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Hospital again? Hope he is going to be fine, that this is just part of the healing process. All in all things were looking up for Huon.
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What a great story and you do a great job of it also. What a turn of events in this chapter. I hope things only get better for Huon from now on. I thought it was going to come back and bite him when he left on his excursion, leaving hi ID. behind.
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I still can't figure out his problem with Sebastion. So he gets pissed because the Captain of the ship wants to have lunch with him! Maybe if he had that lunch, some things might have got explained to him. It is not a though Sebastion has threatened him in any way. I do not understand why Huon is having such a problem with Sebastion.
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Very interesting story concept. Can"t wait to see what happens.
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What a great ending to a story that could have ended very differently!! I will cherish this story for a long time to come. Great job Parker!!
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Perfect ending to Andy"s long painful journey!! Perfect ending to a lovely wedding, it could not have been a more perfect place for them to spend on their wedding night. What a coincidence they would run into Roger green cap on the way there, so Andy could put that part of his life to rest. Great story all around Parker. I am going to miss this story when it ends.
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Chapter 63 Apprehension
slapshot commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 63 Apprehension
How many twists and turns can this story take? Who is going to show up next? Just what they need for their wedding a bible thumping preacher outside their church. Can't wait to see how this all plays out. What about where Andy is the day after the wedding? Will have to wait for the answers!! -
With Andy's fears and worries it will be a wonder if he makes it to his wedding in a calm mental state. It was nice to meet with just about all Zanders family including their interesting opinions. Hopefully Andy can work out his fears of turning out like his Father!
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Jitters before a wedding are normal, but jitters before a gay wedding for 2 teen aged boys would be incredible. I am surprised that the media has not latched on this, or the students at school. This is big news even in this day and age. Although I am glad that things are going smoothly for them at this point. I hope Andy can dispel his feeling like he could turn into his hated Father and Uncle. Another great chapter Parker.
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Chapter 60 Are You Sure?
slapshot commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 60 Are You Sure?
Another great chapter Parker. All I can say is I am amazed they are going through with this wedding. I wish them all the best. -
A lot of unanswered questions finally get answered. It will be the icing on the cake when Andy and Zander finally get to meet Eustace again! This was a very heart warming chapter! I am sure Andy will be feeling a whole lot better about things now that a lot of his past burden has been unloaded. All he has to do now is get CPS out of his life. I also have a feeling this story is about to be wrapped up soon. This story has been very much in my thoughts the last while. Great writing Parker
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Wow!! What a time for Ambrose to show up, we all knew that his past would catch up to him sooner or later. I am surprised that everybody is taking the pending marriage so cooly, even the minister of the church understands the need for marriage even though they are so young. It will be up to a female Bishop to lend her approval of this event. Another great cliff hanger chapter Parker. Can't wait to see how everything works out for these boys.
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I wonder how Zanders parents are going to take this news? What a chapter of insecurities on both sides. I really did not see getting married as as a possible solution to his problem, what a left curve that was. Obviously Andy has researched it very well, so that with Zanders parents blessings it would end all the problems and start some new ones! Another great chapter Parker.
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Boy! I cannot believe how stupid these CPS workers are, but they are in a position to make Andys life miserable and they will not give up. The good news is that andy has a very good lawyer to help get him through this, He also has and is getting lots of support from his friends, Another great chapter Parker. Lots of drama ahead for sure!
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Chapter 54 Repercussions
slapshot commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 54 Repercussions
Bullying CPS worker, bully at school. These are the things Andy has run from in the past. Hopefully with everyone on his side, things will work out much better for him this time. Although bullies and hard headed case workers never give up and resort to dirty tactics. Another great chapter Parker and a left curve for sure. -
Sweet! Sweet! Sweet! Finally they show their love for each other in a most meaningful way, even with Andy's painful past. Another great chapter Parker. Hope all goes well at school now that Zander has pretty much been outed.
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Probably not the way Zander wanted to be outed by a fellow that was feeling bad for being kicked off his team for screwing some kid in the locker room. It is good to see his coach standing with him in regards to giving Andy swimming lessons! Andy is also getting along better with Monica lately too. It will be interesting to see how things go for them both at school, if this information gets around. Another great chapter Parker!
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Another great chapter Parker!! So many firsts for Andy, his life can only get better from here on in. Making new friends too.
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Another great chapter Parker. I was a bit surprised that Mr. Stevenson would grill Andy on his love life while taking driving lessons, when he needed to concentrate on the road. After all he was white knuckling it there for awhile. However that being said, it shows how far Andy has progressed, especially with his conversation with Zander when he phoned!
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Another great chapter Parker!! It was nice to see Andy pay tribute to Eustice by adding his name to his own. He is making great progress in the trust department as well.
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Another fantastic chapter Parker! It is good to see Andy finally being able to peel away painful actions of his past. When he gets that out in the open, then maybe his trust levels will rise. It was a heartfelt feeling when Zander came up with a plan to spare Andy the pain of taking swimming with the rest of his peers. Now that Andy has spoken to his Dr. O'Shea about the abuse he suffered from his Uncle Andy, He can eventually be dealt with by the law.. I guess that all remains in the rest of the story. Again, Great chapter.
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Chapter 47 Is This Normal?
slapshot commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 47 Is This Normal?
It is good that Andy is slowly peeling away the horrors of his past. It seems that Monica is still having problems dealing with the boys sexuality. The feeling of flight is still very much in his system although he has Zander to keep him grounded. It seems to be taking a long time to get a response from the authorities in Carlsberg, just hope they don't contact Uncle Ray to inform him of Andy's new home.Another great chapter Parker, can't wait to see how this all plays out! -
Geez Parker, after all the hurt, hiding and being lost you come up with the perfect chapter for Andy. Being Valentines day makes it perfect. One can only hope that Andy's life is going to be so much better. To find a Dr. counselor that he feels comfortable with is only going to make things better. Love this story!
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Another great chapter Parker. With his new life, Andy has to face his past again. Hopefully with Zanders help he will be able to get it all out. Of course a lot of it will be painful to relive, once he starts getting rid of it, he will be able to move on in his new life and relationship with Zander. I think the hardest part of his physical was having Zanders mom there.
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Finally, what everyone has been waiting for. A new beginning. I am of the opinion of some of the other commenters, it would be a shame to end this story with a quick chapter or two! There is a lot left to happen for that. Great writing! Great story. Please do not let it end.
