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Chapter 19: "Emotions On High"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 19: "Emotions On High"
You're such a sweetheart 😘 thank you so much for caring.. I'm ok.. for the most part.. just really love how your stories always make me feel less lonely and makes me feel almost like being in love.. you really are an artist with the way you write! It's a shame when I see shows like "Heart stopper" come out and I think.. why isn't "Billy Chase" or this story on TV? They would be SO much better!! -
Chapter 20 Part 1: 20th Anniversary!!
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 20 Part 1: 20th Anniversary!!
Thank you for the care.. really. I'm doing okay -
Chapter 20 Part 1: 20th Anniversary!!
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 20 Part 1: 20th Anniversary!!
This one is overwhelming to say the least!!! First off.. I seriously got some PTSD from his "dad" in this.. you literally described both of my parents! Unfortunately.. neither of them left.. just all the homophobia.. and my dad was also a perverted abusive piece of garbage too! Second.. you described my entire childhood with how he was acting at school after his dad's ruining moment.. except I was alone through it all. And I think Ariel is one of the most precious little creatures in all of your characters!! I just want to hug him and protect him from everything in the world that doesn't bring him pure joy! And his adorable oddness is the perfect pallet cleanser for all of the intense moments! Uuuunnngg! Rotflmfao!!! That was unbelievably hilarious!!! -
Chapter 19: "Emotions On High"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 19: "Emotions On High"
I need to first say.. the laugh 😂 is for the entire chapter overall.. not the obviously "calm before the storm" moment that ended it. Secondly.. thank you so much for this chapter!! I really needed to laugh tonight.. and I've been crying from laughter through most of it! Lol! I absolutely adore the main two characters.. the love they feel is so beautifully worded by you! I love that you have created a more beautiful and strong love than even my favorite couple (Billy and Brandon) and that's really saying something!! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent in such a beautiful and important way. -
Chapter 14: "I've Found My Smile Again"
Blue Dhalia commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 14: "I've Found My Smile Again"
Well, you have done it again comsie.. you got me hooked on yet another story! You're killing me man!! 😂 -
It's been two years.. everyone has waited this long.. may as well wait however long it takes.
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OMG!!! That SERIOUSLY breaks my heart 💔💔💔💔 😢😥😢😥 I'm so sorry.
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Been in that type of relationship before! ☹️
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Wonderfully written chapter ❣️ Not surprised.. you are very talented. I wish I had a "big gay brother" type guy in my life back then. And the support.
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Comsi.. I'm begging you!! Please please PLEASE!!! I have re-read everything three times waiting for the next chapter... When is it coming? Have you started on it? I'm sorry.. I'm not trying to be a pain.. I'm just really wanting to know what happens with the party! It's driving me crazy 😍
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Nope.. but obviously at that age we were stupid. Lol
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I absolutely love this one ❤️💙 it really gives Brandon some humor and idk.. a little more humanity.. not just Mr. Perfect boy. Lol. Still on the edge of my seat waiting for the question before he goes on his trip for the family wedding. I can't wait 😍 but I'm really enjoying every single chapter ❤️
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I know how he feels all too well on the part about feeling pain when someone "acts gay" around you.. especially when they don't know that you're actually gay. You know they don't mean anything by it.. but that just makes it cut deeper.
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Thanks guys.. he's still staying in touch and says he misses me and still loves me.. I'm hoping it will improve. Absence makes the heart grow fonder.. I hope that is true.
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Well.. the relationship is starting to crumble. I'm leaving on Sunday to go back home to my state. I moved in.. and I've been here for four months. He's been distant for three of them. No idea what I could have done wrong. 😭😭😭
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It's been almost a full year man!!! PLEAAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!
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Funny and cute chapter.. Still dying for the "EPIC" moment! Lol
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Very well done! Dying to get to the EPIC part!!! Right before Brandon has to go to a wedding!!! I'm so far beyond excited to get Brandon's take on everything!
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We have set a date!!!!! We're getting married on October 30th 2020!!!!
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PLEASE GIVE US CHAPTER 50!!! IT'S FREAKING TORTURE!!!! I'M TOO YOUNG TO SUFFER LIKE THIS!!!! PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEE!!!
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Chapter 8 - "Our First Date"
Blue Dhalia commented on Wade's story chapter in Chapter 8 - "Our First Date"
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I'm just going to say this with all honesty.. writing may just be a hobby for you.. but this story proves you to be not only a natural.. but also a genius of description and emotions! This story is so amazing that I wish it was a much longer series!! Or even better.. an epic series for TV even!! You definitely have a wonderful gift! I just wish you would come back and write more😭
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I love everything about this story.. except for Blake's dad! I hate him because he is exactly like my own dad.. except my dad didn't have booze as an excuse! They're equal pieces of shit... Maybe they could get together for a date 😉 we all know that the homophobic pricks make the biggest homos!!
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Chapter 4 - "My First and My Last"
Blue Dhalia commented on Wade's story chapter in Chapter 4 - "My First and My Last"
The "after" part was so beautiful!! I love how you cut out the "smutty" part but still managed to make it not even matter in comparison to the gorgeous description of afterglow! I love this story so very much!!! You and this story are what brought me to GA
