Blue Dhalia
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Oh trust me.. he has already won me over in Billy's perspective.. won't say more since some people may not have read that far. I can't wait to see more from you both.. you guys keep me foaming at the mouth for more!!!
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Oh ok that makes sense. I was just curious. Who's the guy who was in the picture for Brandon?
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Chapter 8 - "Our First Date"
Blue Dhalia commented on Wade's story chapter in Chapter 8 - "Our First Date"
Next chapter P L E A S E ! ! ! ! 💗🌈💗🌈💗🌈💗🌈💗🌈💗😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 -
Ikr! Seems everyone loves him.. and he seems to be the last to know! But Brandon is obviously the best one of them all!! I just wish the world would stop making everyone feel so awful about loving someone. And the amount of guilt he feels just because of being shamed by others.. just hurts to see. But like I said.. been there a lot.
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Well, hopefully you will find your Billy 💗
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So heartbreaking. I've been there though. Poor baby. So happy for a new entry.. but still sad. 😪
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Oh thank you so very much!!! 😊😁❤💜💙💚💛💗💗💗 I've read all that has been posted of the BIlly Chase Chronicles!! I admit though.. I started with your story first. I fell in love with Brandon from you, then it got even stronger with Billy's story! I have been single for a long time and Brandon's character is the kind of person I have dreamed of since I admitted to myself that I was gay. And everything written in both stories have given me hope to keep going, and believe in love.💗 thank you.
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I adore this story SO very much!! It's really brought back my passion for reading! And the way you write it and the way you describe the details.. it feels like I'm there!!! I only hope and pray that one day I'll have the joy and honor to have a "Ben" to call my own 💗💗💗 I am such a fan of this amazing story! You have no idea how much your beautiful story means to me. ❤💜💙💚💛 thank you so very much!
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Chapter 1 - "Welcome to the Neighborhood!"
Blue Dhalia commented on Wade's story chapter in Chapter 1 - "Welcome to the Neighborhood!"
Even though it will sound weird.. I love this story SO much that this is actually the tenth time I am reading it. I am just so in love with these two and their incredibly beautiful relationship!! I hope you end up writing more! You are amazing in my eyes for this story! It actually gives me hope for love for myself. And it helps me to read when my depression tries to show up. I genuinely thank you from the bottom of my heart for this story. 💗 -
I'm really not the type to EVER plead with someone... But I truly beg you to please hurry up and write some more!!!! My heart feels so empty right now! 😪😪😪😢😢😢😭😭😭💔💔💔
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Omg!!! Please don't stop now!!!! You have me chomping at the bit!!! You can't leave it on such a sad note for long!!!! You're killing me!!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭💔😢😢😢😢😢😢
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Even though I know his future is going to get better then horrible and then amazing.. I just want to hug and hold Brandon in my arms until he feels better. 😢💔 I know exactly how he's feeling right now. It's a truly terrible feeling. But very well written expression. You are doing so very well.
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That was the most amazing thing EVER! My God that was hot and yet beautifully written! You are really doing an amazing job with your description in this book!! WOW!!
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And so now we begin the friendship with Stevie... I have to admit, in the beginning I hated Stevie from Billy's pov. After a while he grew on me.. but I can see him in a better light in this story. Thanks for the extra part of him.
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I love the way Brandon describes the school.. it was SERIOUSLY just like that when Ifirst started at my high school. I kinda changed a lot of things that happened once I hit a growth spurt and came out and got mean.. I made the jocks pretty scared to mess with the little guys.. because I was the big gay guy with metal music stuck in my head all day. But I didn't want to kill anyone.. I just beat the hell out of the bullies the same way they did to others. Too bad it changed right back once I graduated. And I also love that Billy finally checked Brandon out enough for Brandon to notice!! It's getting close!! 💗 so exciting!!!!
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And now Stevie shows up!! I'm really loving all of this!!!! Everything is falling in place! I can't wait to see Brandon's feelings when Billy finally tells him his true emotions! I'm so excited I can't stand it!!!!! 💗💗💗💗💗
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I kinda figured that Jamie was just innocently friends with the jerks and not one of them. Very happy with this chapter 😊
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I hope Brandon will find a strong and supportive alliance with Marie.. I hope he will tell her the truth, and she will fully support him! And I went through a lot of the self-loathing that you mentioned in here (I grew up in a very strict Pentecostal home and was a young ordained minister in my church).. I finally just had to make the decision to leave the church and go down my own path to find love and happiness.. and freedom. It wasn't easy. Now I'm a Universalist, openly gay and feel completely free.. unfortunately I've been single for a long while.. but at least I can feel comfortable in my own skin. Great chapter.. keep up the good work ❤😁
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This was an adorable chapter ❤💜💙💚💛 I think most of us have had those awkward first "straight dates" and even more so the awkward "dad talks", you wrote it out beautifully honest. So happy that you are doing this! You really are doing a wonderful job.. keep up the great work! 😁
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I love that this chapter is showing a lot of reasons to care more about Jamie.. and it's also showing more sides to bullying in school. Like, that not everyone that hangs out with bullies are bullies themselves.. some just don't realize what's happening when they aren't around. Jamie seems to be a really good (though naive) guy.. hopefully he will turn out standing up for the "little guys". And I love the amount of depth you have been adding to Brandon in this! You are doing very well!
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I love how you have written Brandon's reactions and emotions towards Billy. He's such a sweet little romantic! 💗
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I can't help but to keep saying the same thing over and over again.. I really wish I was as lucky as Billy in this whole thing!! Just as far as Brandon goes that is.. I'm sorry, but he's just the perfect guy!
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I'm so excited to read about them finally talking for the first time!!!!
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My God, I got so excited about Brandon and Billy officially spotting each other!!!! Please correct me if I'm wrong.. but, I thought Billy's eyes were blue? Either way.. I'm soooooo excited for the rest of the story and their relationship. P.S. I know how you feel about being the one that Billy fell in love with.. I have been dreaming about finding my own Brandon since I read both stories. 😢💗😔💔
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My only question about this chapter is.. what is the deal with sugar? Everything involving his "sexy stuff" mentions sugar. But, other than that question.. I LOVE Brandon's character.. and knowing his side of everything is awesome!! Looking forward to the rest!! ❤💜💙💚💛💗
