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Wednesday, on the way to school, I bumped into Matty. I was pleased to see him and told him so. He said that he really would like to see me, alone of course. I decided the only way was for him to come round to my house this evening and we agreed to meet after school. When the final bell sounded I packed my books away and headed out of school, we had arranged to wait for each other by the gate. As I crossed the carpark I saw Matty was already there. He smiled as I drew close to him. "How was
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Thank you for the comment, getting an intimate scene in balance is never easy. Yes, Jonathan is a nice guy and Alex, there's a certain manipulative side to him, the jury is out, waiting to see and decide. Matty, he's kind of a dedicated best friend and in love enough to stick around.
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Yes it is, messy, and I could almost say there is a lot of being unfair, not just between Alex with Matty and Jake. You have to ask yourself the question: are teenage relationships ever simple?
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I'm like Dustin, I just don't know what Casso wants, or why he's keeping him.
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Chapter 4: Domestic Violations
William King commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 4: Domestic Violations
This was fun! I wonder exactly what Rick might do if he catches Liam, because he did say: "You deserve punishment.” And what exactly did his browser history record? We can only guess, although I have a vivid imagination filled with hundreds of possibilities, any one of which would reveal something intimate about Liam's tastes... -
This looks like a good film. Anyone seen it? Want to comment?
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That's okay, you write like you write it, its intriguing!
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The answer, I think, lies in lots of unanswered questions that you want to know the answers to because you're pulled into the story like you're waking up and going to work through a snow storm with the characters... it's real!
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Tuesday morning passed with me still thinking about calling Jonathan. It was at lunch time I finally took the little scrap of paper with his telephone number on and made the call. I hoped he would answer, because now I had made my mind up I wanted to see him straight away and not have to put it off any longer. I had way too many unresolved things in my life that needed to be dealt with. I suppose that I was in luck, he answered. I spoke first, "Jonathan, this is Alex." "Oh yes, hi Alex
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Because he's in Norway in the middle of nowhere, probably have to walk for miles or days, assuming Casso has pulled off the main road and there's no other traffic, which seems likely, because he's nowhere near or even in the direction they were going, but I guess we'll have to wait and see. You know, in all the best psycho thrillers the readers/viewers always say: why didn't he just do that?...
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When I arrived at school on Monday morning all I was thinking about was that I had to find out what Jonathan had said to Brandon. Matty and I had spent all day Sunday together and I had put bumping into Brandon and Jonathan out of my thoughts, but now not knowing what Brandon might know was making me nervous. When the bell went to start classes there was the usual hustle and chaos as everyone went into the school building, along the wide corridor or up the main staircase to their classrooms
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I don't know what time we woke up, I didn't even bother to look, it felt so incredibly nice to wake up next to Matty. I stroked his hair and looked at him; he stirred, turned towards me and opened his eyes. He smiled, what a beautiful smile he had, what a beautiful boy. "I guess we should get up," I said the obvious thing. "I think you're already up!" He joked and his hand moved underneath the duvet to touch my cock, which was hard. "Ha ha, very funny," I smiled, took hold of his
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It was a clear, dry day for the semi-final, and half the school had turned out to support the team. Getting ready before the match in the changing rooms, there was a definite buzz in the air. I think everyone was hyped up for this game; the atmosphere is so different when you are playing in a real stadium and not just on a playing field. Add the supporters in the stands, the shouting, singing, and all the rest of the noise and it's really special. Standing there in the line up, waiting for the s
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Chapter 4 - Settling In
William King commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Settling In
It's a slow burn and all the better for that, I love the gentle unfolding of the story. -
"And this time, I wasn’t running from anything. I was walking, with my family’s love in my bones, Faiz’s words in my pocket, and a one-way ticket in my hand." Such poetic, descriptive, and evocative narrative is wonderful and very emotional to read. You allow us to live Jamal's evolving life through the pages of your novel and I appreciate the talent you have as an author who so masterfully conveys another life. A superb story which you have no doubt noticed every reader loves.
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Chapter 2 - Leaving Home
William King commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Leaving Home
Literary poetic, this chapter was an insight into another culture and it offered a different perspective on religion. Two words might sum up what I read here, tolerance and respect. Excellent chapter. -
Thursday evening I finally took out my school books and got down to some serious work. There were some things I needed to finish, including a history project to hand in tomorrow, and some other stuff needed to be done for Monday. Given that Saturday was the match and then I was staying over at Matty's, it had to get done tonight, or I'd be left doing it on Friday. By around 11PM I had cracked it. With some satisfaction I closed the books and put them back in my bag ready for tomorrow mornin
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Hay tres libros en la serie y hay episodios que incluyen relaciones sexuales íntimas, todo es parte de un romance adolescente sobre la mayoría de edad. Espero que sigas toda la historia y que cumpla con tus expectativas. (traducido por Google).
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I got back home just after seven, in time to eat, and to not get in trouble. After eating I said I needed to get some school work done, so I retreated to my bedroom. Actually, I didn't even bother to get the books out and do any work. I just thought to myself why the hell didn't I question Jake? Of course I knew why, although I'd made a big thing out it when I'd called him on Sunday, I didn't want it getting in the way. From the very first moment on the bus I was attracted to Jake. After having
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I loved this short story, great characters written with a raw narrative that exquisitely matched their situation. Not perhaps for everyone, but kind of like an art house movie, a hidden gem that plays to a tiny audience who sparsely populate the auditorium on a cold and damp afternoon. The sort of writing that might or might not get spotted by a literary critic and praised on the pages of a independent publication dedicated to fans of the art. In brief, it's different and a million times better for so being.
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Just caught up, been away. Great cameo, a short story that's different, both the raw subject matter, and the rough street narrative. The characters were well drawn, the connection between Dingo and Frog just a beginning. Is there more? Sure there is, but we can only imagine what life dumps on them. Still, there is an under lying strength, a vague hope of something...
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I was glad when Monday was over, I never did like the first day of the school week and today was no exception. Walking slowly out of school and up the street to the bus stop I had to run when I saw the bus arriving. I just made it, last to get on. I showed the driver my pass as he closed the doors and the bus pulled away. Making my way down the aisle towards the back I noticed Ryan, who called out, "Alex, you just made it!" "Yeah...had to run." Squeezing into the empty seat next t
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Sunday Bloody Sunday.
William King commented on William King's story chapter in Sunday Bloody Sunday.
In chapter three Jake meets Alex for the first time when he passes him a note on the bus. ... then my attention went back to the guy in front. I noticed he was writing something in a little note book. He'd taken the book out of his bag, which was resting on the floor in front of him. Half in, half out of the aisle. He finished. Then carefully, slowly, started to tear the small sheet of paper from the note book. ... The guy was crumpling the paper up into a ball. ... He half turned back in his seat and launched the crumpled ball of paper in my direction. I watched as it landed just in front of my foot. I was about to ignore it, when he caught my eye again. He was grinning. -
I didn't get up early Sunday morning. At least one day, I thought to myself, I have the right to stay in bed a bit longer, even if my uncle and his family would be here later. It was 09:50 when I looked over at the little clock on the bedside table. Just as I was getting out of bed the door opened and Michael peered in. "You could knock," I told him. "Why?" He replied and walked in through the door. "What are you doing?" He grinned at me. "What's it look like? I'm getting up, idio
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