Dayne Mora
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Looks good. I rarely ever use the current site's search, but the new one looks a lot more user friendly and useful.
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I'm still trying to figure out Masatoshi's voice. He's a foreign exchange student, but it's not that apparent here. There's still much to be done in fleshing out this character, but I still enjoy writing for him.
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Eoinn is another spelling of "Ian" and is pronounced the same way. I'll work on getting their story going.
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Poor Stephen has no idea what has been wrought in his name. As for the boyfriend thing...I'd like to know myself.
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Glad you got a giggle out of the title. There'll more Toshi and Eoinn eventually.
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Thanks. Sorry that I'm killing you....
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I'm still trying to settle Toshi's backstory and how his story will progress, but yeah, I really want to continue with him.
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I've been listening to a lot of K-pop lately. English-speaking boy bands do nadda for me, but S Korea puts out some amazing talent.
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Thanks. My brother was my first friend, and is still my best friend (even if he is an ass), so filial bonds practically sacred to me. I have a hard time writing bad brothers (or sisters), except for Indie's stepbrothers--those fuckers can rot.
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It's not unheard of. As a housewife she's become totally dependent on her husband, and after the scare of being kicked out the first time, she might be willing to forgive more than she should. Not sure if that should excuse her behavior though...
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I need to give you more reading material, huh.
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Sorry about the delays . I'm chipping away at chapter 7 slowly but surely.
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Love me some Kitt likes. Johnny will hopefully shed some light on why they kept Cory in the dark (pun lols) in the next chapter. But, I think more time with his brothers will help (if they can stop baiting Connor or sharing embarrassing stories about little Cory long enough). As to the Victor/Victoria thing--it's more common than you'd think. I once had a pair of twins with similar names (the girl had the female version of her brother's name). Then there were the brothers with almost the exact same name except one started with "V" and the other with "B", and considering that they were Hispanic, there really wasn't a difference.
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Thanks, Ruslana. EPIC is just me experimenting and practicing. Eventually, I'll put together something I want to publish (maybe even a full re-write of EPIC that I feel less ashamed of ). And, Wolfie and Kitten are adorable af, no matter how much they might dislike being called such.
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Maybe the family skeletons saw that Cory came out of the closet and got jealous.... Elaine has some serious soul searching to do, no doubt about it.
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Connor Sr is a piece of work, isn't he. Thank goodness for Uncle Johnny.
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I love using Preston to give out all the nicknames I have to fight the urge to give out in real life. And, no one fights the urge to like Indie more than Preston. (BTW--you're my 200th review!!!!!)
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In Heaven Eoinn was supposed to be working with Masatoshi on their project, but the friends had taken a break when Eoinn became too fidgety and distracted to focus properly. So, instead of writing character analyses for their assigned character foils, they sat on Eoinn’s bedroom floor trading insults and trash talking with various anonymous Call of Duty players for the last hour-and-a-half. They'd just finished another round, and were about to que up for another when Eoinn cleared his throat
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<3 (thank you )
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You just know Lena Garza is trying as hard as she can not to race out there so she can knock some sense into Elaine Card.
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I'm still working on Elaine--something in her wants all of her boys back, but not sure how to get her there. And there's still the issue of whether Cory wants -her- back. Cory did get lost in the discussion, unable to hold his own when the whole series of events were all about him.
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As supportive as his friends and family are, no one even noticed when Cory didn't find his "stunt" as funny as they did. And the revelations may have done more harm than good. Johnny and the brothers have some serious clean up to do, or someone is going "full cholo."
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Counseling is a must, indeed. The Card brothers were damn lucky they had their mother's side to keep them from growing up to be dickheads (and sucking at football). They may have the name, and the looks, but they're definitely Frederick men.
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I think even the old lady across the street that always ratted Cory out would even take his side over his dad's.
