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    Okay, admittedly I didn’t with THE lottery. Not millions in cash. But my luck definitely changed for the better. When my boss said, “We want to transfer you to our office in Honolulu,” I know I experience the same kind of shock, disbelief and ecstasy that a lottery winner would. “You’re kidding!” I exclaimed. This really was too good to be true! “Serious as a heart attack,” he said. Holy motherfucking....! “When? When do you want me to go?” “Soon,
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    Gabe Nichol has had a few rough years, but his luck changes when he gets some unexpected good news.
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    Chapter 5

    Zenith commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 5

    What a wonderful, accurate portrayal of a teenager, torn between doing what's right and bowing to peer pressure. Always enjoy your stories. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us Z
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    Hi Gary I'm enjoying the hell out of this story and eagerly await Mondays. Sorry I've been remiss about reviewing your great chapters
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    I'm loving this story! Very creative, and the characters are endearing. Thanks for sharing this Z
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    I'm hooked! I enjoy each and every chapter. Thanks for keeping them coming (the chapters and the characters).
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    Chapter 39

    Zenith commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 39

    I echo the other reviews. A truly imaginative and heartwarming story. My sincerest thank you for your efforts! Z
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    Great chapter! Some suspense building... Thanks, I can hardly wait until the next chapter. Z
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    Chapter 1

    Zenith commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Lovely story. Great characters. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters. Thanks for your hard work and for sharing the story with us. Z
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    Way to leave a cliffhanger:) Really enjoying the story. As usual with your stories there's a nice mix of sentiment and action. Not to mention beautifully written. Thanks! Z
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    Amazing couple of chapters! I agree with the other reviewers about feeling the emotion. A very heartwarming story that gives the reader a lift every chapter. Thanks!!! Z
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    Chapter 1

    Zenith commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Love this story and hoping for more chapters! Z
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    Chapter 31

    Zenith commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 31

    I love this story! Kye is such a heartwarming character. Thanks for all your hard work. Z
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    Great chapter, Robert. Beautifully written as always. Is the information about the Mars colony factual? I feel like I've learned something here! Cheers Z
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    Chapter 28

    Zenith commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 28

    Glad to hear you had a good vacation. Welcome back. I'm really into this story. Each new chapter is a real treat. And your writing is excellent. Thank you Z
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    I love all you guys-and girls-thanks for hanging out with me today
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    Thanks Puppilull I really just set out to write a gay romance with a happy ending. I think gay people don't get enough happy endings in literature. I read straight romances sometimes and I thought, 'why can't gay people read about themselves in a positive light?' I was told I captured the obsession of new love (like when Jerome bought the parking space for Rob's car hoping it would bring Rob closer). I thought that was an astute observation on the part of that reader. But overall it was just a fun piece with me trying to fill a niche.
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    Oh Emi I'm glad you were moved by the story. This blog has been a nice forum to let you all know how wrapped up in it I was. The story is pure fiction, but there's a lot of me in there. I've definitely got Jerome's temper!
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    Tim I agree with your take on the formula. WW was really my first real story, and I was flying by the seat of my pants. I'd like to do a story where the characters have a tension to overcome--like they hate each other and have to overcome a lot of misunderstandings to finally realize they're in love. But I think I'd have to stretch a bit as a person to do that. We'll see
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    Thanks Gary. I really enjoy your stories too. Any motte like COTT coming our way soon?
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    There's a certain formula in a love story. Boy meets boy. Boy loses boy. Boy gets boy back. I thought a lot about what could cause a breakup but not be so catastrophic that they couldn't overcome it.
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    Notice that police or detective characters alway talk about there being no coincidences. But how does the character always find himself at a muder scene, multiple times?
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    Thanks everybody! Jerome and Rob make a few 'cameo' appearances in a subsequent story Spcial Forces.
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    It's rare that I'm moved to tears, but I was for this chapter. Great writing! Z
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    Epilogue

    Zenith commented on Zenith's story chapter in Epilogue

    Hi Avidreadr You've been such a constant for me. I don't have the words to express my appreciation. I'm a happy ending, incurable romantic, so my stories will always end on a good note. And I'm going to bring back the characters in my next story. At a minimum they'll get a cameo. A big thank you! Z
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