Thanks tim It's fun to surprise people. There's a fun sense of satisfaction that my D/s poem is chapter 6 and brings my poetry word count up to 666
Thank you Michael. A privilege to meet you here.
The moon’s gentle glow begins its rise
As coyote in the distance howl at its full glory;
Candles of leather and cinnamon give off their scent
That’s carried on a light breeze around us.
You kneel before me and bow your head
As your hands clasp behind your back;
With a slight of your eyes you look to the side
And glimpse what you so desire.
I grasp it at both ends with steady hands
And feel the soft leather under my touch;
As I fix the strap aroun
Thanks Mogwhy. I still have to fight against the darkness at times, but at least it doesn't consume like it has in the past. Hugz
Thank you Chris
Thanks tim. I'm glad we're both still here! It felt good to write this knowing it's been 5 years since I wrote the poem I left as my final note that day. Hugz
When I originally wrote this, I found it was easier for people to read when they thought it was just fiction. Thank you, I'm glad I made it through as well. Hugz
This day I am five years strong
After the gift of a stranger’s breath
Returned life to my stilled body.
Having fought my way back
From the darkest recess of my mind;
To relearn how to live
And once again embrace life.
Each day I live is a reminder
Of that which I tried to end;
That through the darkness
And the demons that haunt,
Light can still find its way back in.
On August 8th, 2012, I attempted suicide and nearly s
This is a wonderful chapter, but I could easily say that about every chapter I've read. I know I'll be reading all this again, and probably again after that
I'm really enjoying this story! I planned to just read a couple chapters after finding this tonight and now 20 chapters in I still don't want to put it down for the night. I want to just hug and hold Daniel like Carlos does and also kind of want to hold Carlos too. Hopefully they can help each other.
Thank you everyone. It's a strange feeling since I last heard from his 2 1/2 years ago. Until I was told yesterday that he had died two years ago I was able to convince myself that I'd hear back from him someday even though I knew I wouldn't. When I finally read the words that he truly is gone, it hit hard.
I didn’t want to believe
But I guess I already knew
Since two and a half years of silence
Was a very ominous clue
Our writing brought us together
And us both being assholes made us friends;
Cancer may have taken you away
Though your memory for me never ends
There won’t be any fancy white wings or harp
As for your angle that just wouldn’t do
Instead you’ll have the powerful wings of a dragon
To let you soar in the sky through an
I can understand your feelings on this. JP/Sebastian effectively going free is complicated. Was it the correct decision given all the things he has done? Maybe not, but the decision was left to Aiden and he will be watching to make sure Sebastian stays honest. If someone only has one pet peeve in the story, I'll take that as I'm doing a decent job
Thanks for this Patrick. It's always fun for me to see the reactions and views of my readers. In a human world I would agree with you wholeheartedly and I respect your views. Since this takes place in a world with Lycan and packs structured similar to a wild wolf pack, that changes things a little. Jackie acted out as a wolf more than as a mother or human. Michael was a threat to the pack and as both mother of the offender and mate to the Alpha took the action her wolf felt was required to protect the pack. The trial was just a formality since it had already been decided that John would be ending Michael's life as soon as his trial concluded. Yes, Michael was sick and like a rabid animal, they must sometimes be destroyed.
Thanks Butcher. Aiden and Ethan could definitely stand on their own as Alphas due to how powerful they are, but for all that power they also have the compassion to go with it. They are willing to listen to anyone. They enjoyed meeting their new friends and are wanting to get to know them better. It gives them some insight into being Alphas when the time comes.