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You can feel the tension with him and his father that is for sure which will be explored and addressed in future chapters
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Trust me I want too!! Thank you!
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He is definitely finding his voice more now. He expects everyone to make the first move because he feels a bit awkward when he does it, because what if he's rejected.
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The next week doesn’t go by as quickly as I would like; it still seems like most of the team resents me. I mean, none of them are hostile towards me, but they don’t go out of their way to talk to me. Which really sucks if I can be honest, but I never let it show. Shawn actually does talk to me a lot, and I can tell other players want to as well, but they just don’t know how to approach me. As usual, I’m the last one left in the locker room waiting for my dad., Shawn has lon
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Thank you so much!
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Hey! Thank you for all this useful info! Really good stuff to learn!
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Thank you!!! For the continued support!
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Coach and his wife are not fools. It's hard to keep a secret so young. Time will tell!
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Thank you! I think we will always find out who Jeremy is soon enough! Thank you for always reading and being a huge supporter!
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*Shawn* "How old is your brother?" Coach asks. "He's thirteen, sir," I tell him, looking over at Ryder, whose brows furrow. "Does he play ball?" Coach asks. "No sir, he doesn’t," I tell him. "I thought you had a little brother," Ryder says. "He is my little brother." "But you said you have to watch him," Ryder presses. I sigh, "I do." "Is he, like, special or something?"
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Thank you! Yeah the coach has his eyes on a bigger prize than just football!
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Just a little can't give it all away!
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Thank you! I am loving this site!
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Thanks Jeff! Yes two of them do turn a corner, but Ryder still kind of shuts down a little bit in coming chapters, but it does change
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Yes! One thing I try to do for all my writing is to make sure the characters are human. That they are going to mess up and do something dumb and act way. Thank you I had no idea about the discussion Thread! I am still getting used to this site!
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*Shawn* Finally, the week from hell is over. I head out of the locker room and catch up with Garret. "Sup man?" I ask, shaking his hand and bringing him in to a hug. "Nothing, got anything planned?" he asks. I shake my head and leftover water from the shower shakes off as well. "Nah, was it me, or was Coach kind of pissed at us today?" Garret just shakes his head no. "I mean, not that I really paid attention. I mean, did he ta
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Exactly they wanted to establish that they were the dominate ones in the weight room and all. Teens have so much pride and they dont want it compromised, and they will have to learn to get along more that is for sure!
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Yes I used to be on a football team in high school. I am very happy to hear that you are enjoying it! Yeah different coaches have their own techniques on things.
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Thank you so much! I look forward to seeing how you like the progression of the story!
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Hey!!! Yes I got in contact with an old friend who told me about it so I was like why not? I love it! I love being able to talk to readers and this flows so much easier. Yes I will be catching it all up! Plus being able to more detail and things into the chapters not to worry I am writing new chapters now! I am glad you found me here!
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Thank you! The dad is someone that you just kind of see it all develope. Thank you for the kind words!! I am happy to have gotten your attention
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“Want to throw the ball around?” I ask, not sure what else to do. He nods, “Yeah, sure, why not.” “Cool, I have a ball out back.” I tell him, leading him to the back yard. He just laughs, “Of course you do.” I get a little self conscious at the statement; I guess there isn’t much else to me besides football. “Yeah, my dad and I normally throw it around after school and stuff, but probably won’t be doing that for a while.” He lobs
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Hey! I wished you would have! I like the posting here. So much easier, I actually was talking to my first ever editor/friend he told me to try it out here.
