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  1. The reality is, all authors and artists only want one true thing: we all strive for someone to feel something from something we've created. And the validation that we receive from feedback via comments and/or reactions gives us the validation that someone has received something from something we've created. All stories have pieces of us authors, hidden, inside of them whether it's certain characters, certain scenes, etc. And by having others love those characters and scenes, they are secretly loving us, because, we are in them. If certain people do not like the thumbs up reaction, I simply rec
  2. Most of those are one shots to which case it's acceptable. As a writer, poet, and author, myself, I'm simply stating my personal literary opinion. Stay safe. Stay loving. God bless. I understand your viewpoint. Everyone's different. Everyone's hearts are different. Everyone's desires are different. And, how we respect one another ultimately defines us as people.🌟
  3. I'm going to have to formally disagree with you. Scotty Lynch has been introduced from the very beginning as a main character of the story for an important reason. And the reality is, I suppose you could say, it was Tristan's destiny to find someone for him. I believe the main characters of this story are not just Jesse and Tristan. That would very quickly become boring and useless as a story plot. That wouldn't be much of a story at all. I believe it's Jesse, Tristan, Scotty Lynch, and Artie. The foundation of a good story and a plot is at least four or more main characters in it otherwise th
  4. I mean, he was cute, sure...I'm not blind. But as I watched Artie shiver and wiggle and basically fall apart right in front of my eyes...I began to wonder if I was missing out on something all this time. Of course you did, you half-wit. Scotty Lynch is Com's best character ever created, besides Tanner, and I won't tolerate any excuses. but when Scotty grinned at him and asked, "Can I see more of the drawings in your notebook?" Com, you better stop writing cute sh++ like this, because, you're giving me heart palpitations.❀️ Love this story. Love this chapter
  5. Sascha has already technically shown Billy how he feels about him in Chapters 9 & 10, particularly, when he tries to kiss him and held his hand while they were alone on his bed. So, Billy knows that he's interested in him, or at least pretty gay for the most part. The question is, what happens to Sascha, now? Thank you for reading and your great feedbackπŸ’ŽπŸΈπŸŽ Here's an apple martini. Something I'm sure Billy's mom doesn't mind having once in awhile, whatsoever.πŸ˜’
  6. Your soul tells you that, because it's obvious Sascha is a lost soul in general. Billy is one of the only people who sees that and so do you. 🍎
  7. @Philippe Wow thank you so much for the exceptional examination of the chapter, relationships, and the overall plot of the story, itself. Wait till you see when they.... start unwrapping their Halloween candy 🍭🍫πŸ”₯
  8. You won the award on September 9th. Interesting, considering, that's my birthday. And, The Artful Dodger just so happens to be one of my favorite characters of all time.

  9. Chapter 13: ~How Do You Like Them Apples~ "Mmmmmmm." My teenage high school enemy said to my mother with a grin on his lips as we were all still standing around at one of my family's business tables up front of my orchard. "This cider is suuuuuuper good, Mrs. Irving! Best drink I've eveeeeerrrr had." He was so fake. UGHHHHH. The level of almost professional sarcasm made me wonder how he developed such a skill in the first place. It almost blew my mind how my own mother couldn't catch the inauthenticity in his voice & empty statements; well, technically, our cider WAS extre
  10. The Elements Flow with the Water. Blow with the Wind. Glow with Fire. Grow like the Earth. There was a reason for your birth. The Elements assist with death and rebirth. They kill and also grow new life for a reason. This happens every Season. No. You cannot stop them. Work with them. They will empower you. To yourself, and with these four gifts, always stay true. And, they will surround & ground you as you continue…
  11. Black Paper

    Adam's Apple

    "The Apple Doesn't Fall Far From the Tree" Now, why didn't I think of that!? Hehe. Fun Fact: I actually wrote this scene as I was sitting down in Chipotle with my sister getting ready to leave for Florida the other day. Inspiration hits at the weirdest times. πŸ™πŸ€³ I do not control it I simply just & must embrace it. Sorry for the delayed update my life has been kind of an up and down unwritten book of adventure. 🌟🌴
  12. Black Paper

    Adam's Apple

    Maybe, we can turn him into apple sauce and sell him at a bake sale.πŸŽπŸ˜’πŸ½οΈπŸ’•
  13. Chapter 12: ~Adam's Apple~ The next Monday was the day after my birthday celebration that my friends had attended. Later on that day, after Shannon & I both got out of school, my mother and father took us both to see our new orchard for the very first time. It was a nervous & jittery excitement that I felt in the inner parts of my belly as I sat in the back of our car next to Shannon during that entire car ride. I thought to myself; what if... What if I don't like it?? What if it's no where near as good as our old orchard was or had none of the magical feelings that it
  14. ~Destruction~ Blow it all away. Make it go away. Throw it all away! Destroy it all today. Right here. Right now. How? With your mind, You can DESTROY all of the things that are all unkind. Destruction is required for reproduction. Just, like the storm, You were born with reconstruction. You have the ability to create a new tranquility. You have the responsibility. You have invincibility. Make your own destiny. You do not have to be rich. All you need is a penny. And, with that seed, indeed,
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