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mikedup

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  1. Interesting chapter, this is really getting Very entertaining and intense, he is certainly proving to be an very capable elf I hope that he can contain his power
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    Shad Chapter 16

    Excellent chapter , I am sad that it ended but I am glad that they cought his stepfather, I am looking forward to reading your next story
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    First Surge 3

    Awesome chapter, I think that he will need to contain his power and magic before it becomes dangerous, I can't wait for the next chapter
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    Shad Chapter 15

    Excellent chapter, he is definitely very versatile as a musician, I wonder what is going to happen next
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    First Surge 2

    Brilliant chapter, he certainly dealt with the rogues effectively, really easy disposable so no one to carry any information to the rogues, this is really getting exciting
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    Shad Chapter 14

    Excellent chapter, seems that anyone who was someone important was there, makes one wonder what is going to happen next
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    Reflection

    Awesome background to this New story, I cannot wait for more chapters
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    First Surge 1

    Amazing chapter, this just keeps getting better and better, I think soon he will be able to bring the rogues down so much easier than ever before
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    Shad Chapter 13

    Awesome chapter, we always knew the stepfather was trouble, now only he is in far deeper trouble, interesting and disturbing times ahead
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    Battle Lines 3

    Another excellent chapter, he is certainly getting more power it is intriguing that he is able to bring more from the elf kingdom
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    Battle Lines 2

    Brilliant chapter, so the fighting has began the rogues are in for a very nasty surprise, Chris is certainly honing his skills in magic
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    Late Lunch

    Awesome chapter, this story is definitely entertaining you just give enough to keep us eagerly waiting for the next chapter, nasty but so good
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    Battle Lines 1

    Awesome chapter, it would seem that the Intruders knew that there could be visitors, interesting times ahead very shortly
  14. Awesome chapter, he is certainly getting better at all things magical.
  15. Awesome sparing session, both seemed to have learned a thing or 2. I think that August is going to be more than surprised
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    Holiday Cheer 3

    Interesting chapter, things are definitely progressing, now he can travel and bring things back with him
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    Holiday Cheer 2

    Awesome chapter, Chris s certainly a horny bugger getting turned on by so many hotties , I suppose anyone would, going to university is going to be an interesting experience
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    Holiday Cheer 1

    Excellent chapter, exciting times for Leo, our young prince is certainly going to be doing a lot of traveling soon
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    Sunrise Surf

    Interesting chapter, a good start to this new story,
  20. Brilliant chapter, more revelations, it seems that they could have their own council of all beings
  21. Brilliant absolutely brilliant, this chapter was certainly inspiring wow I think that he is more powerful than most people around him
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    Meet the Family 3

    This has been an interesting and amazing chapter, this just keeps getting better and better. I check twice a day updates.
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    Shad Chapter 12

    Excellent chapter , I hope that all goes well with the new school,
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    Meet the Family 1

    Awesome chapter, great meeting the family, can't wait for the next Day
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    Days of Calm 3

    Awesome chapter, more and more information is getting released, lots of sparks flying around.
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