JayA

Am I disappointed by the ending ----- probably but that is because I don't think I caught the hint.......🙂......although there is one line that pushes me in a certain direction with my thoughts. You said it perfectly, you are able to end the story however you would like --- this ending at least made me think and create my own thoughts on how things moved forward. If you would ever decide that you would like to post again, I will be following you as this story pulled me in. Thank you for sharing your time with me and sharing part of your imagination. I wish I had the guts/knowledge to do something like this. Jay PS -- I loved Noah/Jordan ---- that is the first one that I found and got sucked in as well......

Not sure how this actually makes me feel......I want to see them together but very irritated that Nash still isn't talking about things and jumping to conclusions. Ready for the next chapter anytime you want to put it out.......like now.......

Found your story --- and got hooked earlier, now I am anticipating the next chapter and wanting it yesterday......Great so far!!!! Thanks for sharing!

Welcome back Carlos --- always great to see new stuff from you --- and a great way to start off a new month. Was great to see a few of the guys back together and get some time with Rich(ie) while he was on break. Love the tie in between Chipper and the house, and how you set the background for what was getting ready to start. Always ready for more -- thanks for sharing more of your talent!!!! Jay

I am thrilled to hear Ritchie is soon......and that someone else is as obsessed with him as I am..........thrilled that it sounds like we are going to have your wonderful talent to look forward to again soon and for a while....thanks! Jay!!!!

Outstanding chapter/end to an outstanding story. Who would have thought that kid in high school would go so far and prove you can do anything you set your mind to. I know there is more for Brad's story and will be patient till you are ready to share but.............................................................................as you know, I WANT IT NOW...... 🙂 I continue to find myself brought into each one of your stories as if I was a family member watching them happen! As always, until your next entry, I stand impressed and awed...... Hope you are doing well during our craziness and continue to be safe, happy and healthy! Until we meet again my friend! Jay

I first found your stories with Morningstar and couldn't get enough.......have probably re-read it 4 or 5 times now.. Then the next one that drug me in was Cards on the Table ---- and am actually going to go back and re-read that one now.......even though it has not finished yet.... Endings -- what do I say --- this was an excellent story --true to life - great portrayal of the different emotions by both. Was pulled into this one as much as the others..... Thanks for sharing your talent --- will watch for more!!!! Any chance of seeing how the guys and Dawson are doing in the future? jay

I continue to be impressed with every story you provide.......and this one drug me in like all the others..... Thanks for allowing me to partake in a bit of your creativity and imagination. And outstanding job with the Kennedys and keeping it real. Jay!!!!!

Outstanding story --- great double chapter update for the ending!!!! Got something in mind for next Saturday??????

Oh wow.....oh wow.....oh wow!!!!!!! SO DAMN EXCELLENT I am dreaming of about 3 more books to go along with this.....

I am getting so spoiled with the quick postings ----- sadness is coming on quickly. Another great update -- outstanding interactions between them all. Tears are real and very prominent after this one. Kinda not looking forward to the next one cause I am sure there is going to be an ocean in my house....... Have a really good feeling that as soon as we are done here, I am heading back and reading both again........ Thank you again for sharing your talent ---- some of the best writing I have ever found!!!!!

Wow....I am feeling the conclusion coming.......little sad!!!! So happy Andy is doing better and they finally figured out his meds.....that can be a pain sometimes. And love Tyler being best man. Will be honest, had a few tears at the end but were happy! Ready for the next update when you are......but really also want to say no cause I don't want it done yet. 😁😁😁😁

Soooo much going on!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I hate that Tyler is struggling with his confidence and was extremely happy when he got the hand up that he needed to come out of his shell more. Tyler moving to California --- not sure how I feel about that right now. But he is young, hopefully with a long life with the man that he loves by his side helping, not doing, along the way. Tyler could never be happy if he is not making his own way through the world. So many fantastic parts, so many open ended decisions still to be decided, and so looking forward to all the moving parts as we continue on with the story. But Helen......what can you say! She continues to impress and is becoming one of my favorites. Absolutely love the fact Jacob/Kyle care so much they are willing to help -- even from across the states!!!! Keep it going my friend! You have a fan for life!!!!!!

I am one of those that like the final, final look at what is happening.....but depends on where/how you close the book out. All good things come to an end -- hope that you have more in your head that you want to get out --- love the stories you have done so far ----

Most definitely agree with this --- I have only read this chapter once and still trying to let my brain get through the information --- so far it seems a great update -- things are moving along and Tyler is meeting the parents --- seemed to go OK but could see some areas of concern. Kind curious about the "time we have left" comment but waiting to see where we go from here.... As always, love the update and ready for more when you are.