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    Thanks Foster
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    Hahaha the hero is Brady and he returns with a bang the song is logic’s I just meant none of the lyrics used belong to me they all belong to him btw the number is super important, it’s the suicide prevention line it’s why I used this chapter
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    Thanks! I always appreciate the feedback!
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    btw I don't think the emotion I was going for in this chapter was of the wanna do dishes kind LOL
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    don’t worry Nessay is far from done busting Brady’s balls literally not figuratively lol
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    Unfortunately you won’t hear from Nessay til Chapter 6 but hell pop up over the next couple with Brady in charge
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    Welcome and thanks for reading It’s hard not to like Nessay, though I think people will like Brady better after the next chapter!
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    I cant wait for you to read chap 5;) I think it’s my favorite chapter
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    It’s been three days since that asshole walked back into my life, and I have done the bravest thing I could, I went into hiding. Like, am IG model who gained five pounds and avoiding a mirror type of hiding. Like right now I was listening to Lyric’s song “1-800-273-8255” and fingering this pocket knife I got when I was ten from my grandpa, this little knife has had a big part in me becoming me. It's weird how society still doesn't take suicide seriously. The looks I get when I talk about my stru
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    Nessay is def a firecracker, Chap 3 is being posted tonight
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    Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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    Nessay isn't known as a patient person, he does have a temper like no other. Though Brady has a way of dealing with it that's highly effective lol
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    Thanks for reading I think people will find Nessay is a better person then most of us, he tends to look forward than backwards. But you'll see why in the next chapter
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    Thanks for reading Your right I def don't think Brady was expecting that. He is so used to men and woman both fawning and drooling over him, something Nessay would never admit or show
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    Thanks for reading Next chapter is more Nessay
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    I am really enjoying it, keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing if Liberty can spot the fake
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    Easily the old comic / cartoon feel of the hero changing while the other person is knocked out Reminds me a lot of the shows I watched growing up. So I guess the answer is the nostalgia it brings up
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    This story is so awesome! I scream like a school girl when I see a new chapter LOL Should mention I am most 30 year old male lol
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    Thanks Terry
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    Dear Mr. Nessay Rodriguez, It is with great regret that we must inform you that we are unable to offer you a loan at this time. We look forward to serving you in various other ways, with the variety of services we offer. If I can be any more assistance please feel free to contact me at the number below. Sincerely, Josh Hoeven Loan Officer NHAP Bank Well, that was one fine way to start another shitty day, Sometimes I just wis
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    Nessay is a firecracker Don't expect him to lie down for anyone anymore, but he carries his demons with him as much as Brady does. I don't want to give anything away but I think people will love Nessay!
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    I hope your enjoying it, Nifty is a little ahead right now. Chapter four will post their tonight but I hope you will read both as I plan to end this one little different then that one Also the chapters here will be a little different
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    Dragon Age Inquisition fits that bill for me, especially the game of the year edition with all the DLC.
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    Thanks Next chapter should be up tomorrow if all goes to plan!
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    Chapter 3

    Jordn87 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I absolutely love this chapter. I can't wait to see the relationship build between the two.
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