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Dayne Mora

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  1. Dayne Mora

    Alpha Challenge

    It does appear that way. Maybe chapter 7 will make things alright again.
  2. Dayne Mora

    Alpha Challenge

    A handful of the Literotica readers complained about how much screen time Lola got in chapter 5, but she's too much fun to leave out. Man, they're going to hate chapter 7.
  3. Dayne Mora

    Alpha Challenge

    Thanks, Hunty-kins.
  4. Dayne Mora

    Alpha Challenge

    How could they not be? And how could Connor and 'Rain not get into it?
  5. I figured y'all wouldn't kill me over that cliffy!
  6. Thanks =^.^=
  7. Cory has assembled quite the assortment of friends, lovers and brothers. I had originally intended for Indie to be a close friend for Efrain (with whom he sometimes exchanged drunken bjs), but they ended up just being two dudes who live together. I think Kitten and Yorkie have brought them closer though.
  8. Yes, it is about damn time the brothers showed up. As for the rest, it's starting to look like pigs will fly before they get to that point!
  9. Dayne Mora

    Alpha Challenge

    Wild Card – Chapter 6 – Alpha Challenge “So, this is the guy who got our little Cory in trouble.” I stepped out and shut the door behind me, staring down the largest of the three, in all his Mossy Oak camo and shit-kicker boot glory (was he going fucking deer hunting or some shit after this?), as he fucking smirked at me. Seen enough of this fucker’s face to know I was looking at my boyfriend’s oldest brother. And, I got his Cory in trouble? Oh, hell no. “Don’t know what the fuck you’re
  10. The previews before Moana included one for Monster Truck. It's a simple premise really--monster trucks, with real monsters in them. B figured if that's all it took to get a movie greenlit, he aught to make a go of it himself. I'm not going to discourage him. If they can make a kids' movie about tentacle monsters getting freaky with 4x4s, then who am I to judge? But, I should have known how the drive home would go... "Hey, I have another story idea for you--monster trucks that have real monsters in them. But they're also gay. You may need to work in some kind of hook for your audience. Maybe the drivers are all werewolves, who are also gay." And if that wasn't bad enough.... "Remember that one weird story you were telling me about where the one guy has a hemipenes?* Well, some trucks have hemis, so...." So, keep a lookout for my next story, Must Love Trucks, an m/m/t** tale about a cute little twink who struggles with his affections for a hunky truck-driving alpha werewolf and the monster under his hood. Vroom, vroom! (Still trying to figure out how to work in that hemipenes, though.) *Yes, there is a m/m shifter erotica in which the bottom has two cocks. Don't ask me how that works. **male/male/truck
  11. As intensifying adjective rather than verb.
  12. A gay Leisure Suit Larry type game could be funny.
  13. As most of my conversation with my spouse go, we hit weird territory again. This time, it was fursonas. Which led to the following: Me: I just realized something--I gave all but one of my characters fursonas. B: Oh yeah. Me: Everyone, except Indie. Still can't decide on one for him. B: I told you already--he's fucking Harrison Ford. Is Harrison Ford even an animal? ......don't answer that.
  14. Drastic times call for drastic measures. They obviously have something to say, and are not going to let Cory ignore it.
  15. At least this isn't as bad as my last cliffie! I unwittingly put some of my brother's brashness and assholeness into Cory's brothers, so they're going to irritate others, even when they mean well. Maybe I should let Lola have at 'em. Speaking of which, my original concept for Lola was to have her act like a complete demon for Efrain and Indie (maybe even Gio), but be so angelic around Preston and Cory that she has them totally snowed. Of course, this plan crashed and burned when it got to the cat litter flung all over the bathroom floor. Cleaning it up would have been too out-of-character for Efrain, so it would be obvious to Cory that his kitten is a little imp.
  16. Thanks, Luxxy! Indie is as in denial as Preston--both men think the other guy is completely out of his league. The other issue here is that Indie has only been in one long-term relationship, and so he doesn't really know how to do casual (which is the flipside of Efrain's problem), which is going to confuse the hell out of any guy.
  17. Cory might be in for it when those deleted messages catch up to him. As to his brothers, Daddy's little hell beast will be the least of their worries.
  18. I dunno. I think Shawn was a little too out of his element to have as much agency. Going from being the BIG guy to just an insignificant nothing will make anyone become scared and passive.
  19. Dayne Mora

    Chapter 19

    Adrian is just... He actively pursued Zac--secretly touching him, coming on to him in the bathroom, showing off for him--then ran at the first sign of trouble. It was, and still is, all about what Adrian wants, with no concern for Zac. Even their first sexual encounter was one-sided, with Adrian selfishly coming where he wanted, but unable to completely return the favor. Sex and love shouldn't be a tit-for-tat, but there has to be some kind of balance. There's no way in hell Adrian is "door number three;" he's the door best left shut.
  20. "Stacked deck" Efrain is going to have his hands full with four of them in the house. I missed being able to write in Preston and Indie's voices (yeah, I need to do a Indie PoV soon!). They have their own drama building up, so you'll see more in up-coming chapters.
  21. Yeah, them showing up seems a little drastic, so there is a chance their intentions are not the best. And, you know this is going to make Cory's emotional state swing even more violently.
  22. Darlin', you're hardly old, so quit fussing! But, I'll get that next chapter out as soon as I can, I swear. Glad you enjoyed this one.
  23. Cory's support system is huge, and growing by the minute. Now, we have to figure out whether or not those brothers of his are going to join in.
  24. Don't let them see that "love is contagious" bit, or they'll start avoiding each other like the plague, and I'll never wring love confessions out of them!
  25. I'd had the "Indie's being nice to me" line in my notes for MONTHS, but almost didn't get to use it. Also, I owe you a big fucking thank you for your input on bowl games--my dearth of knowledge was another hang up keeping the chapter from happening.
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