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Jordn87

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  1. Ladies and gentlemen it’s my honor to introduce Mr. Brady & Nessay Jordan-Rodriguez!” That was our cue to enter the room, our hands interlocked, my head resting on my cowboy’s shoulder. I don’t think life could get any better than marrying the man you love. Well except the little bit news I had to share with him, but that was for later on tonight. We were both dressed to the nines in our tuxedos. Our friends and family all around us. When we entered my eyes locked onto my mom’s, it t
  2. Well he kind of waddles when he walks I think very much penguin looking for him
  3. See @ObicanDecko lol
  4. hey the ending of Ch 12 is worth it and I think no one saw it coming
  5. : HAHAHHAHA the ending of twelve made @Wesley8890 send me a message in all caps lol I was pretty sure I was one step away from him not speaking to me lol
  6. You will be happy to know that this is book 1 of 3 and the next book focuses on Ty and Jared letting you get to know them a little bit better. Nessay and Brady will be making appearances here and there plus a couple new characters Unfortunately this is the chapter we say goodbye to a couple characters til book 3. Especially Van Jordan, he wont be seen or get any comeuppance til he comes slithering back.
  7. I have been waiting around all for the threats from the cliffie in chapter 12 and I never got one haha
  8. It had been a year since that awful night, a night that to this day I still had nightmares about. How close things came to a bad ending at the hands of an evil man. Of course last year's festival was canceled, but some anonymous donor had sent the city a check for a million dollars. The town was a buzz this year for the festival, where I was nervous to the point of puking. It had been a long year for me filled with rehab, apologies, pain and most of all love and happiness. My father’s bu
  9. Btw chap 12 is entitled It All Ends With A Bang
  10. If you hate me now wait til the next chapter drops Tuesday morning you are really going to hate me then because it’s the biggest Cliff yet
  11. Welcome thank you for the comment. I hope you enjoy it around here as much as I do
  12. It wouldn't be as good with out your help my friend
  13. “Nessay babe! Wake up!” I was being gently shaken by someone, who sounded awfully familiar. Fuck why did my eyelids feel like a pair of bricks, they were so hard to open. If that weren’t enough my head throbbed, who ever had hired the band playing inside my head was going to be sorry. I felt a pair of hands gently placed on the sides of my face, and a pair of lips meet mine in a slow tender kiss. If being tired and achy meant kissing those lips I was all for it. Slowly I managed to open on
  14. its actually finished just needs editing
  15. thanks I hope you enjoy my story as much as I have enjoyed yours
  16. I will give you this I would not stress about Nessay kidnapper as you ill get a ton of info on him next chapter
  17. I finished rewriting the last chapter with the whole purpose of making you cry LOL
  18. well you know me I can't go long with out breaking a door down LOL At least it was Odin and not Brady this time Thanks for reading I appreciate it!
  19. Three days, it's been that long since that idiot sent his little “Luv U” text. Like I would really forgive him that easily. Even though it did make my heart flip a little, I missed that big body in bed at night. I really thought he had changed, I had bought it hook line and sinker. Always the fool, never the king as the saying goes. Each day I had arrived at work super early, gone straight into the office and locked the door. Ignoring any knocks, calls, and messages slid under the door. The only
  20. Great chapter unlike some I enjoy good cliff hanger and this was one!
  21. But cliffhangers are fun LOL
  22. yeah more Cliffies just for Wesley LOL
  23. Not sure how others feel but in the world where you are working on I think needs lots of lore, where stories like mine based in a city that's real and people I feel need less lore
  24. I enjoyed the chapter, and I don't think it was slow at all. I thought their was some great lore and more info about the relationship between mom and son
  25. Sorry he's kinda busy popping up where you least expect him
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