mikedup
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Brilliant chapter, gold well I never expected that and I hope that it is good what a way to get life off to good start . Excellent
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Another brilliant chapter, I love the way they constantly turn down hustlers. I can see why they are traveling before the arrival of the child/ten.
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Excellent chapter, more intriguing than before
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Brilliant chapter, more drama ahead but I am certainly looking forward to more entertainment
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Awesome chapter, I am glad that they are getting to know each other better
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Excellent chapter, you certainly know how to keep us on the edge of our seats
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Excellent chapter, well it seems that he has taken over the role of Dad interesting times ahead
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Great start to this new story , it seems that we are in for an interesting ride, and anither cliffhanger sneaky but I love it , thanks again
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Excellent chapter, I am glad that Richie is acting just like an adult, although it must be very scary for both if them , I take my hat off to them , in like the progress on the house
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Brilliant chapter
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Brilliant chapter, undercover agents, deception the whole nine yards and then the humdinger with Richie, this chapter had it all, an absolutely awesome chapter
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Wow that got really intense really fast , this was a very good chapter, interesting times ahead
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Interesting no hiding. I am really enjoying this story, awesome chapter
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Excellent chapter. Wow proposing on national tv that will take some beating, are their kids not due sometime soon?,
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Jip I agree , things did most certainly get confusing towards the end if the chapter, but we will no doubt see what comes from this in the next chapter
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Excellent chapter, it's good to meet more family members,
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A really fantastic end to a really brilliant story, thanks for posting such entertaining stories I hope that there is another inspiring story online soon, thank you again
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Brilliant chapter, the family is finally together. 3 cheers to that
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Brilliant chapter, rally time to kick some butt
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WOW I never expected that curve ball , another excellent chapter, this just keeps getting better and better, congratulations are in order I think
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Finally they will become parents , I am absolutely happy for them and congratulations are definitely in order Carlos you certainly know how to keep us entertained. This has been and will no doubt continue to be an inspiring and exciting story. Thank you for anither awesome chapter
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Intrigueing chapter
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Awesome chapter, more drama he has a knack of sorting things out very rapidly
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Excellent chapter, It would seem that if is time again to kick butt, it looks like it is his lot in life to kick butt
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Awesome chapter, idiots are never far away, i almost want to add that some idiots should never be allowed to breed
