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You wound me.
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Welcome, the chapter provided another side of Brady's folks, and of Ember. We only got the view Brady had of his parents, it was nice to see the caring side of his Mum. I think we all see our parents differently to the rest of the world it's only natural. Pix is a nickname, maybe we'll find out where it came from at some point. Thanks for your support as always JeffreyL, we appreciate it.
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The man is going to crack eventually, I wonder what it will take for him to come around? Kids would take to Pix in a flash, he has a way that puts people at ease I think. Nurses are heroes in my book, they work extremely hard and are always about the patient. They never seem to forget the families either, they provide a great support for loved ones with sick or injured family or friends.
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I agree, I'd love to have a Pix of my own in life. Someone that is always glass half full, I'll bet he's loyal and the best friend anyone could ask for. Isn't it always the way, the supporting characters outshine the main ones lol. It's true in television too, but they always provide their worth when they are around.
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Yeah his daughter who stayed in the city is at Uni, her name is Katie. She was the result of the graduation party fun. I hope you have a great weekend too.
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John took pity on your poor eyes this week, no cliffhanger. He thought you could use the break. Little Ember will appear from time-to-time. She loves her Uncle Ember.
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I'm sure it's just around the corner Terry P when we start to see the crumble of Ember's resolve and his denial shatters. Hang in there it's coming. Promise.
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Lol, I like that 'Chap-Checks.' As always you crack me up Onim. I'm happy would could make your Friday even better than waiting for money.
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Pix is a cool guy, as long as people aren't fake I don't really care what they look like. I'd rather judge someone by how they treat others. I don't expect people to be perfect all the time but if they are generally decent I'm good with that.
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Hey don't worry, I feel stupid for not including little Ember.
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I think it may take a few more before he catches on, he seems to be in some sort of denial. Thanks for reading Sam, John and I are glad you're enjoying the story.
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I'm hoping by now you've had your glass-es of wine and feel nice and relaxed for the weekend.
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You are dead on Chris, which you usually are. We're glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for reading and your comments each chapter.
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You are correct, I didn't really consider her a November but she is, isn't she. They only changed it to Ember because of her gender.
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Ember is nothing if stubborn, I think once he gets over himself he'll commit all the way or nothing at all. That doesn't mean to say it will be easy for him to decide. Thanks for your feedback FanLit and for reading the story.
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I like you a lot. You have the best ideas. Hang on and I'll get one for you too. 🍷 There you go, oh screw it let's have two. 🍷 Ahhh! Now that's better.
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Because apparently life is always fair. Pix does seem pretty cool, there's nothing more attractive than confidence in someone who is unapologetic for who they are.
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I didn't even consider the little one, I apologize @droughtquake and thanks @Bft for answering the question. I'm going to jump in hole opening next to me and hide for a while. I guess Ember isn't the only one thick as two planks of wood.
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Okay as far as I'm aware, I have never known anyone with the name November. The only two that I'm aware of are in this story. Did we mess up and indicate a third?
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Thanks Tonyr, don't get too excited yet, Ember seems to be a little bit thick when it comes to Brady.
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Lol, he might be a pixie. Mom's know everything about their kids usually, whether they let on or not, so I know you're right.
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You're welcome, and we thank you. Someone had to help the clueless folk there lol. I think I know the answer to her cluelessness on the matter, and the answer would be Cam the brother. He's very different to Brady, Cameron is gay and doesn't apologize for anything; never has, I'm guessing Kate is not aware of the courtesy's involved. I think Pix is fun too, it's nice to have someone around who is upbeat and generally fun.
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Before I knew it, we are all pulling into the carpark at the ‘The Yard,’ except Brady and me. We had to park out on the street curbside because of the trailers. It was Saturday early evening, the pub was packed to the rafters, according to the carpark anyway. Brady had parked directly behind me, he got out of his SUV, waiting for me on the path. Crap! I couldn’t very well be rude after giving him the speech about us being civil to each other because of the kids, as I approached him he fell into
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“Yes Ma’am, I’ll send someone right away.” Ripping the job note from the pad I stood up from my desk, two little taps sounded on the door to my office. So weird that I have an office, at first, I felt isolated from everyone and what was happening around the pen. Now I find it comforting that I can hear myself think. Being a sergeant is a pain in the ass full of red-tape and babysitting, with the occasional call to the field. I thought I’d miss it more, but my hours are more regular, and I’m
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