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You are such a wonderful writer to start with, but I think you've outdone yourself this time. Everything about this chapter seems perfect from the imagery to the emotion. Thank you for sharing this!!!
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That's what I finally thought as well. From setting the mood to taking care of the subs needs after the scene is finished.
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Thanks Jeff. Not really connected to the poem beyond both involving Dom/sub situations, but it did sort of give me an education into that side of myself. Thank you Chris.
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Thanks JayT. With some of the other thoughts I've had on this subject, I had to work on something that wasn't quite so dark. Thanks JP. Fortunately, I leaned a lot and found a few mentors in the Dom community because of him.
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Thanks JayT That was actually my thought when I started writing this. It was just going to be the center portion talking about how the sub is the one controlling me. His slow and safe word are commands to me, his limits are discussed before anything starts, I try to push him to his limit and bring his the pleasure he craves in whatever form that is (and yes I get my own in the process). When I wrote the other two, it just seemed right to combine them, though I did consider posting each one on it's own.
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I'm going to just grin and leave it there, boy Thanks Jeff. My confidence, yes, my ability... we'll see
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It was well into the first full summer of living on the streets and two months from my seventeenth birthday. Injuries I’d received on a job gone bad were finally healed up. A client at a cheap motel with an unexpected friend waiting in the room is always a risk and rarely ends well for me. It wasn’t the first time and certainly wouldn’t be the last something like that happened. Even being careful with what funds I had managed to save, I needing to earn some money, so it was back to how I had lea
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Beautifully done and so easy to picture. I think I could have some fun with this Thank you for the idea.
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Thank you JP I'll admit, I thought of you and tim as soon as I hit publish.
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Thanks tim It's fun to surprise people. There's a fun sense of satisfaction that my D/s poem is chapter 6 and brings my poetry word count up to 666 Thank you Michael. A privilege to meet you here.
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Thank you Mogwhy Thanks Chris
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Your chapters may be short, but this was just perfect!!
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The moon’s gentle glow begins its rise As coyote in the distance howl at its full glory; Candles of leather and cinnamon give off their scent That’s carried on a light breeze around us. You kneel before me and bow your head As your hands clasp behind your back; With a slight of your eyes you look to the side And glimpse what you so desire. I grasp it at both ends with steady hands And feel the soft leather under my touch; As I fix the strap aroun
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Thank you JP. Thank you Jeff
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Thanks Mogwhy. I still have to fight against the darkness at times, but at least it doesn't consume like it has in the past. Hugz Thank you Chris Thanks tim. I'm glad we're both still here! It felt good to write this knowing it's been 5 years since I wrote the poem I left as my final note that day. Hugz
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When I originally wrote this, I found it was easier for people to read when they thought it was just fiction. Thank you, I'm glad I made it through as well. Hugz
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Hugz and passes you the box of tissues
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This day I am five years strong After the gift of a stranger’s breath Returned life to my stilled body. Having fought my way back From the darkest recess of my mind; To relearn how to live And once again embrace life. Each day I live is a reminder Of that which I tried to end; That through the darkness And the demons that haunt, Light can still find its way back in. On August 8th, 2012, I attempted suicide and nearly s
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This is a wonderful chapter, but I could easily say that about every chapter I've read. I know I'll be reading all this again, and probably again after that
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I'm really enjoying this story! I planned to just read a couple chapters after finding this tonight and now 20 chapters in I still don't want to put it down for the night. I want to just hug and hold Daniel like Carlos does and also kind of want to hold Carlos too. Hopefully they can help each other.
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Just ran across this today. The first chapter is great and I'm looking forward to the rest.
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It sucks when kids have to grow up and stop being kids, before they actually stop being kids. Beautifully done!
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Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Mogwhy
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Thank you everyone. It's a strange feeling since I last heard from his 2 1/2 years ago. Until I was told yesterday that he had died two years ago I was able to convince myself that I'd hear back from him someday even though I knew I wouldn't. When I finally read the words that he truly is gone, it hit hard.
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I didn’t want to believe But I guess I already knew Since two and a half years of silence Was a very ominous clue Our writing brought us together And us both being assholes made us friends; Cancer may have taken you away Though your memory for me never ends There won’t be any fancy white wings or harp As for your angle that just wouldn’t do Instead you’ll have the powerful wings of a dragon To let you soar in the sky through an
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