JayA
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I realize what you are trying with this format, but feel that I am left short on content. But, yes I am hooked on the story itself. Seeing Chipper in action and what is going on with his life is excellent. Not happy about not hearing CJ in the story in the future, but you made up for it with the new story in December...... As I always am........ready for the next update!!!!! Thanks for continuing stories and your writing. I am very, very hooked on your stories.
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Was it longer than a week -- it was to long then.... 🙂 I am keeping an open mind with the change -- and you know I will let you know when we are done.....I can't ever keep my mouth shut...LOL
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WOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOO he's back!!! And updates twice a week --- I get my @Carlos Hazday fix back! Great start with both the prologue and the first chapter --- although I will say that I like the longer chapters more, this is fantastic as well.
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I agree with this statement but figure this a set up for things to come. Little confused as well..... Always great to get an update...... although they could come a little quicker.....😎😎😎😎😎 Jay
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Great update Mac -- we are moving along and working things out. And I found you in a place that is easier to follow!!!! Hoping that some time in the future our Camp Director returns to camp! It will be interesting to see the changes that come about over the time away and when they return. As always, ready for the next chapter when you are ! Jay
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What a fantastic way to begin my Friday...... Great closing to a outstanding story..... Thanks Carlos!
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@Clancy59 - you are correct - my Friday will be very lonely now....... @Carlos Hazday - excellent chapter as always -- sad for the ending but as the saying goes, all good things come to an end -- love, love, love the story and have it saved to re-read again at a later time. very excited to see what is next! I could see soooo many ways that spin-offs could happen......
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I try to keep an open mind but abortion is one of those things that I still struggle with..... not sure how I feel about this but also understand the reasons behind the decision. As said it was a short chapter and I would have liked to have saw more about Ritchie and how they handled after. Great chapter as always and back to waiting for next week. Closing was fantastic and home is what you make it!!!!! Thanks!
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Can't believe I missed that thought -- you have a great point.......will we see Harley speechless?
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What............I missed this the first time through the comments.........explain yourself!!!!!! LOL
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Yes, Yes I did ask more for Richie -- LOL We all knew you were a tease -- just wondered when you would admit it to yourself..... :-) and NOW I am going to have to go back and re-read the chapter a few times.....think I may have missed some eggs along the way.....just a great excuse to re-read.
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OK....I wanted more Richie -- but damn it boy, keep that damn thing wrapped ........ Ok.....another interesting twist to the "grandchildren" comments that have been made along the way.....but I still think there are twins or more involved some where. And my assumption is that we have not saw the explosion that is CJ with this announcement!! Great update as always.........come on next Friday!!!!!
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Great chapter as always……but damn it, your teasing us again ( “Anyway, Kim. We hope to raise our kids in DC. ). It’s always great to see Brad moving forward even if it takes a little push from a brother. Would like to see a little more of Richie and how he is doing and continues to handle all the changes he is going through. Guess I have another week to wait to see what other “hints” you provide! As always, very much enjoyed the update and always ready for the next!!!!
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How many times can one person re-read a chapter? I think I am on about 20 right now! I only have one question --- "That will be a great experience for your grandchildren.” – is this giving us a hint of maybe twins or more??????? As always, keep puling me along with the story. New update comes out and I can’t wait long enough to check my calendar to make sure I have time to read!!!!
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@Gene Splicer PHD -- thanks for the link -- I have saved it so that I don't lose it again. Now I have two spots to go to when I want to read again!! 🙂 @droughtquake You are very, very welcome. It is a story that I can read many times over and had lost. I am soooo happy that I could help someone else find a very touching story. I also just looked at awesomedude.com and found his other story (Kayden) hosted there as well. And there is another email address (ryankeithstories@gmail.com) that might work. Haven''t tried it to find out. Again thanks to everyone for their assistance on this hunt.
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All I can say is WOW -- your writing continues to amaze me and bring me back. Thought it was not going to be something I wanted to read, but after I got into it --- couldn't put it away. Ready for chapter 5 whenever you are (probably before you are actually).
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Thank you everyone for the help --- I FOUND IT. It is a very short series -- only 7 chapters -- The story is "One Life" by Ryan Keith. I found it on nifty.......this was driving me absolutely out of my mind and I couldn't stop until I found it. I finally remember the game that was discussed and it was "Final Fantasy". Now....I am off to re-read it....... Jay!
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I am asking for assistance on locating/remembering a story. I don't remember many specifics but it was a story that I read a while back. I believe it was two guys meeting in college and of course falling in love. I remember a wedding that happened but one of the grooms was shot by his father and passed. I also remember something about a video game that had different endings and at the end the surviving person bought the game to finish playing it. Hope this is the right area for this and that someone will be able to help me with the title/author or link to this story. Thanks! Jay
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Absolutely fantastic story -- from beginning to end --- although I hated to see if finish. I always waited for the notification that a new update was out and was always one of the first I read. Thank you for sharing your talent and you creativity..... If you should feel the urge, I am sure Rory and Milan would be more than willing to continue with their story ---- maybe a few years down the road with crazy kids of their own!!!!
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Ok....didn't see the Brody portion happening -- but that answers my question doesn't it...... Excellent chapter -- sad face for only a couple more chapters ---- but........ Thanks for the great read tonight!!! Jay
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All work and no play is not the way to go --- enjoy your weekend -- relax -- we will be here waiting when you are.........
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HELL YES ------ FANTASTIC....... now the question is, does Noah choose Jordan since he is still with Brody? I soooo want this to happen for them and for them to get back on track, but am hesitating to hope with Noah's always wanting to protect everyone and just being a nice guy..... as I say every time --- ready for the next chapter!!!!!
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ummmmmm.....I want to say really, really bad words right now........ Of course he needs to tell him --- maybe nothing will come of it --- but maybe Jenn is right, he is taking the choice away from Jordan if Jordan doesn't have the entire picture. Again, hate the cliffhanger, but of course it is in a great place. As always, waiting for more!
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As someone who lost there father young......there is never a time he is not on my mind in some way......thankfully we were close. Not being able to have that adult relationship with him is my greatest disappointment. And sounds like it will be the same for Jordan. I find myself of two minds with this story (besides absolutely being in love with it)....I want Jordan to find his happiness but I am not so sure it is with Noah.........BUT I REALLY WANT IT TO BE!!!!! Cliff hangers ----- they just about do me in each time.... Great update.....did you say the next will be in 5 minutes????????
