Dayne Mora
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Maybe the family skeletons saw that Cory came out of the closet and got jealous.... Elaine has some serious soul searching to do, no doubt about it.
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Connor Sr is a piece of work, isn't he. Thank goodness for Uncle Johnny.
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I love using Preston to give out all the nicknames I have to fight the urge to give out in real life. And, no one fights the urge to like Indie more than Preston. (BTW--you're my 200th review!!!!!)
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In Heaven Eoinn was supposed to be working with Masatoshi on their project, but the friends had taken a break when Eoinn became too fidgety and distracted to focus properly. So, instead of writing character analyses for their assigned character foils, they sat on Eoinn’s bedroom floor trading insults and trash talking with various anonymous Call of Duty players for the last hour-and-a-half. They'd just finished another round, and were about to que up for another when Eoinn cleared his throat
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Honestly, I'm having a hard time coming up with transitions between the scenes. Really, I should just write the damn scenes and work on fitting them together later (maybe with my beta's help).
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The period of procrastination before one does any writing. Believe it or not, it's a legit term.
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The "writer's rehearsal" is an essential part of the writing process. Unfortunately, I tend to over-indulge.
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>_> **hides**
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When done well, it adds dimension to a character, and there's enough connotation attached to certain styles that let them act as shorthand. I had intended to give each of the EPIC guys their own underwear preference, but it really only to contribute anything to Cory and Preston's characterizations (well, Preston's at least, Cory's trunks were more about Efrain's fixation on his assets).
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It's coming along, slowly but surely. Got my ass handed to me by a standardized test and a trip to the gym, so I'm still recuperating.
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Sorry In other, totally not related news, Netflix has the first season of The Magicians. I've now decided that Hale Appleman's Eliot is what you'd get if Preston and Indie did the fusion dance.
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Squeeeeeeeeee!!!!
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<3 (thank you )
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You just know Lena Garza is trying as hard as she can not to race out there so she can knock some sense into Elaine Card.
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I'm still working on Elaine--something in her wants all of her boys back, but not sure how to get her there. And there's still the issue of whether Cory wants -her- back. Cory did get lost in the discussion, unable to hold his own when the whole series of events were all about him.
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As supportive as his friends and family are, no one even noticed when Cory didn't find his "stunt" as funny as they did. And the revelations may have done more harm than good. Johnny and the brothers have some serious clean up to do, or someone is going "full cholo."
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Counseling is a must, indeed. The Card brothers were damn lucky they had their mother's side to keep them from growing up to be dickheads (and sucking at football). They may have the name, and the looks, but they're definitely Frederick men.
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I think even the old lady across the street that always ratted Cory out would even take his side over his dad's.
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It does appear that way. Maybe chapter 7 will make things alright again.
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A handful of the Literotica readers complained about how much screen time Lola got in chapter 5, but she's too much fun to leave out. Man, they're going to hate chapter 7.
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Thanks, Hunty-kins.
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How could they not be? And how could Connor and 'Rain not get into it?
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No idea who Niko Pepaj is, but hello 'Rain!
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Okay, so I did a thorough self-check, and even had the hubs confirm, and I'm reasonably certain that I'm still female. lol I grew up with 2 little brothers who had their friends over all the time, and I always got along with guys better. Some of my hobbies and interests are more traditionally masculine. And, it doesn't hurt that I taught for four years at a robotics magnet school that drew in more male students than female. The really weird thing, is that I'm hella fucking girly, despite the masculine influences. Elaine Card needed a vehicle large enough to haul around four children, who were rapidly growing larger than even her husband, and all their gear. The Chevy Suburban is one of those tank-like vehicles that can seat eight and still have room for cargo, which makes it a popular choice. Cameron Card, once he stopped crying about it, discovered that the extra room made hooking up easier, too.
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