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Yeah, Damien's family is going to need protection like what the king's knights are doing for Alexandra. However, with the whole conversation Damien had with Anthony about becoming the kids' godfather, I'm sure they'll have enough protection, especially if he uses his lycan form if the worst-case scenario happens. And it's true that Will's allegiance is more focused on his king since they have a history that spans more than century, but hopefully Will, excuse the pun, has a will of his own, and can make a crucial decision based on his own conscience when need be.
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Hopefully, Austin finds someone else to take to the homecoming dance which shouldn't have been hard since he's the star quarterback of the team as mentioned in the first chapter, but maybe the unnamed male cheerleader was the only person he wanted to take. And it does seem that both Will and Alexandra are both omitting key information from Damien, and though it's possible that they are doing so for his protection, he's an adult and is more than capable of doing that himself.
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“No. I’m not jealous,” Will said as he looked at me very sternly. I didn’t expect that answer, and I was about to ask why he thought that when he started talking again. “If you want to hear the truth, then here it is.” Will sat up in his seat and continued by saying, “I’m not jealous of Alexandra…but I am sorry for her. From what I’ve been told by my king’s knights, she became a vampire, not by choice, but because she had none.” Looking at Will, I relaxed into my seat and waited for
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It appears that Will's supposed jealousy is just a minor distraction, but a distraction that needs to be address to get to the bigger question which, yes, is Damien's family potentially in danger? I'm sure Alexandra has no ill intentions by getting to know her family, and I'm confident that Will is very concerned for his family's safety. This situation is very complicated and puts Damien at a very awkward position. Who should he trust? Alexandra who is his wife's twin sister who wants to be part of Damien's family, or the man who has revitalized his notions about love for the better? We'll see if there's a clear answer or if there's more information yet to be revealed.
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Jealousy is a very complicated emotion and hopefully Damien and Will can resolve this issue since a much more urgent problem has been brought up by Will. It's quite possible these lycans, whoever is paying them, will find where Damien lives and come after his family next and use drastic means to do so.
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Yes, Damien's swordsmanship is very impressive, especially since he didn't get a scratch on him. And maybe what Alexandra said was true; maybe Annabella is watching from wherever she is as Damien's guardian angel. Not too farfetched to believe considering what is revealed to be true so far in this world. I mean, vampires turning invisible? Yeah, there are guardian angels out there for sure.
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Falling on my ass that hit the hard, wet, concrete below, I looked around at all the lycans who I’ve defeated with just my sword, and though I didn’t get a scratch on me, I couldn’t deny that I broke a sweat or two while fighting them. There were a few close calls of when the lycans slashed their claws at me, almost shredding off my face, but I managed to dodge their attacks. And for some reason, some of the lycans were falling to the ground, which I couldn’t explain other than that they were lo
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Thank you! Hopefully, Damien will defeat the lycans without getting a scratch on him and that Will and Alexandra return unharmed as well.
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A lycan getting moonstruck or a vampire getting sunburnt, which is worse? Haha.
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I agree. Hopefully, the girls are enjoying their Filipino desserts as their father fights off lycans with his Arthurian sword haha.
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Only ten minutes have passed after I received and listened to that voice message, but it already felt lodged and seared into my memory. Every detail of the demonic-sounding voice would forever haunt me if I didn’t start acting now. However, what choice do I make? I didn’t like either option this kidnapper gave to me, making me have to decide whether I would save Will at the expense of Alexandra being taken away, or have Will burn. I just didn’t know what to do as I stood by the sidelines as peop
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The short time frame can also possibly show how desperately they want Alexandra's information on the Holy Grail's location, or maybe they just aren't that smart when it comes to setting up a ransom. We'll see in the next chapter. Reading your thoughts is always great. 😄
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That's true, though Anthony seems to be the exception. Also, gathering as much information as possible beforehand is wise, but Damien has to be quick since he only has one hour before a decision is made for him, and it involves Will getting burnt to a crisp. Hopefully, he'll be able to outsmart these kidnappers and if they are lycans, he might use that to his advantage.
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We'll see why Austin wanted Anthony to drive him to the diner soon. Also, since the king is Will's creator, he is considered Will's family within vampiric society. They are literally tied by blood, so Damien might think he is just a king, but to Will the king is his family and that might complicate things as the story continued. Anyways, thanks always for your comments.
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Thank you! I'm happy that you appreciate the regular updates to the story and that the cliffhangers aren't a major turnoff. Alexandra is carrying a heavy burden with her knowledge about the Holy Grail, and she is overall very observant like her skepticism over the king's motives and her concern over Will's undying devotion to him. Some say knowledge is power, but it's also often said that curiosity killed the cat. Hopefully no one except the kidnapper or kidnappers get harmed as Damien tries to find a solution to this dire situation. Alexandra could possibly help Damien rather than just being traded away to save Will, and maybe Anthony can help as well. Damien is going to have to trust somebody if he wants to save his lover since this isn't really a one-man job, and who better else to trust than family.
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Well, considering the girls were very young when their mother died with only pictures and possibly home videos to remind them of who she looked like, they were able to quickly adjust to the situation of meeting their mother's twin sister. Also, Austin might be too distracted by the game to fully comprehend Alexandra's likeness to his mother. Hopefully, they'll get to know each other more and if Alexandra gets him accepted by the university through her connections, then that'll be the best way for him to know she cares about him like a mother would. Lastly, I think it would be best if Damien doesn't just go into the hostage situation ready to fight with his sword. He needs more information first, and maybe Alexandra can help.
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I clapped and cheered when Austin’s team scored another touchdown, giving them plenty of advantage over their rival team, and it was only the second quarter. The girls sat together, wearing their unique combination of stripes and polka dots that covered them appropriately for the cool night air. Anthony was getting food and drinks for me and the girls which was taking a while because of the long line leading to the concession stands. The bleachers were crowded as well, being the first footba
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Yes, and one has to wonder who she really is when all that ice finally melts. Hopefully, we'll see during Austin's football game. Thank you for always sharing your love for the story by commenting!
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And the possibility that they don't even know that their mother has a sister is going to factor in to the shock of seeing her during the football game. Hopefully, they'll adjust quickly and welcome her into the family. Also king's expectations could be very high because Will has been a very loyal thane, accomplishing mission to such a perfect degree that His Majesty doesn't expect anything less from him as a result. I mean, Will is the one responsible for changing the course of American history for the better, so it makes sense that the king expects Will to not screw up in any fashion. However, he is still just one vampire, a person who can make mistakes like anyone else and hopefully he doesn't beat himself too much over a simple error.
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Hopefully, Alexandra will thaw out even more when she sees her twin sister's kids, especially Isabel and Joanna who must resemble Alexandra and Annabella when they were younger. Also, what better way to end a date then a good, old-fashion blowjob haha! Thanks again for commenting!
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After my eventful date that ended with many guests being treated for temporary blindness and dozens of lycans being arrested, I stood outside the museum as police cars and ambulances occupied the street. Will, along with a few knights, helped with disseminating everything that happened to the police, but other than that the rest of the crime scene was being taken care of by regular law enforcement. Will said their involvement was because of the numerous human guests getting caught in the cro
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Thank you very much! I'm glad my story is making you all want to read the next chapter, and I hope to keep up the momentum as the story continues. Thanks again for the uplifting comment! 😀
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Yes, she was just saved from being burned to a crisp, which I can only imagine as being more than unpleasant. Hopefully, Alexandra will warm-up a little to Damien because of this. We'll see her reaction in the next chapter. And thank you always for commenting. Every time I see a comment from you and my other readers, it always puts a smile on my face. 😁
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She could even make Elsa from Frozen shiver from just her presence haha. It's possible that being a vampire only contributed to her ice-cold façade which hopefully melted a little after being saved by Damien from that near-death experience despite her attitude towards him. And by dates you mean fending off more than a dozen angry lycans and have your man come to the rescue at the very last moment, then that was an amazing date!
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Yes, fighting a bunch of pissed-off lycans with only a dinner knife makes an excellent date, haha! Hopefully, it ends with Damien at least getting another kiss or more. Also, considering Alexandra's cold treatment of Damien, it wouldn't be surprising to know that she also ended up pissing off the wrong kind of people. Or it could be linked to the fundraiser and her goals for the museum. We'll see soon. And since you mentioned the picture of Alexandra and her sister together and smiling, it's quite possible she's not being completely honest with her feelings about the estrangement between she and Annabella, that their relationship Is indeed very, very complicated. That 's all I will say on that topic. Thank you again for commenting.
