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Here's one for you too.
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You probably shouldn't, but here,
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Sorry Wesley!
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Novy and I had completed all of the competitor’s entry forms at the registration tent for the days racing, we headed back out towards pit lane, our Pit for the day was pit-bay 19. Novy and AJ are racing in the Motocross Trials, Novy’s a good rider competent, but not a stand-out in the crowd type of kid, not like AJ, that kid can ride. Novy loves the sport and enjoys competing, but he’s a conservative rider and lacks that fearlessness, competitive drive needed to be really great – which I’m than
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Mason's a dick. Poor Jenny. I want to know if Sam won the backflip thingy competition, and what would his prize be?
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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Bndmetl commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
I'm loving this story, I feel for Rob and Adam. I certainly hope Rob doesn't have any more thoughts about ending it all, that was scary and has stuck with me throughout the rest of the chapter. -
It was just one of the scenario's I had originally, but in the end this is the way I went with. Let's see how it pans out.
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Hind sight is twenty-twenty. I think they were trying to navigate the crap-storm of heading Declan off at the pass. I'm thinking a kid that young would be like a bull in a china shop with something this big.
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It's only in the story because it was stuck in my head while I was writing it. After going over the chapter a million times in the last 24 hours, it's stuck in my head again if that of any comfort.
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“What I want you've got And it might be hard to handle Like the flame that burns the candle The candle feeds the flame, yeah, yeah What I've got's full stock Of thoughts and dreams that scatter Then you pull them all together And how I can't explain Oh, yeah Well, well you (Ooh-ho, hoo-ooh, ooh-oo) You make my dreams come true.” Damn song has been stuck in my head for two weeks, since Pat’s birthday party. Always the first verse and then back to the beginning. Grr! “What do yo
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We're glad you're enjoying it. There's still plenty to come I hope you feel the same way in the coming chapters. Thanks for reading, for your support and feedback.
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I know I'm sorry, I'm a horrible person. I will do better. Since I'm ripping my hair out at the moment with the next chapter of Ian's Heart, I'll try and catch up on yours. The other chapters can wait until I've done that.
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I must say Justin has become a character favorite of most. It'll be fun watching Ember handle the news I think. Thanks Wes.
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Kind of knocked the wind out of Ember though didn't it?
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Thanks Sam, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Can't wait to ready some more from you though too.
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You poor thing, we really do frustrate you don't we. I'd say we're sorry but I'm pretty sure we aren't, we like the fact that you are enjoying the story and hope you continue to do so going forward. I hope this helps a little.
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Worth the wait? I hope so. Can't wait to see how they both handle things going forward. Thanks for reading, and the feedback, it's very helpful going forward.
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It was a good one, it was definitely fun to write. Thanks for your on going support through out all the stories, we look forward to comments.
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Glad you liked it, it's going to be interesting to see how Ember handles things going forward. Thanks for reading and the feedback we appreciate it.
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“Hey Troy,” I said approaching him, he had his head under the bonnet of a 2007 Commodore Ute. “Yeah Boss?” “Give it up for the day mate, come grab a beer. The customer doesn’t want it back until Monday.” “I don’t mind.” He smiled. “Nah, don’t worry about it mate. Aaron just got here, it’s been a hard week; we’ve earned a beer.” I slapped Troy on the shoulder, then directed him to where everyone had gathered. As we approached Aaron tossed both me and Troy a beer. “Mate, wh
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Thanks, and we will. Don't forget Friday's chapter is still coming.
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You are welcome, thought you'd be happy with a little extra treat.
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Just two more sleeps where we are, then wah-la, Friday. The interview would have sent me screaming into on coming traffic if that had happened to me. It would be fun if Brady got the job wouldn't it, after that interview and Ember's reaction though, I'm not too sure.
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So much speculation, I'd like to think you were right on all counts, I'm not sure. I guess we'll have to wait and see.
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I think you're right, people can do the strangest things when they're desperate. I'm sure we all have at one time or another. I know I've been guilty of it.
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