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    Sorry he's kinda busy popping up where you least expect him
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    Poor Nessay’s doors just don’t stand a chance against the men in his life!
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    thankfully for the Lowe's stock holders, these two while not the main focus will pop in three more stories and unfortunately it seems that a door will always be in Colby way lol
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    And no cliff hanger lol
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    My truck! What the hell happened to my truck? Why would it blow up like that? What was it even doing here? It should have been in repair shop getting checked out. No, here I was a block away watching firefighters put out the fire. Thankfully the response was so quick, my bar didn't get any damage besides some scrapes and dents from debris. I felt like giving up, what was I going to do without my truck? There was no way I could afford a new one. Hell there was no way I could even afford one tha
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    I love the cliffhanger and think you should do more, of course I also enjoy doing the same to my readers hahaha
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    next chapter has the big sex scene but as far as answers go they really wont be popping up for a while yet.
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    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j5ehB_Z01As&list=RDj5ehB_Z01As This si the song @BlindAmbition
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    I was trying to pick a song for this chapter and I could not get anything to click for me til this popped up on you tube and it just fits
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    HAHAAH that might get some water works from a bunch of people
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    I'm saving the ten for the last chapter lol
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    Odin is one of Nessay's "friends" from chap 1 hes the giant man that helps Brady up Def more mystery than answers, but at leas tone of the bad guys went boom!
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    I think its actually in this chapter I also believe Brady called himself it in the first chapter Thanks for reading and I am glad you enjoyed it Don't worry Nessay has a few more things instore for Brady
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    ..... Nope lol
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    It just felt so right for this point in the story and I cant wait til you see the final song itll have you sobbing like a baby haha I will give you a hint its another song by a different Jason
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    Hell yeah I would lol just in this story I cannot confirm or deny whether I would or not lol Baddies really won't be identified for a few more chapters,
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    Ever have your life flash in front of your eyes? My heart went from full to broken, my future from full to empty; all I could do is brace myself for impact. My arms came up trying best to cover my head and ribs. The anticipation was almost as worse as the pain, especially since the pain never came. A loud bang and a louder crash had me lowering my arms to see the van hit some garbage cans and go up on the sidewalk opposite of Nessay. It swerved back onto the road and couple seconds later gone f
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    You'll meet more people in the towns of Heartsville in the next part entitled "Melody of the Mind" it evolves the relationship brewing between Ty and Jared Forgiveness is hardest thing to give, I like to think Nessay is the part of me that looks at people with fresh eyes and cares about who they are going forward and not in the past.
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    Flashback

    Jordn87 commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in Flashback

    I am going to fit this in before people start hating on him, Go Cody go lol excellent start look forward to reading more
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    Poor Brady has been feeling the hate the first few chapters, I am hoping people will see past his past like Nessay and look more towards who he is now.
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    I don't want to give anything away so I will just give you a smile and say thanks for reading!
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    Thank you for your wonderful comment, the song is a drainer and I kind of feel like an idiot for not posting it in the beginning. Its the complete inspiration for this chapter I had it on repeat the whole time I was writing
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    Thanks I needed that you would not believe the hostility and anger over a simple mistake but I hope your enjoying and thanks for reading!
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