly wonderful chapter
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Absolutely correct, reading this chapter makes me realise that we have lived the complete lives of quite a few people from their early years to their final passing, it has often been filled with fun ,love, hurt, respect and faith, we celebrate their lives and remember when they are no longer with usm through all of this we realise that we are also getting into the ends of our own lives , that is the fact of life we cannot escape from that reality
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My condolences to them , but Roger was expecting to go hence his smile ,he is with his friends, life carries on, a sad but uplifting chapter
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I very good chapter, Colin was wise to construct a mausoleum, a way to keep the family together forever, the gang has expanded but the the original core are slowly departing this world to rest for eternity, a sad but thoughtful chapter
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A little bit of a sad chapter, time stops for no-one it is a relentless march towards the end of life for each of us , Roger no doubt will pass on very soon , Armand is realising that he is getting into the older age of his and Colin's lives , that they have made an impact on many people is not in any doubt, the children really know how to lift the spirits of everyone, an awesome chapter
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Awesome chapter, he will certainly be missed but by writing a book he will be immortalised a really great way to remember him , James will grow to be his own person with new recipes to leave for the next generation, times is moving on for all
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Wow an awesome story, you had me hooked from the beginning, all I can say poor Angus, spending 80 years wondering around, it is just sad , but he is now at rest , they can now enjoy their home
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Another amazing chapter, first they had an awesome day fishing, everyone had fun a great evening meal and then we get sad news , very late sad news , Marcel's wishes for a quick burial was done , so mourning in their own way , just celebrate his life I think
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Another amazing chapter, some more surprise guests they seemed to enjoy the day , let's hope none of them had nefarious intentions, like the previous set , the kids had another awesome day , all's well that ends well
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I absolutely agree , there are some really awesome stories on the list , I admit some I missed but it will give me a lot more stories to read , so thank you for the suggestions
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Congratulations and welcome to the family, so Pierre finally has a permanent home, I think that, that on its own will make a huge difference in his mind , as now he knows he cannot be sent onto the streets again, this was definitely a feel good chapter, I wonder when the group is going to visit , I hope it goes well.
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Well about time the "high and mighty" cook got caught out, what a self centered b*tech, she deserves whatever comes her way .I hope that prison food will be worse than she was feeding the children, the family had got to the stage where another adoption is going to be great with a good addition to the family
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A great chapter, I suppose the gremlin in the mix must be caused by "AI", regardless a happy chapter, good news to the latest addition to the family, and great meal enjoyed, no doubt we will find out what mark's mom thought of everything
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Oh dear, There is going to be drama and mayhem in the the home kitchen , those chefs will never know what has hit them, it will be a case of if fit in or fit out , like get the hell out of here , the boys will no doubt be adopted, I think if anything GG will assist if necessary, but the family will expand, and of course arrow is still a mystery to a lot if people,
