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I grip the armrest as the plane shakes, “You ok Jack?” Mr. Castiglione asks. I nod, not trusting my voice, plus I am trying to keep from puking up my breakfast. I look at him smirking at me, and I narrow my eyes at him. It was a nice private jet; the seats are leather and massive I had my legs tucked under me and I still had room. I watch him intensely, “So Jack, this your first time flying?” I nod my head, “Yeah, I didn’t know it would be this nerve-wracking.” He laughs, “So, Jo
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A massive Thank you to everyone who has read this first chapter! I was so nervous because I didn't have an editor and it would be a bit rough, but Thank you to EVERYONE who has taken the time to read this new story I am excited to put out another chapter really soon!
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Josh Takes all the precautions to stay safe now. We get to see more of why in chapter two and in chapter three we will really dig into why Joe feels guilty Taylor has a real big soft spot for Josh, We will see different sides of him. Mr. Castiglione is a good person with good intentions just Sometimes doesn't understand the Youth of today. Safe travels! I am glad you decided to read the story!
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Josh manages by avoiding him mostly.
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hahaha, it was nice to try something new with this story, I dont know I haven't felt this happy to write since the very beginning of Paper Walls
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Maybe....🤷♂️
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“Mr. McKenzie, are you going to join the rest of the class?” Dr. Crest asks from the front of the room. I slowly raise my head off the desk, I look over and I feel my twin’s eyes burning into me. I just give him a shrug. “Sorry, was a long night at work.” I offer leaning back into the cramped desk. Dr. Crest removes his glasses and rubs his eyes. “Maybe you should consider getting a different job, doesn’t seem like your twin isn’t having these issues, nor do his grades compared to yours.
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Forced to grow up quicker than most teenagers at eighteen Joshua is far more independent that anyone else his age. What if there is an irreparable rift between the one person who is supposed to understand you the most...your twin? Josh and Joe are completely identical but are different in every way possible. Joe is on a football scholarship and very popular with an amazing girlfriend. Josh is more reserved, throws himself into work to avoid his twin and the growing anxiety that he will never fill this void that's weighing him down.
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Most "villains" or assholes that I have written come from personal experience, and well the world that we live in today. You can't look at anything without seeing them being praised for something. There have been characters like that, that I have wrote and agree with you 100% it exhausts me to the max I feel drained emotionally especially, after a rough chapter involving the villains.
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That’s my frustration I am all for constructive criticism. I believe it’s the only way for a writer to re-evaluate and think about what they are writing. It’s truly helpful but comments like that picking out flaws not actually offering anything substantial is frustrating and it makes writers not want to write or post at all. A ton of writers stay up until insane hours of the night writing there will be mistakes and I’ve been lucky to catch a few and not so lucky to not catch some. But comments like these they just completely get under my skin.
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Are you actually going to be helpful and give constructive feedback or going to be like this? Because you are 18 chapters in and this is the second messup you have found and decide to point it out like this. This isn’t actually helpful it’s pretty obnoxious to be completely honest it’s not constructive criticism/feedback. It’s straight criticism and making writers feel stupid.
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lets work together Topic Tuesday #21: Working with a Team.
KD_stories replied to Brayon's topic in Writer's Circle
For me it's always great working with an editor. Especially one who sees where you want to go for the story, I have had relaxed editors I have had uptight editors, I have had some who didnt want to call me on it, I prefer honest ones like Rusty he wouldn't hesitate to tell me dude this sucks you write better redo it, and of course he was correct I would be lazy and he would push me to do better, to write better. I have never had a beta wouldn't mind though. -
lets work together Topic Tuesday #17: Supporting Each Other
KD_stories replied to Brayon's topic in Writer's Circle
This is something I am currently working on. After being an avid reader for years then started to write I would send out comments or so on a chapter and no reply it’s a massive reason I jumped ship and came here for the interaction. With readers and writers but in the past I have had bad experiences where the writers have been way to established and couldn’t talk to people so I kind of just stopped. I am working on it a lot more here lately. Everyone seems to be super nice and helpful. I am trying to establish more connections and communications and supporting other authors there are some fantastic writers here. -
I am so glad I am not the only one who uses this! As to where my charaxters come from. I take bits of pieces from people I knew/know and take what I like or dislike about them and kind of mold the character to what I think would work. Their personalities are sometimes based on people I know as well. Most aren’t, I think I try to base them as if it was someone I’d like to talk to. I guess trying to make them seem more human I guess
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TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
KD_stories commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 7: Retribution
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Yes they can if they have late or early birthdays my best friend was a freshman at 15.
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I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I'm flattered you would want to borrow aspects of my writing, but the most important thing I have learned and been taught is that in writing is to use your own voice, borrowing from your own experiences. You have it inside you. What you have to do is bring it out, and use your own creative ideas to do it. Id bee happy to lend you advice and things. I really look forward to reading your work.
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THANK YOU! Chapter 7 will be dealing with the fall out of everything, and it's possible that Landon's past comes back get him once again
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I think things will start to slowly unravel in the next chapter or so!
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Well Unfortunately, between one job that is full time, and my other job which is 25 hours a week, and going to college. Time doesnt seem to be my friend at all. While I wished I had more time to post because I have multiple stories on a back burner that I have never put up it's not the case I work on what I can and when I experience writers block on one I switch to work on another. As to starting to read new stories thats always going to be a gamble, life happens.
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As we are walking to the car, Liam asks, “You okay?” I can’t stop thinking about the conversation that me and Chandler were having not even five minutes ago. “Yeah, just, this fucking hangover sucks,” I tell him. I didn’t even notice that Chandler was following behind us. “You’re coming?” “Yeah, might as well, nothing to do here,” he says not meeting my eye. “Dude, of course, he is,” Liam says, smiling, as he unlocks the door. I walk to the back of the car not wanting to be
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Thank you!!! Yes I wrapped up the necessary story lines, but some just needed to be open to explore in this next part.
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Book two will be more focused on Jaxson, and how he is dealing with Tyler leaving, and Jeremy not being around as much. Now that he has Terrin, plus the agreement the two of them made. You are right I dont think Ryder will be missing Tyler much because he will be seeing him. We will see them all return in the next part!
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I Look forward to hearing what you think! I wanted to post this sooner, ,but the hurricane stopped me and things just got so busy here. But it's a long last chapter so hopefully that makes up for it!
