Dayne Mora
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Sorry, guys. I'm still working on stuff, but haven't been as diligent as I was when writing was the only thing keeping me sane. Also, I think I might have become chemically dependent on one (or more) of the meds I was using to treat my insomnia.
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So glad you're finally sharing this here! Like in Between, you build complex characters who find themselves in complex situations. It's still romance, and the erotic elements are still hot, but there's a little something extra that makes your stories so compelling. Stepping Out is one of my favorites, and I know it will find an appreciative audience on GA.
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You're in luck. Nier hit that point where I have to play through again in order to catch all the side quests and trophies, so more writing for y'all!
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Well yeah, just not the same game. I went ahead and got myself Nier: Automata while I was picking up Final Fantasy XV.
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Good thing all my controllers are cordless!
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GA's Newest Promising Author: LitLover
Dayne Mora commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
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Wait, Kitten or the kitten?
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About 1k words typed and who knows how many handwritten. I've been kinda side-tracked by another video game
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Wild Card – Chapter 7 – Let’s Leave Everyone Hanging Connor stood up to go after Cory, but I was right on him, grabbing his shoulder to pull him back. “What the ever-living-fuck was that?” “Dude, I have no idea why you’re on my fucking ass.” He shook me off. “But, you need to stand down so I can talk to my brother.” “You kidding me?” My voice continued to rise as I ranted. “Drive halfway across the motherfucking country, just to tell a guy that his dad fucking hates him and a
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Lemme do another read through and I'll post the next chappy.
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As this was more Ryan's story than Erik's, it makes sense that Ryan's character would be more developed. I kept thinking as I read this chapter about how there so needed to be some kind of Hail Mary HEA in there somewhere, but I think this ending is much more satisfying. Sure, readers would love to see this work out for them, but Ryan is right, there's too much of their relationship tied up in their "art" that it would be way too hard to tease out those remaining bits of artifice. Ryan is in a much healthier place and you can see that even though he hasn't found the love of his life yet, he'll get there. Would be nice to see him find it, but I think there's more to see with Erik's side of the story and his journey post-Ryan.
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Looks good. I rarely ever use the current site's search, but the new one looks a lot more user friendly and useful.
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I'm still trying to figure out Masatoshi's voice. He's a foreign exchange student, but it's not that apparent here. There's still much to be done in fleshing out this character, but I still enjoy writing for him.
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Eoinn is another spelling of "Ian" and is pronounced the same way. I'll work on getting their story going.
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Poor Stephen has no idea what has been wrought in his name. As for the boyfriend thing...I'd like to know myself.
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Glad you got a giggle out of the title. There'll more Toshi and Eoinn eventually.
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Thanks. Sorry that I'm killing you....
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I'm still trying to settle Toshi's backstory and how his story will progress, but yeah, I really want to continue with him.
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I've been listening to a lot of K-pop lately. English-speaking boy bands do nadda for me, but S Korea puts out some amazing talent.
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Thanks. My brother was my first friend, and is still my best friend (even if he is an ass), so filial bonds practically sacred to me. I have a hard time writing bad brothers (or sisters), except for Indie's stepbrothers--those fuckers can rot.
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It's not unheard of. As a housewife she's become totally dependent on her husband, and after the scare of being kicked out the first time, she might be willing to forgive more than she should. Not sure if that should excuse her behavior though...
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I need to give you more reading material, huh.
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Sorry about the delays . I'm chipping away at chapter 7 slowly but surely.
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Love me some Kitt likes. Johnny will hopefully shed some light on why they kept Cory in the dark (pun lols) in the next chapter. But, I think more time with his brothers will help (if they can stop baiting Connor or sharing embarrassing stories about little Cory long enough). As to the Victor/Victoria thing--it's more common than you'd think. I once had a pair of twins with similar names (the girl had the female version of her brother's name). Then there were the brothers with almost the exact same name except one started with "V" and the other with "B", and considering that they were Hispanic, there really wasn't a difference.
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Thanks, Ruslana. EPIC is just me experimenting and practicing. Eventually, I'll put together something I want to publish (maybe even a full re-write of EPIC that I feel less ashamed of ). And, Wolfie and Kitten are adorable af, no matter how much they might dislike being called such.
