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Whatever it was, I'm sure Doctor Shepherd has an idea of what just transpired and that Maria definitely had some involvement in it as well. Thanks for the comment!
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“Doctor Shepherd! We have an emergency!” “What’s wrong?” Shepherd asked his assistant in a calm and serious tone. “It’s about Maria! Her vital signs are spiking dramatically and—Her eyes are opening!” “I see,” Shepherd said as he looked at the view of a camera on a console that showed where Maria’s body was stored and only seeing a bright light. “This is about to get interesting.” *** Everything was so bright, and the only thing Ryan could see was the absolute intensity of th
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Thank you! I know it has been more than a year since I last updated this story, but it's back in action and I'm ready to continue this adventure with Duncan and Mike 😁
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I opened my eyes, only to have some sort of cloth covering them. I was also restrained by my wrists and ankles as I lied horizontally on a bed. I then heard a door open and I decided to stop my fidgeting. “You shouldn’t have done that, Mike!” a man’s voice fumed. “You’ve already jeopardized the safety and secrecy of our people by exposing our existence to him! What you’ve done—” “I know what I fucking did! I already lost my father to that bastard, so I wasn’t just going to let someone I
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The next chapter will probably be available by next week since I don't want you all to be left with that huge cliffhanger for too long haha, but there's no guarantee. Though I will say that love can make people do extraordinary things 😉
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I always appreciate your input, and love can indeed do amazing things. Hopefully Ryan will unlock something himself that will help defeat the Colossus and save Chris in the process.
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It is evil haha. And hopefully they do make it out in one piece, no pun intended. Thanks for the comment!
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The light that Ryan saw could be something special. We'll see what happens.
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“C-Chris?” Standing in a hunched position with his upper body bloodied and exposed, Chris had the wings of an angel that extended out from a single, large disc that hovered behind his back. The feathers were ellipse-shaped and sleek in design, and the wings all together were at least twelve feet in length. In addition, with the small, circular interface that hovered over Chris’s forehead, both the wings and his body emitted an aura that somehow made his hair move like it was suspended in wat
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Lilith could be a very powerful vampire, so Lucky was smart about not attacking her right then. And yes there are plenty of questions just waiting to be answered as well. Thank you for the comment and looking forward to your input in the next chapter 😁
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The drive to Violet’s home was very anxious for Lucky as the worst-case scenarios cycled in his head about what was would happen to her if she got caught, if did not get caught already. The only slight relief he felt during the fifteen-minute car ride was Zev’s hand that was placed on Lucky’s lap, comforting him. However, his anxiety peaked again when they stopped at the large gate of Violet’s home and saw several black cars crowded around the entrance. “Shit,” Zev muttered as he put his car
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You're right about the animosity between the two men could ruin more than just their sons' relationship with one another and the ambiguity with who the angel-winged figure is will definitely be answered in the next chapter. Thanks always for commenting and looking forward to your input in the next chapter
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The next chapter will definitely clarify things, I promise. And thank you for commenting
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Very ambiguous, I know. You'll see in the next chapter who was speaking with those angel wings
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Yes, it is very ambiguous who the voice belongs to right now, but you'll see who it is in the next chapter If the voice does belong to Nathaniel, who knows what he has in store.
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“Enemy Champions?” Ryan could not believe what he was hearing. The Champions who were taken by the Colossus have reappeared and began attacking the platoon that was deployed to finish the last remaining Colossus. He was in disbelief until an image of the enemy Champions appeared on the stage in the assembly hall in the form of a large screen. They all had what seemed to be red, transparent plates of armor that hovered over their bodies and limbs. Apparently, these constructs can block attack
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A palace of ice was what grew outside of the city as the temperature dropped to almost fifty degrees in just a few minutes. It was said that it all started with a single snowflake that dropped from the sky and landed on a huge lake at the center of the city. Just as it landed on the water, ice crystals started forming and the snowflake started growing into its own unique design. The ice then expanded across the lake’s surface and as soon as it reached the lake’s shore, tall structures began r
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And thanks for the comment. I don't really write poetry since I think it's a entire different art from prose, but I'm glad you liked it.
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Thanks for the comment of support
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With inked skin as black as ebony, Soft hair as white as snow, And teeth dripping with blood, Together what story shall we sew? Once there was a boy with a mind as bright as day. A very promising child, With a future just as promising, And who warmed hearts when he smiled. Then a queen of snow arrived. With a shattered mirror, That blinded the many. Only ugliness can be seen ever so clearer. Then there was another boy. He woul
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Very true. Hopefully, he has a backup of all that information since his death could also result in humanity's ultimate demise as well.
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Yes, the very mysterious person that is Christian Shepherd seems to know more than he is letting on about the current Colossus invasion. And we'll see how Ryan and Chris deal with the Colossus, hopefully working together to beat the menace back to whatever dimension they came from.
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