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KayDeeMac

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  1. KayDeeMac

    Chapter 9

    I agree with Carlos!! Not a good sign when a Don shows up in Hailey, ID !! Great chapter Wayne.
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    Chapter 7

    I'm with Will - I'm going to sit back and smile!! BTW I love the word "Ostensibly" !! Great story Wayne!!
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    Chapter 6

    Another great chapter. Lovin' it!! Paul is definitely a keeper.
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    Chapter 5

    WOW! What a chapter. And yes = Stephano and Italian ?? And now Harris is in the picture?? Great intrigue Wayne - and a smokin' hot as hell scene after the cold soaking!!
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    Chapter 4

    Well we now know they are BOTH interested! But what happened with Liam?? Love this story Wayne. Thank you!!
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    Chapter 3

    SOOO much speculation and I love reading all the comments. I too suspect some sort of government relocation program to protect Corbin (aka ???) A great read Wayne. Enjoying the ride immensely!
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    Chapter 2

    Another good and also intriguing chapter. I'm hooked! Hopefully more details about Corban soon!!
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    Chapter 1

    Well you've got me interested! Great start and looking forward to more, more, & more !! Corbin is very intriguing. Let's hope no defenestration will be necessary. Also, welcome to GA !
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    Part 2

    I absolutely agree with droughtquake. Having served time in the US Army and later on working with the homeless population I saw far too many cases where ex-service personnel loose their hope and direction and seek substance to ease the pain. And you are right, a "General" or lesser discharge nullifies any assistance program. It truly breaks my heart.
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    Part 1

    Yes a tear grabber but also enlightening. Thanks mancunian.
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    Chapter 12

    Yes - I concur with droughtquake on re-reading JJ's reason for running and do hope there are rumors sufficient enough that will put that monster where he belongs. Here in the US people who are incarcerated for abusing children are not well liked by fellow prisoners!! Sometimes karma does make sense! A lot of drama in this chapter - hopefully all will be sorted out. Fantastic story - I'm loving every chapter.
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    Chapter 11

    You were right - that was a Kleenex chapter - especially with the Major and those pictures. Another great chapter to a great story.
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    Chapter 10

    Yes Yes Yess!! Jason is JJ! I'm sooo happy!! But, you don't have to tell the social worker "everything" ! I will definitely read Lost Soul - The Ox. I truly appreciate your stories Mancunian. Thank you.
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    Chapter 7

    Too much tecky stuff!!
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    Brothers

    Another excellent chapter. I want to reach inside to slap some sense into Artie's head. I also believe Thomas is correct in speculating Grandpa and "Sleaze Ball" Ezra are in cahoots!! Now I am caught up and must patiently await the next chapter from you Aceinthehole!!! Love this story !!
  16. Ezra is definitely up to something and it's not going to be good! I understand Artie's upbringing will resonate with the words Ezra is saying - but - he needs to get his head out of the Texas sand!
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    The Wall

    Ezra is a stalker. Also two things caught my gut - his demeaning tone of Andy and the burst of "preaching" to Charlotte. I wonder if the sexual liaison with Sarah was non-consensual ???
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    Communication

    Emotional roller coaster indeed ! Exceptional writing to enable us, the readers, to feel the pain and anxieties of all the characters, Sensational chapter Aceinthehole!
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    Used

    Yea I'm not surprised Ezra and Adam were doing the nasty - but it does sound like Ezra is a real douche bag!! Adam has a right to be very concerned about his intensions. But the legal custody papers are a mystery. Another awesome chapter. Thank you!!
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    Second Chance

    A great chapter. I was expecting more fireworks but they got a good judge who could read between the lies!! Now Ezra - that's a mystery. You are very good Aceinthehole at bringing in unexpected coincidences !! What does his card say?? Lovin' this story!
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    Comforted

    OH DEAR!!!
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    Distracted

    And the tension mounts. Another great chapter!! Thank you Aecinthehole.
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    Sealed

    Well as Betty said: "fasten your seat belts - it's going to be a bumpy ride!"
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    Reunion

    Mason seems to be a good companion for Andy, offering different perspectives on daily situations. And yes - I think we are all waiting for the other shoe (grandparents) to drop!
  25. Another great chapter Aceinthehole. You have a unique ability to connect and portray both young and young-adult mind sets. What a wonderful story. I wonder if this serenity is going to be upset anytime soon.
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