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Chapter 12: Will Praveen finally get his happy ever after?
Jordn87 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 12: Will Praveen finally get his happy ever after?
Please don't leave this ending, Praveen is amazing character and deserves a better ending then this. Whether its with Santiago or Antonio ending up alone and saddened. I truly believe this story hasn't reached its end yet. -
20 Years Ago…… Leader had never felt such grief in his life, both his mate and himself could feel the moment their child had passed from this world. “daideó what's going on?” The soft little voice pulling him from his thoughts. Looking over at the ginger hair little boy, Leader could feel an immense love swell from within. Anlon, his and his mate’s pride and joy was their only grandchild. Destined to help lead this pack, the young boy was placed in courses to enhance his abilities to be
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Growing up as a wolf shifter with no pack was hard for Anlon O'Connor, harder yet was having a grandfather who did not want to give you any clues to your past. Having been raised by his grandparents. Anlon only knows bits and pieces of his past, something that made him and his wolf feel incomplete. Now his grandfather has passed and the most handsome of strangers has appeared. Will the stranger answer his questions about the past?
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Ten Years Later ....... Lights off, empty bar, and a life full of love. Nessay and Brady were both lost in their thoughts as they stood in the doorway of the bar. It had been goon long run owning it, now they were ready to move to the countryside and slow down their pace of life. Flipping on the switch, Nessay's eyes focused on a small keychain hanging above the til. Hanging there was a small stuffed Moogle holding a heart with the word love on it. A tear slowly falling from
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The big idiot, who did he think he is? I am not some child to be sent away to his room when I am not needed. I certainly did not need some big oaf being a bodyguard or babysitter. Though I suppose me struggling uselessly on his shoulder really isn’t doing much to show how mature I am. Though that big idiot makes me so mad, I thought we had made progress on our relationship. When I get my hands on him he will never be able to have kids again, and will need a permanent ice bag on his balls. One th
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Sometimes Odin Stormbringer really loved his job, and other times, like tonight assignment, it was really awkward. He was watching the video feed of Nessay Rodriguez’s house. For the last three months, him and his team had made it a priority to protect and watch out for the young man. Being forced to watch the video of his friend try to be dominant with his lover, something he considered hot but hilarious as well. There was such an innocence about Nessay, he truly brought out the best in the peo
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I dont understand where this rule came from because it wasn't how I formatted mine and no one said a thing about it but the couple times I had double spacing issues. All did is remove formatting then pst the story in and just make sure no line breaks were in so that the system could automatically put the spaces in. I am sitting on three stories that I havent even bothered to send to the editor because of the format that is required on the story.
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So theirs going to be s cross over ? ... lol sorry I couldn’t help my smart assery self
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I don't know if I want to red what comes next lol It was so much fun watching a club break the curse only to feel the opposite end of the spectrum the first week of November great story and I absolutely love the characters and have been a big fan since book 1
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Question for you, isn’t love the driving force why yours and mine characters forgiving someone who hurt them? Both groups have someone who made life miserable for years for the other that they fall in love with is what Jake did really any worse than what Brady or Cody did? Couldn’t the same love that lead them to forgiving that lead Kay to decide Jake might be worth the effort?
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It may be unforgivable to you but that doesn’t mean it is to everyone. We make mistakes and we are human. I like to think the boys will take it slow so the loneliness that drove them to make their mistakes won’t happen again. Both boys were guilty in this. I for one who took back an ex who cheated and worked to build the relationship back up with counseling and support of the family and friends around us. It didn’t last but the three years we had were special and our friendship is special to me and I like to think it made him a better partner with what we went thru
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I am right there with you my friend, but what I will say is this was a good story and I really enjoyed it. It was not the ending I thought I see, but its the ending I am starting to believe I needed to see
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Tim is the co worker of Trick who Trick helped talk to his brother
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You what I love about this story? That @ObicanDecko just gets better as a writer with each I’m chapter Another awesome one my friend!
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Thanks you so much for all of your comments Nessay is something else for sure Good news is we get to seem him parent and more of Brady and Nessay
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Thank you so much for the kind words I am happy you enjoyed the story
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Chapter 9 - When a Cowboy and a Giant Fight . . .
Jordn87 commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 9 - When a Cowboy and a Giant Fight . . .
I’m not sure what happen it’s showing just fine on my lap top or my cell phone ? -
No you can’t mwahahaha 😈
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Now I get to spend my time bragging about your story
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I gave a pretty big hint in the epilogue who Van Jordan's next target is
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Chapter 12 - It All Ends With A Bang
Jordn87 commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 12 - It All Ends With A Bang
@Wesley8890 is still mad at me and he knew about it three weeks ago LOL -
Thank you so much for your kind words Theirs three books but the second book isn't about Nessay and Brady really. just enough guest appearances here and there. Book two will also lack one Van Jordan, Ty nd Jared have a whole new issue to tackle that I wont spoil but their will be no evil church or a fat minister. He will actually return for book three. Which will be Mitch and Odin's story
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Thanks Obican I much appreciate It I am glad I got you tears flowing lol
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Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it
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Thanks Moggy I couldn't of did this with out you, and I look forward to many more stories together
