Chapter 11

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 11

I wish I was by the pool. lol
- July 23, 2017
- 4 comments
Chapter 10

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 10

These guys definitely seem a bit oversexed at times. lol
- July 23, 2017
- 2 comments
Chapter 9

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 9

It's been my experience that mom's know entirely too much.
- July 23, 2017
- 2 comments
Chapter 8

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 8

The thought that anyone would do that to a kid... ugh. on a more positive side... anyone living in NY in the 90's.... I give you Yolanda Vega:
- July 23, 2017
- 2 comments
Chapter 7

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 7

This was an okay chapter but the scene with the Bishop was way too political didn't really fit.
- July 23, 2017
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Chapter 6

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 6

So many threads started right at the beginning of this epic length story. It's been fun rereading this after being away for so long.
- July 23, 2017
- 4 comments
Chapter 5

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 5

I definitely like the banter. Some of the emotional stuff skid by quickly, but I know there will be no shortage of tearjerker moments.
- July 23, 2017
- 4 comments
Chapter 4

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 4

Pretty sure they shouldn't no. Don definitely subscribes to the Mercedes Lackey writing approach "Make the reader love the character... then drop a mountain on them."
- July 22, 2017
- 3 comments
Chapter 3

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 3

I definitely enjoyed the way Cam handled the good professor.
- July 22, 2017
- 4 comments
Chapter 2

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 2

I love the banter and the life lesson on drugs.
- July 22, 2017
- 3 comments
Chapter 1

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 1

It is a great start to the story. It certainly lays the groundwork for the tear-jerking to come.
- July 22, 2017
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Series list

Myr replied to Aditus's topic in Help

A space at the end does that as well. I had to fix Working it Out for that issue Sunday...
- July 18, 2017
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Working It Out Part 3

Myr reviewed Don H's story in Fiction

This is a great wrap up to Matt and Mike's story. It's an emotional rollercoaster.
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 15

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 15

Great story! I enjoyed as much reading it again as I did reading it the first time years ago.
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 14

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 14

I'm glad that things keeping working out eventually
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 13

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 13

Sweet scene at the end.
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 12

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 12

Another emotional roller-coaster
- July 17, 2017
- 2 comments
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Chapter 11

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 11

Father Rohm's letter is very touching
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 10

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 10

I like Father Rohm. He's pretty diverse for a priest in any sort of gay story
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 9

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 9

The guys can be a real hoot, even with everything going on around them.
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 8

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 8

At least Father Rohm got some good news
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 7

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 7

I really have to groan at some of those jokes. lol
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 6

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 6

It is really nice to see the family dynamic in this story.
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 5

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 5

Jeff must have ended up on the Cubs team... they finally won. lol
- July 17, 2017
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Chapter 4

Myr commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 4

The villain resurfaces. Good chapter
- July 17, 2017
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