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Keep up the great writing. I'm beginning to like Nero! A great villain makes a good story!
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Sort of, she is like Steven's Grace Adler if you will. (I did not mean for that sentence). She has his back like he has hers.
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If You Can't Stand the Heat
Ivric commented on QuinnDK's story chapter in If You Can't Stand the Heat
Logan is the great and Aiden is a reminder of most of my former classmates. Love the story!! -
Being one who went to a culinary university, I believe that Aiden could be one an ex of mine! We can be very sarcastic at time and guarded behind out creations. Great first chapter and I am hooked to read more!!
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We walked from the office building holding hands and enjoying each other's company. We lost track of time, because it moved so fast, before we knew it Kevin and I were walking in to the lobby of my building where Mr. Cruz was typing on the computer. There was a strong aroma of sugar and espresso filling the room, becoming more intense as we approached the counter. Mr. Cruz stood and handed me a bundle of mail. "I'm sorry that I didn't give you this yesterday, however you were quite dru
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Much more than a release. More like my heart needs to be heard.
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A Brother's Love Brothers are sent from above. To watch over their sisters with much love. Mom and dad treated you like a princess. But, tell me, who taught you how to dress? I cried when you shed those tears. I laughed at, and with, you through the years. We've been by each other's side for so long. Now, you have to be on your own, strong. Remember the cactus, pool, and spider, or the haircut, earthquakes, and disaster? Pushing, ta
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Of course I will stick around until the end!!
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Variety is the spice of life!! I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
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Many allusions to a certain show (GoT!) and Bravo. At first I was looking for the line to hook me then suddenly the Voice came. Now I am anticipating the rest of your story. Kudos on the the first chapter!
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Love the dynamic story being told! With Carl being shot by Darwin, who will take over the Barnes Pack? Is Darwin going to the psych ward? What about Mary, George, Darla, Rayne, and Harry? Will Jared and Darwin live their live together or apart? And what of Hector and Margo?? Will they return to college or live their lives on the run? And what about Darwin's botany class?? Just some things to think about. All of the loose ends need to tied up.
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Chronos Sands flowing endlessly Hands flying quickly hickory dickory doc tick toc, tick toc. Memories brief Pictures speak Scars remind of forgotten childhood Haunted with could have should have would have Pendulum constant Forward movement Never slowing Never tiring. Echoes Memories flood back into my dormant mind. Love, lust, passion; anger, betrayal, heartache. Finge
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Kevin and I both stretched, tidied up the living room, and began to start our day. I told Kevin to take a shower first since he was my guest. By doing this, it gave me a chance to make coffee and a light breakfast of toast with scrambled eggs. I picked up my phone, plunged it in to charge, and hit shuffle all on my songs. 'Relax, Take It Easy' by Mika began playing. I had drank heavily and I was awake, earlier than I would normally be, but I was not feeling slow or hungover. In fact, I had
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I am truly sorry for your loss. Thank you for your openness and allowing us into your life. I can only speculate about your soulmate's bravery. He left on his terms and knowing that you were going to be the first one to see him after he parted might have brought him comfort. Knowing that you will always be with him in that memory is his way of never leaving you. I might be reaching and I don't mean any disrespect my your loss I am just trying to find comfort in the fact that he did this from a place of love and courage and for you not to beat yourself up.
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Empty of what? Emotions, material possessions, or one's eternal soul?
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Mason? The missing element is Mason. You are writing about Bastian's mission, but what about the connection to Mason? Also the nightmares that Bastian and Mason could share since they are true mates? This is a story about connections, the main one between Mason and Bastian, what are the nightmares that Mason has? Just my thoughts and opinions. I am enjoying the story so far and hope you finish this great story!
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Hollow Loneliness my heart doubt my best friend. Pain will never part, soul trying to mend Sweet items now tart forming walls, end. Tears that I shed too many to own. Passion to be fed actions needing atone. Echoing doubt in head suffering to the bone. Like Horror am hollow. Screams ripping, heart soon follow. Sanity's edge, tipping. Love's pool shallow, no longer dipping. F
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@Aviana Thank you! I will have more coming today. I hope you enjoy reading my story Déjà Vu.
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@Aviana thank you for your support!!
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@Parker Owens Thank you. I wanted to compare them to the place they loved the most and how every time I look at the ocean I am reminded.
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I Smelt the Ocean Today I smelt the ocean today and it reminded me of your lips. Sweet, seductive, smooth, silky I listened to the ocean today and it reminded me of your voice. Heavy, quite, continuous, joyous. I tasted the ocean today and it tasted like tasting you. Salty, unquenchable, cool, unmistakable. I touched the ocean today and it felt like heaven. Soft, velvety, refreshing, free. Yet, mo
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Kevin and I walked out of the lobby into rush hour. Even the foot traffic on the sidewalks needed police to direct them. I glanced over to Kevin, losing myself in the music of my playlist and the depth of his eyes. "So where is the local?" Kevin asked wanting a place to sit peacefully to become better aquatinted with me. "The local?" I blankly stared at him until the translator in my mind remembered my British English. "Oh, you mean the pub. It is a few block south of here. Mayb
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Thank you for allowing us into this lovely world of Aiden and Ethan! This story is great! From the imagery to references to the relationship of all the characters and their own development! Kudos on educating myself about the Lycans and properly portraying their world to us! If I may ask, could you please help me with my story? It is still in its infancy, but I would value your input. Again, Bravo and I cannot wait until the continuation of the story of Aiden and Ethan.
