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Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
Bndmetl commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
Here; here. Now next time I want to write something. I'm going to send it to you, then get you to articulate what I'm trying to say correctly. -
I'm sorry Rick, I didn't mean to imply you were. Just that your awesome for helping and I'm not alone in this story.
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LOL, yes they can, it's so hard to resist when they look at you with their innocent puppy dog eyes. I'm with you on the reunions, didn't much like the people when I went to school, don't know why I'd want to give them the time of day twenty years later when I haven't spoken with a single soul during and since.
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Be nice, you'll hurt my feelings.
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Aw, that's so... okay now I'm a little emotional that you would say something like that. I can only claim to half a writer, John and I have spent a lot of time creating this story together about six months I think we worked out the other day. It wouldn't be anywhere near this calibre without John, not to mention your contribution keeping us on the right path along with Glenn and then Tony cleaning up our mess. So there you go it's been a team effort all along and I can't thank any of you enough for all of it. Thanks guys.
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Lol, almost Friday! I just like cars, good, bad, and in between. We'll try not to throw to much Aussie bogan slang in there, for you.
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Aw, that's a compliment and a half, thank you. Hang in there, it will be Friday soon. Promise!
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I hope you enjoy getting to know Ember's mob, he's got some really great people surrounding him.
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Glad you like it JeffreyL, I can't wait for you to meet Brady next chapter. Thanks for reading and your constant support, I look forward to hearing from you every time something is posted.
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Thanks Canuk, we hope you like the story as it pans out. Please keep up the comments, we appreciate it everyone taking the time to read the story and the feedback helps the story going forward.
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Sorry I realise you're annoyed, but it can't be helped. Next chapter is done and will be posted Friday. Please go bug Wes I need a JAM fix you're good at putting the pressure on.
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They are a colourful bunch, I hope you feel the same way when you meet Brady and his...well you'll see.
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We are pretty proud of this chapter, I certainly hope you like the others once they are posted.
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Seventy-eleven, well that's what it feels like. And If you want to pay me the money James Patterson gets; go right ahead I won't stop ya.
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Yeah sorry, co-writing is difficult getting the time to write together as well as the back and forth. You'll be happy to know John and I have 16 chapters written already. We are taking our time to fix them from Glenn and Rick, I hope we do them justice and you enjoy the story.
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John did a great job filling out the bones of the story more atmosphere to the chapter, then we tortured the beta-readers and editor.
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Thanks Avidreadr, hope you enjoy the story going forward.
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Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
Bndmetl commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Another Man's Shoes
*Sigh* Deep breath *Sigh* Um.... unclench fists. *Sigh* Okay, yes. People should be allowed to sort themselves out, BUT, not at the expense of someone else's feelings and psyche. No wonder Drake is a mess, he was betrayed, belittled, cheated on, lied to... and that's just for starters. One thing I know for sure, Drake will be a lot happier before Richard, it doesn't seem like he's dealt with everything he needs to. Hopefully Jimmy can help Drake past this point and get over it and learn to trust again. Please put Preston and Richard in a car with no brakes and a sticky accelerator. -
Chapter 4 Time to Mend some fences
Bndmetl commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 4 Time to Mend some fences
Great chapter, thanks. We're getting closer to the big trip, I can't wait to see what Jamie and his cousin get up to. Tell Jamie not to worry about Sam while he's gone, I'll look after him for you. There's a few guys I can introduce him to or he can slum it with me. -
Ember I slammed the bonnet closed. That old world solid click reminded me of the cars I worked on when starting here - twenty years ago. This ‘73 GTR Torana was a classic - solid, powerful, brute force for mums to shop in and dads to remember back when - nothing like today's turbos, or, “never getting dirty” SUV’s. It was a thing of beauty. Beautiful car – idiot owner. These young kids - they buy expensive classics and don’t look after them. It’s the third time this particular
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Ember McCain is a mechanic in his late thirties, he's closed off and bitter about his teenage years. His biggest problem is not being able to let go of the anger he feels from the bullying he received in high school. Despite his own short comings he's managed grow a successful mechanic business, most of his employees are strong confident gay men. He's finally in a place in his life where he feels happy, confident, and content being himself. That is until Brady Douglass, his high school bully moves back to town and is everywhere, including his own workplace turning his world upside down.
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Awesome, can't wait for more. If I had been Nick, my first thought entering that house would have been no thank you, it would take forever to clean. I'm glad things are looking up for the young boy.
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Chapter 6 Bloodied and Broken
Bndmetl commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Bloodied and Broken
Noooooooooooo!!! Why Gary, why? I'm not a patient person, I'll be chomping at the bit for a whole week now. Actually, I lie, I'll be at the bar hitting on Jimmy. Margarita anyone? -
Time for Remembrance and Celebration
Bndmetl commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Time for Remembrance and Celebration
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Time for Remembrance and Celebration
Bndmetl commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Time for Remembrance and Celebration
I like it, I'll sit on him, you force feed him.
