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Awesome chapter, seems that all is set to begin the adventure
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Excellent chapter, wow I never expected things to move forward so quickly, exciting times ahead
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Awesome chapter, I like that they are going to be helping a crowd of forgotten People, interesting times ahead
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Awesome chapter, it looks like they are going to have some fun aboard the ship
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Excellent chapter, I hope that all goes well,
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Brilliant chapter, it would seem that it is time to kick some serious butt
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Excellent chapter, this was certainly a very intense chapter, it would seem that we are in for an all out war I hope that they get hold of Gustav, he deserves to be fried a little by little ,
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Awesome chapter, sad but necessary, I hope that he is going to be rewarded
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Awesome chapter, looks like everything is going to be happening rapidly and a lot more drama and fighting ahead
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Awesome chapter, most informative
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Drama yet again I wonder if they are thinking that they need a break, another awesome chapter
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Excellent chapter, I foresee far more trouble from Gustav than we maybe expecting
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Welcome back, this has been another awesome chapter, Gustav is an absolute basta#d I hope that he doesn't find out that they now know , very interesting times and I imagine some serious battles ahead
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Awesome chapter, he is certainly taking control, I wonder if anything will go wrong
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Interesting chapter, and better intriguing start to this New story, I hope he does recover and gets his mobility back
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Wow, excellent chapter this I did not expect, this is getting better and better, I can't wait for more, Dorian really imposed his will without even trying, he took charge when it was needed.
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Wow excellent chapter, I think that Gustav is from the dark side , I am glad that Victor allowed him into his mind, I think that a major battle is on the cards
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Excellent chapter, wow easy way to get a better body , I hope that he clears the air with Victor and I hope that the idiot gets disposed of.
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Awesome chapter and a great story, I hope that you have a New story online soon
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Interesting chapter, and sad at the same time Gustav is a conniving c#@t he obviously drugged Victor I hope that they sort it out very,very rapidly,
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Awesome chapter, clever you left us with big tug of our heart strings, he is certainly meeting more and more people from his side of the family.
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Interesting chapter, very informative about the background of Dorian
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Awesome chapter, a little bit of a oops landing in the wrong place , but I am sure he will learn really fast and get to the right place next time
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Interesting chapter, when you need to be a hardass you can be with excellent results
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Oh sh*t drama in paradise, it can be easy or it can be extremely difficult
