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I grip the armrest as the plane shakes, “You ok Jack?” Mr. Castiglione asks. I nod, not trusting my voice, plus I am trying to keep from puking up my breakfast. I look at him smirking at me, and I narrow my eyes at him. It was a nice private jet; the seats are leather and massive I had my legs tucked under me and I still had room. I watch him intensely, “So Jack, this your first time flying?” I nod my head, “Yeah, I didn’t know it would be this nerve-wracking.” He laughs, “So, Jo
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A massive Thank you to everyone who has read this first chapter! I was so nervous because I didn't have an editor and it would be a bit rough, but Thank you to EVERYONE who has taken the time to read this new story I am excited to put out another chapter really soon!
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Josh Takes all the precautions to stay safe now. We get to see more of why in chapter two and in chapter three we will really dig into why Joe feels guilty Taylor has a real big soft spot for Josh, We will see different sides of him. Mr. Castiglione is a good person with good intentions just Sometimes doesn't understand the Youth of today. Safe travels! I am glad you decided to read the story!
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Josh manages by avoiding him mostly.
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hahaha, it was nice to try something new with this story, I dont know I haven't felt this happy to write since the very beginning of Paper Walls
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Maybe....🤷♂️
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“Mr. McKenzie, are you going to join the rest of the class?” Dr. Crest asks from the front of the room. I slowly raise my head off the desk, I look over and I feel my twin’s eyes burning into me. I just give him a shrug. “Sorry, was a long night at work.” I offer leaning back into the cramped desk. Dr. Crest removes his glasses and rubs his eyes. “Maybe you should consider getting a different job, doesn’t seem like your twin isn’t having these issues, nor do his grades compared to yours.
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Forced to grow up quicker than most teenagers at eighteen Joshua is far more independent that anyone else his age. What if there is an irreparable rift between the one person who is supposed to understand you the most...your twin? Josh and Joe are completely identical but are different in every way possible. Joe is on a football scholarship and very popular with an amazing girlfriend. Josh is more reserved, throws himself into work to avoid his twin and the growing anxiety that he will never fill this void that's weighing him down.
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That’s my frustration I am all for constructive criticism. I believe it’s the only way for a writer to re-evaluate and think about what they are writing. It’s truly helpful but comments like that picking out flaws not actually offering anything substantial is frustrating and it makes writers not want to write or post at all. A ton of writers stay up until insane hours of the night writing there will be mistakes and I’ve been lucky to catch a few and not so lucky to not catch some. But comments like these they just completely get under my skin.
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Are you actually going to be helpful and give constructive feedback or going to be like this? Because you are 18 chapters in and this is the second messup you have found and decide to point it out like this. This isn’t actually helpful it’s pretty obnoxious to be completely honest it’s not constructive criticism/feedback. It’s straight criticism and making writers feel stupid.
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TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
KD_stories commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
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Yes they can if they have late or early birthdays my best friend was a freshman at 15.
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I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I'm flattered you would want to borrow aspects of my writing, but the most important thing I have learned and been taught is that in writing is to use your own voice, borrowing from your own experiences. You have it inside you. What you have to do is bring it out, and use your own creative ideas to do it. Id bee happy to lend you advice and things. I really look forward to reading your work.
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THANK YOU! Chapter 7 will be dealing with the fall out of everything, and it's possible that Landon's past comes back get him once again
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I think things will start to slowly unravel in the next chapter or so!
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Well Unfortunately, between one job that is full time, and my other job which is 25 hours a week, and going to college. Time doesnt seem to be my friend at all. While I wished I had more time to post because I have multiple stories on a back burner that I have never put up it's not the case I work on what I can and when I experience writers block on one I switch to work on another. As to starting to read new stories thats always going to be a gamble, life happens.
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As we are walking to the car, Liam asks, “You okay?” I can’t stop thinking about the conversation that me and Chandler were having not even five minutes ago. “Yeah, just, this fucking hangover sucks,” I tell him. I didn’t even notice that Chandler was following behind us. “You’re coming?” “Yeah, might as well, nothing to do here,” he says not meeting my eye. “Dude, of course, he is,” Liam says, smiling, as he unlocks the door. I walk to the back of the car not wanting to be
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Thank you!!! Yes I wrapped up the necessary story lines, but some just needed to be open to explore in this next part.
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Book two will be more focused on Jaxson, and how he is dealing with Tyler leaving, and Jeremy not being around as much. Now that he has Terrin, plus the agreement the two of them made. You are right I dont think Ryder will be missing Tyler much because he will be seeing him. We will see them all return in the next part!
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Thank you! I have started working on the second part, but I don't have a time table to release it. I just know it's going to shift in characters but they will all be back
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He was also in bed with his brother. Tyler didn’t exactly come off as welcoming at first
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THe Hurricane really put me behind on everything I wanted. Well With Terrin the only one who knows is Jaxson. I think the others would know if they paid attention to the obvious signs, but then again it's been a very busy few days! I am glad you followed the story!
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*Ryder* I finally hear Jeremy come out of the shower and back to his room. I stayed up until 12am last night and he still was not home when I fell asleep. I walk over to his door and knock on it. “Yeah?” he yells from behind the door. I open it and he is lazing back on his bed in just his boxers. He looks skinnier, and I can tell he is exhausted. “You got in really late last night.” I tell him, leaning on the dresser.
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I don't know about soulmates but the last chapter is going to be good I can promise that.
