Sir Galahad

Major ooops. Yeah it's a "colossal screw-up." with bells & ribbons on. <shakes head>

I think maybe turnabout would be cool here. We should maybe tie Mark down & have hot guys in skimpy thongs tease him. Looking but not touching! lol That said he might just like that a wee bit too much

Hippo

That's sweet revenge

Sayid is quite common. <shrugs> And for reference I'm English, not British. Goat

Objection overruled! I did look it up & found nothing resembling a name. Apologies for the error. Tiger

Wow. That piece was powerful. Sometimes young guys do feel like they are invincible, & as such act accordingly. Through their own arrogance, it's the attitude of "It'll never happen to me". Sadly more often than not, life has other ideas. To love someone that much, & find the only way you can shock them enough to get them to change is to tell them they are HIV+ must be heartbreaking. Tiff did a fantastic job writing that, you could almost feel the emotion leaping off the page. For me the interaction between the characters was spot on, & very well written. As for the ending, well I kinda liked it being left open the way it was. Leaves you wondering, what if?

Couldn't agree more. Fantastic debut. Though how anyone could resist a man in uniform I'll never know!

I'm not one who normally likes romance, but good job man.

Great story, right up my street. Well done.

Really enjoyed this, total class act with his Dad coming in with a stack of porno mags in one hand & a dildo in the other! Good job.

Loved this story, cracked up when he realised he'd be mooning the neighborhood. Well done.

I really enjoyed this as well, am not usually a fan of period stories, but it kept my interest 'til the end. Thanks.

I think I would have been mortified if my parents caught me like that! I love the subtle, "Why don

Out of the mouths of babes! lol Really cool story this, & a neat concept putting it in a letter like that. Thanks Graeme.

I have to agree with everyone, excellent story. I'm sure that will be an enlightening trip to the theater!

Well, I was waiting for the encore & the traditional throwing of rotten fruit, I mean flowers!

There's only one old goat who's gonna go a certain way...Benji!

I can only only echo what been written before. excellent chapter. Was a very touching scene between Luc & Matt in the kitchen. One complaint though. Cold lasagna? Gross! I do sense a little bit of chemistry between them, but you could put that down to Matt being kind. Time will tell I guess.

It could be a bit of both, tolling for the Heralds that have died, & it continuing could be letting it be known that the Heralds will be returning to Haven. It's driving the Mage priest nuts though! lol.

We did this a couple of years ago. There's this girl in our office & she's really anally retentive about cleanliness, hates bugs & is a bit of a prude! So, me & a couple of co workers thought it would be a good idea to really freak her out with a wind-up & pretend we had crabs! Every time we went near her or passed her desk we would start having a good scratch. Kept leaning against her or getting really close. Didn't take her long to ask why I was scratching so much, so I said that as long as she kept it to herself I'd tell her. So I told her that I & a couple of the other guys in the office had hooked up a couple of weeks ago, & someone had passed on a dose of crabs, this said whilst holding her hand. She sorta looked at my hand on hers snatched it away, & scurried off somewhere! The look on her face was priceless. lol Every time I looked over towards her for the rest of the day she'd be scratching & giving us dirty looks. We did put her out of her misery when it came time to go home, & I have never heard such language pass those lips of hers, ever!

Domestic Cat

And I think we have a loser! Said is not a name! Tut tut. OK, new start Animals. Dog

Wow, we're being spoiled, 2 chapters in a week. Ummm, not sure about there being a problem with the Heralds leaving Haven, I just thought it was the first time since the reign of King Valdemar there had been no Heralds in the capitol. Will have to re-read that part I think. I just wonder if that has anything to do with the bells that were mentioned at the end of the chapter. Great chapter though, seems our Dalen is very powerful, I just wonder what he's left behind for them when he activated that last spell on the Heartstone. Whatever it is won't be pleasant for the Haighlei. I can see a long struggle ahead though to retake Valdemar & ultimately Haven; but really looking forward to the next chapter.

AOL 9.0VR browser. I would say that's the problem wouldn't you?