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Chapter 41: "Serpent In My Garden"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 41: "Serpent In My Garden"
I would have jumped that table and crushed that pretty face if he tried that shit in front of me! -
Chapter 40: "Some Time Alone"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40: "Some Time Alone"
If only I could write well enough ๐ maybe I can tell you one day. -
Chapter 40: "Some Time Alone"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40: "Some Time Alone"
This one had a beautiful ending.. your true super power to me is your way of bringing me so deeply into the thoughts and emotions of your characters.. like all the ways that Randy talks about and describes Ryan.. it's always so beautiful ๐ I also completely understand what Ryan is going through right now... I felt the same way right before I publicly came out.. you wanna talk about a dramatic and insane coming out story.. mine would blow your mind! -
Chapter 39: "Destiny Takes Hold"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 39: "Destiny Takes Hold"
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so excited for them I can't freaking stand it!!!!! I'm so happy they finally got together!!! They both deserve to be happy so bad! Randy is reminding me more and more of Billy, with the way he is so dedicated to the happiness of the ones he cares about. I'm happy that Wilson is still around and still the same cute little psycho he always has been! ๐ And now.. I'm really nervous thinking about what Sean might try now.. since now EVERYONE is in a committed relationship. -
CChapter 38: "Fear, Confusion, Worry, and Heartbreak"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in CChapter 38: "Fear, Confusion, Worry, and Heartbreak"
Ok.. this one had my brain frying! Tyler REALLY needs to lighten up or he's going to have a stroke.. I'm worried that Ariel might be a future victim of Sean.. hopefully he will end up super happy with Tyler by the end. And I really hope that Sean actually tries to get Ryan and ends up getting humiliated by him in front of Randy AND Cody!! That would be the most EPIC moment ever!! Sean really reminds me of AJ.. just a selfish parasite camouflaged as a cute boy.. but pure poison under the pretty.. I truly despise people who toy with people for nothing more than temporary kicks. -
Chapter 37: "Utopian Moments"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 37: "Utopian Moments"
I love the way you describe Randy's love for Ryan.. it's always such a beautiful picture. And if Sean tries to get Arial or Ryan.. I will crush that flawless little face with a hammer! Just saying ๐ฅฐ -
Chapter 36: "Cody and Sean"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 36: "Cody and Sean"
I feel you.. high school was definitely a hell on earth for us kids who were "different".. I went to a highschool with rednecks and preppie redneck jocks.. and being the gay punky non-white kid was an unforgivable sin! I agree that these stories help to see a more pleasant experience. -
Chapter 36: "Cody and Sean"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 36: "Cody and Sean"
Very awesome chapter!! I love the little back and forth with Cody and Sean.. I knew an "evil Twink beauty" once.. he told me that he respected me more than most people he knew.. because I didn't fawn over him and I snapped back at him. It was a nice compliment.. he better not try to break up either of my favorite boy couples!! -
Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
I swear.. you impress me every time. What an honor it is to know you.. at least on here๐ -
Chapter 25: "Kiss And Tell"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 25: "Kiss And Tell"
It's like this.. you think my boyfriend is hot and sweet and all that good stuff? I agree ๐ฏ! That's why he's my boyfriend.. feel free to look at him.. but don't try to take him. It's not jealousy.. it's more about respect for my relationship. -
Chapter 34: "100th Story!"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 34: "100th Story!"
I know how he feels.. the "why can't people just mind their own business and leave us alone" thing.. I've asked that question my whole life! It's just sad that people actually believe that someone else's love life and sexual orientation is ANY of their business or concern.. IT'S NOT AT ALL!! My parents and friends found that out the hard way when I came out... And society has been discovering the same ever since! Lol.. I'm definitely not the one to try when it comes to that sort of thing. -
Chapter 33: "A New Era Begins"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 33: "A New Era Begins"
I understand exactly what Cody is doing.. he isn't a bad guy.. he just knows how to survive in homophobic America! The hard exterior is to protect him from the people that hate us.. like the little dick asshole that was already calling him a fag.. and he obviously had to deal with a lot of those same types trying to get him to have "bicurious" moments with them in secret! I've dealt with that myself.. most of my life! So, he isn't being mean.. he's being safe. -
Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"
Please keep in mind.. the entitled snobs do NOT speak for all of us.. also.. who cares what they think?!?! You are a true artist with your writing!! I will admit.. I don't really have interest in ALL of your stories.. not because they aren't worthy or excellent.. I'm just obsessed with your romantic and funny stuff. I adore you and your beautiful stories.. please don't let the "haters" get to you.. jealousy is ugly.. you are amazing!! I appreciate everything you do for me with your work! Thank you sweetie ๐๐ -
Chapter 31: "Cupid's Lost Arrow"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 31: "Cupid's Lost Arrow"
This was such a cute chapter.. I'm so glad Ryan dropped the girl.. I'm so glad everything went well with Wilson (even though I'm nervous about him saying too much to his mom or in front of Randy's mom).. and I am SOOO excited for Tyler and Ariel!!!!!! I hope everything goes perfect for them from now on.. the two of them deserve to be happy so much! -
Chapter 30: "Inner Child"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 30: "Inner Child"
Reminds me of my little brother.. he's 13 now.. he still has no off button! Rotflmfao!! -
Chapter 29: "Let It Rain"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 29: "Let It Rain"
If they don't accept you for you.. they don't love you.. they love who they WANT you to be.. that's what love really is.. you love everything about the person.. or you don't actually love them. That's it! If they can't love everything.. they don't deserve you! -
Chapter 28: "No Place For Girls"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 28: "No Place For Girls"
Exactly what I was afraid of.. that's the same BS line of "comforting lies" I've been fed every time!! The excuses.. the making out like everyone else is to blame.. and of course.. turning on the waterworks when backed into a corner and getting called out on the BS!! If I were Randy.. I would have said.. ok.. in that case.. I'll make it easy on you.. since it's SOOO difficult.. just tell your poor dad that you finally got a girlfriend and that terrible "gay phase" is OVER! If you need me.. I'll be at Matt's house with Tyler while you figure everything out.. don't worry.. nothing will be going on.. not what you think.. and it'll just be for a "little while" don't worry about it.. I still love you... "In my heart"! And if he ends up changing his mind back to just being with me.. my first mission.. to sit in his lap.. right in front of that prissy little bitch and kiss him in a way that NO human being would EVER try to go near him like that again! I seriously hate that crap!!! -
Chapter 27: "Close A Door, Open A Window"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 27: "Close A Door, Open A Window"
Looking like it's about to be exactly what I was afraid of. Glad that Tyler and Ariel are making progress. But... Ryan doing that.. telling him to sneak out instead of the usual.. I hate feeling like I'm right about the future. -
Chapter 26: "A Spark Of Something"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 26: "A Spark Of Something"
I really really REALLY hope things involving Jenny and Hailey just fade away and it doesn't turn out like how it's always been for me.. find the perfect guy.. things go great.. then girls show up.. and all of the sudden I'm completely alone.. forced to watch the great guy become permanently attached to the girls and everyone making out like I'm the bad guy for not being happy for them! Story of my life.. I only exist to guys in between their "straight" relationships! I hope Tyler and Ariel end up together.. that would be EPIC!! I'm seriously getting a bad feeling that Ryan may have cheated on Randy.. I so seriously hope I'm wrong.. but the way he acted at the end of the night.. it's exactly how every guy acted with me after they cheated on me with a girl.. then dumped me less than a week later.. if that happens.. I will not be able to finish this.. too painful. -
Chapter 22: "The Days After"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 22: "The Days After"
Will do.. at least.. after I finish devouring this story! Lol! I really love this one.. it's right up there with Billy and Brandon's story! These stories that you make.. they really help.. like.. they give me hope.. like maybe one day I'll find someone. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent and being a sweetheart too! ๐คโค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐๐ค And happy pride ๐๐ -
Chapter 25: "Kiss And Tell"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 25: "Kiss And Tell"
I figured it was her.. he had better figure this out.. or we're in for another "Billy situation".. where this poor guy is forced into dating a girl and locked back in the closet! Honestly, I wouldn't be able to handle "my" boyfriend having ANYONE making moves on him! Definitely not right in front of me! I'm not a jealous person.. at all.. but.. I'm extremely territorial! -
YAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSS!!! I'm so ready for the triple dates!!!!! That would be a perfect match!!
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Chapter 23: "Love's Many Angels"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 23: "Love's Many Angels"
I feel the exact same way as Tyler.. except.. I'm not exactly a blonde Adonis like him.. but what he wants? I feel that completely 100% -
Chapter 22: "The Days After"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 22: "The Days After"
I hope Wilson gets to see his bestie as soon as possible. I think the "group" should try to set up Tyler with Ariel.. that would be a match made in HEAVEN!! And I agree with Rapson.. hopefully dad will be dead soon.. or at least getting passed around in a prison like a bag of chips!! -
Chapter 21: "The Sun And The Storm"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 21: "The Sun And The Storm"
If I EVER see something like that going on.. I will destroy the abuser!! They will beg for death by the time I'm done with them!!
