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Josh likes to feel empowered by the fact he has a body people want it/him but it’s the one thing he has absolute control over
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Have you ever met some and just felt at ease with them? Like you’ve known them your entire life? That’s what Gavin feels maybe they haven’t had some massive private one on one but to him he never gets that. Whatvseems superficial to you may. Not seem like that to Gavin. There is always a motive to the people that want to get to know him. As with josh he has no motive at all. Gavin has motives for the Hawaii trip is to get to know him better granted it could or could not happen since it won’t be just the two of them. Gavin’s hoping to make it feel more “organic” we haven’t heard what Josh thinks at all on it. He keeps his emotions bottled. For josh the connection started when Gavin didn’t judge him that afternoon he’s always had trust issues and I’m not saying he’s over them at all but he could start seeing something good in all his bad luck that he has. Trust me things you’ve pointed out won’t go unanswered or touched on.
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I think at this point Josh is exhausted to keep fighting with everything and everyone. We don’t really know what he thinks either.
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I hear a knock on my door. “What?” I groan out. The door opens and Taylor walks in and shuts the door. He looks at me and asks, “You gonna get out of bed today?” “No,” I say pulling the cover over my head. I feel the corner of the bed dip as he sits on it, “You need to get out of bed Josh. Joe has been calling your phone which I told you the new one came in five days ago. You’ve been dropped from your college classes.” “I don’t care,” I mumble out. Taylor rips the covers
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Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying the story!
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It was a combination of both Clint being on the board and Nico mishandling the situation. Joe implied a ton of things that probably didn't go unnoticed, I feel almost bad for Joe in away because he does try to fix things even though he ends up screwing them up even more. We may find Josh in a bad state of mind next chapter, because he made a rash decision and he is probably going to make the wrong ones still like you said try and throw himself into work which could be a massive downfall. I have started writing it and well It's interesting how he dealing with things.
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You’re right. Joe is also a teenager not understanding the way things work all he knows is that his brother is on the hospital and he wants to see him. Was it handled right no not at all. It was a tense day for them all.
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I feel bad for Joe, because I believe he is willing to do anything to fix his relationship with his twin. No he is book smart, but he lacks empathy for others. Agreed those who cannot keep things to themselves is a pet peeve. I am really happy you are enjoying the story!
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I wanted to give him a lot of depth I originally had the interaction with Xander shortened, but it didnt feel right to me. I wanted to show that yes Gavin is in the spotlight, most young adults that are in that position seem to be very self centered and all about "me" Where as Gavin has so much love to give he doesn't think about that its all about me mentality. He feels like he is to blame for Xander not leaving since he was gone. Joe tried to over compensate and sticks his foot in his mouth non-stop. Agreed he needs a ball gag. Josh was embarrassed and knew more question would follow, agreed it wasn't okay with how he left things. Let's hope Gavin can get through to him.
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Hahah thank you! Yes, I wanted to answer some burning questions but leave more to the story!
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I am HAPPY with that haha! I know you have been a amazing reader of all my stories. I hope this one is showing to be different before I followed a very tight formula as in I have to do this at this point, it has to be only this long. This time, I am just writing until I am content with the chapter I threw out my formula I felt as if it was holding back, I would cut out details to shorten now I am like oh it's 15 pages screw it! Thank you for the continued support!
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(Gavin’s POV) I jog over to the black SUV I don’t want to Josh to leave on these terms. He rolls down the window, and he squints at me. “Hey, are you okay?” I ask. “A headache.” He manages to get out. “Josh, how bad is your headache?” Jane asks. “So…bad.” He finally manages to get out. Jane gets out of the SUV and runs to Josh’s side. “Josh, look at me.” She tells him opening the door. The moment she opens the door he pukes all over himself and goes li
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AHHHHHHHH I cant comment to any of this! *Spoilers*!
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Jane is easily one of my favorite characters. She’s always been able to adapt and overcome also her time around Gavin has rubbed off she’s more personable. I believe Gavin is extremely lonely he’s in a spot where everyone wants to be you’re “friend” but not be a friend. Clint just wants his kids happy and he’ll do whatever it takes. Xander will be introduced officially next chapter. Thank you for reading!!
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Can’t say that I disagree at all. 😉 I kind of consider this chapter and the next as one big chapter just split. This one was long already. I can’t say much else I don’t want to spoil anything
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Thank you! I know it had a bit of some filler in the chapter but It was needed
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I can’t help but glance over at Gavin who is sprawled out across his bed in nothing but Calvin Klein boxers that are tight. I didn’t realize it was possible for someone to have so many muscles in their back, but he does. He has the tightest bubble butt I have ever seen. Yes, I have seen him in just swim trunks on Instagram, but this is real life. I silently laugh as he lets out one of the softest snores I have ever heard. I grab my laptop from my bag and boot it up. I need something to distr
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It's very possible, IF he has seen it, but Josh isn't out to Gavin about anything yet. IF Gavin did see the site for all he knows it could be Joe. It's also a big IF
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Well with the car, Joe just happened to have it at the time Not counting Starting over out just yet
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At that point they will cross that bridge when it happens. Clint isn’t expecting them two to just hit it off. He’s taking a chance he’s done research on Josh he knows his a genuine person. Like Clint told him they’d cross those bridges if and when it came to it.
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Hence the reason I said I don’t have an editor that it would be a bit rough. In the early stages I had to change the name and it didn't save. Mistakes happen, I do everything in my power to fix them until I do find an editor. Thanks. KD
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Clint isn't as clueless to things as he likes to act. The man is smart, he wants what's best for his son and Josh. Joe could cause alot of problems for Josh if he wanted.
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That is why there is so much resentment right now because Josh did have to live on the streets Joe was tucked safely in bed.
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Hmmm you could be right!
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I did not realize the small abbreviations I used turned into Emojis haha
