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It has been amazing working with you Rusty! I could not have gotten this far without you that is for sure! I am proud of what you helped me create here! I am excited for our next adventure
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Thank you! I have started working on the second part, but I don't have a time table to release it. I just know it's going to shift in characters but they will all be back
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He was also in bed with his brother. Tyler didn’t exactly come off as welcoming at first
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THe Hurricane really put me behind on everything I wanted. Well With Terrin the only one who knows is Jaxson. I think the others would know if they paid attention to the obvious signs, but then again it's been a very busy few days! I am glad you followed the story!
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*Ryder* I finally hear Jeremy come out of the shower and back to his room. I stayed up until 12am last night and he still was not home when I fell asleep. I walk over to his door and knock on it. “Yeah?” he yells from behind the door. I open it and he is lazing back on his bed in just his boxers. He looks skinnier, and I can tell he is exhausted. “You got in really late last night.” I tell him, leaning on the dresser.
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I think as a writer you have to let some things drip from your personal life into your characters. I know from every story I wrote there is a little of things I have dealt with in the character. I think that's how you bridge that gap so readers can relate to a character more and make them less words on page and more of someone you can relate with
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I write because I have too. If not these ideas get stuck in my head and they just sit there. I will ignore it, but the idea will wake me up in the night and I know I need to get it out. I also write for myself, then the readers. I think it's important to put your voice out there and most of us can only do that through our writing. Most of my darkest thoughts, fears, anger are through all the writing I have done. If i happen to touch a few people with emotions that is awesome, I enjoy the feedback and what I can do better for the next time. Overall though I do it for me.
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There will be a part two sooner than you think.
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I don't know about soulmates but the last chapter is going to be good I can promise that.
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Doesn't he always!
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*Tyler* I pull my jacket closer to me, and scoot to the edge of my seat. My anxiety has been on high this whole game. I see Ryder get tackled again, and I let out a wince. “Sweetie, it’s okay.” Mrs. K says beside me. I let out a little laugh, “I know, it’s just I hate seeing him get tackled!” “Dude, man up!” Jaxson says. “Shut up!” I counter. “Why can’t he just pass the ball to Jeremy?” Jaxson asks Mrs.
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Onim could be right, We have barely scratched the surface of the pain that Landon has. Chandler is starting to see passed the snarky comments and the sarcasm that Landon puts up. Chandler will be pushing alot of Landon's buttons in the next chapter that is for sure.
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Thanks Rusty! I did drift for awhile but I'm coming back thanks for all the hard work you put in!
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The party is lit, I love it, the bass is so heavy from the speaks, and there are people everywhere. I look at Liam, who is holding hands with Julie. I look for Chandler, to see if he is going to show up, but of course I don’t see him, actually I haven’t seen him in a few days he wasn’t at school. I am handed a cup as soon as I walk into the kitchen, and I see the keg. I go to it and pour myself some beer and take a swig before topping it off. I feel the cold liquid run down my throat. It has
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maybe next chapter!
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Yeah I wanted to show his personality in a chapter to kind of get the jist of him just a little bit
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Thank you!
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I slowly open my eyes, and I can feel the heavy arm on me. I shift and it falls to the side. Garret stirs. “Hey man.” “Hey…” I reply, looking at him, and realizing my head is still on his chest, I move it “Relax, man. You were so wiped out from the anxiety attack that I helped you move to the bed, and you asked if I would stay. Sorry, I must have fell asleep, man.” “No, it’s okay. I’m the one that’s sorry. I didn’t know I kept you here for so long,” I tell him, avoiding eye co
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And that's the problem with Landon he knows what's happened but I think he's been led to believe that it was okay. Chandler is is one of those he sees bad things happen to good people and he can't understand why
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Actually after this next chapter the story is going to take a new direction, that has not been re-done or anything
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The kitchen and it is utter chaos when I walk in and all I want is coffee. Helen is trying to make a plate for Jake, I make a beeline to the coffee, and pour a cup, I catch Helen eyeing me. I don’t say anything; I just roll my eyes and grab a seat by Jake. “You ready for school?” He shrugs his shoulders, “Just ready to see friends.” “True, what grade are you even in?” I ask, blowing on the coffee. “8th grade, I will see you next year! I will be a freshman!” he says, getting excited.
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Landon is dealing with his own demons from the feeling that he was abandoned to what he's done for the affection that he needed. So he's extremely angry and he doesnt understand the best way to deal with it. Chandler keeps the Greenfields at arms length to how bad it really does get, because he already feels guilty about the fact they spend money on him.
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They dont know the extent of the damage he is suffering, Chandler has kept them at arms length. He doesnt see himself in the best of light, which in the coming chapters we will get more of why he is so distant
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Yes, I really wanted to show a different side of Garret a more sensitive side to him, because he portrays that he is just a badass.
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YES! That's why football is the biggest part of Ryder's life for him! It's predictable, he understands it, he can calculate the moves, he can figure out the outcomes normally It's him being in control over his life. I love writing Jaxson into scenes, he is such a brat but so fun to have into the story even though he isn't for everyone I think him giving Jeremy hell was one of my favorite parts to write
