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hahaha I can't leave it without something going unanswered
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Well the coach is the coach so we will see about his "dream team" and Jeremy is that rock Ryder needs. Shawns actions will be revealed next chapter!
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I think he will start looking up on things that is for sure
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This is true, Ryder needs more of a friend than anything else
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I hear a knock on the door, and I get off the couch to open the door. Shawn is standing there, dripping wet from the rain outside. “Dude, you okay?” “Can I come in?” he asks, avoiding my gaze. “Yeah, um, let me grab you a towel,” I tell him and go to the bathroom to look for one. I run back to the door and hand him the towel, “What’s going on, man?” “Is Coach home?” he asks. “No, my mom went to pick him up from the airport. His f
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Ryder enjoyed the showboating his skills for sure. I hope we did have a little break through with the two of them this next chapter is going to clear up so much more
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A ton is going on with Jeremy is all i will say
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Hahaha Yeah it felt good to be able to write his skills and show them off
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Soon alot will be revealed soon! Renee is a complicated character who doesnt go away
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Jeremy still isn’t picking up my calls or returning my texts, so I do my morning run and take a shower. Debating what to wear the first day of school, I settle on green compression boxers and khaki shorts, with a pink polo shirt. A friend back home said the shirt brought out my eyes and had a nice contrast against my darker complexion I smile at my reflection in the mirror, my teeth shiny and bright. I feel myself getting a boner. I reposition myself, so it won’t be so noticeable
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Thank you! Yes Ryder's reaction is to overreact because he is a teen who does not know any better and who is full of anxiety and he doesn't have his safety net he really doesn't have alot of people he trusts to turn to at this point.
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Hey thank you! Well all the stress and anxiety Ryder has been feeling is leading up to these next few chapters! The tension with his Dad will continue but it will hit a boiling point!
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Hey! Well me and my last editor had a disagreement, and we parted ways, I know it can be a drag waiting for the story, but they are edited way better, and I get to change a few minor things. Plus it helps me with writing new chapters, trust me they are coming!
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The tension with him and his dad will keep getting more intense as the story goes on
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After we finish eating breakfast, my dad looks at me. "Feel like going to the field and tossing the ball around for a little while?" "Do you like to eat steak?" I ask. He just grins. "That's my boy. Last toss around for a few weeks, until we can get school, practice, and games in a good pattern." I run upstairs and throw on a different tank top, and grab an extra pair of shorts, boxers, and tank top. I always have to shower after we toss the ball around.
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Thank you, Ryder's dad is a complex character He wants what is best for Ryder and alot of times he thinks that not focusing on the past is what is best for him, other times he gets overwhelmed because he cannot control what is happening to him. I am happy to hear you are hooked thank you!
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The trauma he experienced is a huge amount, he probably knows more than what he will ever let on, because deep down he doesn't want to put that on others that guilt of knowing what happened, then again alot of it he has just blocked out. School will be awkward for him
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Thank you and you are spot on. I know in coming chapters tension will be rising alot between characters.
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The brothers are also complex as well, and Ryder does have a thick armor that's hard to get through, thank you for reading!
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That is the big question right there! I can't answer that right now
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Hahah thank you, he really is a messed up kid. But he does have a heart of gold
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Yeah that's something that will really be explored in later chapters as well, and pretty soon we will get a ton more insight into Ryder
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Thank you for continuing to read!
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“Mom, I really don’t need any new clothes,” I tell her as we pull up to the mall. “Really, you don’t need any at all?” she says, looking at me. “I mean, not really, I have a lot of clothes.” “So, you don’t need any compression boxers, jeans, socks, or shirts,” she says, looking at me. I think about it. I kind of do need some more compression boxers. “I mean. maybe some boxers, and socks.” I tell her, going red in the face. “That’s
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