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  1. MacGreg

    Proof

    I couldn't be happier to see you post something, boy. This poem is clearly written from your heart, and I love it. Bleeding has never been, nor will it ever be, required of you - not by me - so put that out of your head right now. Obedience can be demonstrated in everyday ways, even the small stuff. Concentrate on that. i won't ever demand anything more from you. xo
  2. Go to the Gulf Coast or something!
  3. MacGreg

    Lust

    The power of this poem is in its succinctness. Brief phrases that mirror the briefness (and excitement) of the encounter. Excellent, form or no form.
  4. An interesting read: http://gomag.com/article/healing-through-bdsm/
  5. Really happy to hear it, boy!
  6. MacGreg

    What I Leave

    Love you, boy. your poetry sings, always, no matter the subject matter, whether harsh or sweet.
  7. Thanks, Wayne. It's nice to see it there after such a long hiatus. I've had a few binge-readers in the past 48 hours, that feels good, too. Probably your prompting!
  8. Hehe, you might be the only one who got it.
  9. Rain/snow mix happening now, full blizzard later. I was out at a new-build jobsite helping measure cabinet layout on the floor, and the structure only had exterior walls and a roof - no drywall, no heat. I'll be heading home early today. Hope you DiCsters are good!
  10. Great to read everyone's answers!
  11. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    I try not to fall into stereotyping situations and people, but I'm sure I do sometimes, regardless. Here, I made the conscious effort to place a male nurse in the ICU. Thanks for noticing.
  12. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    Catching all the details, I see.
  13. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    I get a sense this chapter riled you up a bit, Thorn, hehe. That's probably a good thing, it means I'm doing my job as a writer. Thanks for taking this story on and reading through from the beginning. Your comments have been great and mean a lot to me.
  14. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    I like Parker's idea of a shock collar for Eric, hehe. We shall see if money is the key to getting rid of him. You've been a supporter from Day One, and I appreciate it, Val. As for the release of the next chapter...
  15. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    Shock collar - brilliant idea! I'll have Ben look into that. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this chapter, Parker. I support is valued.
  16. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    Hmm, yes, we shall see... So, I want to say THANKS for reigniting an urgency to complete this chapter and to continue this story. I intend to see it through to the end. Your feedback and comments mean a lot, Wayne. Cheers.
  17. sean had a wild hair and bought Mozzarella N' Marinara flavored Ruffles potato chips, which I'm currently munching on for lunch. Like eating fried cheese sticks dipped in tomato sauce, but crunchier. Not horrible, but strange.
  18. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    Thank you, tim. You're right, you can feel some empathy towards Travis' condition/situation. I was concerned about depicting things right. Elaine loves her son, and her son loves Ben, so, yeah, she did the right thing. I appreciate you following this story since I first came to GA. xo
  19. That was my conclusion. But then I was envisioning a bag full of queso, and it no longer seemed like an appetizing app.
  20. MacGreg

    Money Talks

    I'll try to forewarn you next time, hehe. Well, I'm impressed that you remembered all of that, considering how long it's been between chapters! I think we can all agree that Eric is a scumbag and untrustworthy. Ben feels some desperation to make things magically right for Travis, especially after seeing him in the ICU - but he's not the brightest bulb in the light fixture. Thanks so much for reading, even after all this time. I always enjoy your comments.
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