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The "Thing" is intense and I think Ryder being who he is we really wont see how he feels about it until it's boiled up
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Ew they have had worse in their mouth
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It was well worth it!
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Thank you, Unfortunately it posted to nifty a few hours later, that's why I love GA it instantly posts. Tyler is a fun character to write, and Mom drops some bombs
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Thank you!
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I do believe the same that Ryder needs this kind of person in his life.
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I open my eyes, feeling something pressing into my butt. I reach around and grab what’s poking me. My eyes open wide as I realize what it is. Holy shit, he is huge. I realize there is an arm pressed to my chest, holding me, and I feel the rest of my body pressed up against someone warm. That’s when the sharp pain in my head hits me and I feel like I am going to throw up. I move quickly and almost fall off the bed. There’s a trashcan by the bed. I am trying to hold it down, but
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It's something that will change everyone involved that's for sure. I think it was a wrong place wrong time thing.
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We will find out next chapter what set the coach off and if this is just a one time thing or something we just havent seen. We will learn a lot more of Tyler
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Thank you, yeah I think he finally got to his breaking point where he was like screw it I need to rebel. Tyler is a complex yet simple character. It's going to be interesting for them both
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In future chapters we really start to get a better picture of Tyler and what skeletons lie in his closet. He tries to be the best possible version of himself because he knows what a pitfall could do to those he is around. Don't worry we will get inside that head of his soon enough. Coach and Ryder have a ton of ground work to work on.
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Hahaha they really would be a great couple who knows what's going to happen
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I think the effects will be around for future chapters that's for sure.
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We will lean a lot more about Tyler and alot of the skeletons he keeps hidden.
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Im so sorry, and it's true some people can't understand no.
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I agree I think it's desperately trying to find someone he can relate to or just build some sort of emotional connection.
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I lay back panting, looking over at him, and feel the cold air hit my sweaty body. It sends a chill through me. “That was fun,” I say, putting my hand on his chest. He laughs. “Yeah… it was.” “We need to keep doing this,” I tell him. Callen leans up on one arm and looks at me. “Why, so you can keep kicking my ass in how fast you are?” “Dude, I am just trying to get you running faster !” I tell him. “Meh, I like slow
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“You sure you don’t want to go with the rest of the team and celebrate?” my Dad asks, as he locks the field house. “No,” I say, moving the strap of my bag to my other shoulder. I don’t really want to have a heart to heart with him. It’s not that I dislike him I love him, I just don’t know if I will get my dad or the coach. He looks at me with a concerned look on his face, “Son, it’s going to be ok.” “Dad, it’s just been a long week,” I tell him sh
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100% We will see!!!
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Thank you so much! Yes Rusty has put alot of time into editing and helping me organize the story where it's not going to leave holes in it. I can say this much these new chapters I have never felt more confident in my writing that is for sure!
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Trust me I am! These new chapters are good! I hope you will love them!
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Trust me this is far from over!
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I think he just needs a friend and maybe he can find that. Yes Callen might need to go to the group as well
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“So how are you and Callen progressing?” Dr. Decker asks. I fiddle around with some of the trinkets on her windowsill. “We’re ok.” “But?” “It’s stupid.” I I tell her as I plop myself on the little couch facing her “Well, it’s obviously not stupid if it has you so worked up about everything,” she says, leaning back in her chair. “We both just have so much on our plate that when we are together, it’s just awkward at
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