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Knew it was coming, so happy it's finally in play....you can do this Kohen!!! That spicy scent huh? Hehe. Can't wait to see how his and the Captain's relationship develops. Cheers 😃
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It's nice to have some down time and just take a look at their day to day lives sans the popularity and paparazzi chaos. Fun chapter to read, loved it. Cheers 😁
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How would they know about his grandma though? that seems a bit far fetched to think that they would send it without the knowledge that she doesn't know of their relationship and that she is old fashioned. I think he actually got the message from his mom but just like last time they caught him on his way home and this time by himself 😔😓 which would explain why his father came to look for him just an half hour later. I hope he isn't too hurt by the time they find him. Don't make us wait too long Hehe Cheers 😁
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Thanks for the update. Nice to see Adam settling into a new beginning and sense of being. He's becoming more confident and comfortable being himself around others. Cheers 😄
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Bitter-sweet Wednesday's. When it feels like you've reached the end too quickly. So happy for another chapter though, Kohen seems to be becoming our resident hero.I'm hoping these occurrences will help him in the end to see that he can do more than just hurt people. Even if that's what he was engineered for, his personal power is now his to control and decide what he does with it. Cheers 😄
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Always knew Diaz was an idiot so wasn't surprised there, I'd be more surprised if he wasn't planning something as far as gang mentality goes. I see Jake is opening up to a whole new world of debauchery...love it! Looking forward to more. Cheers 😁
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So many cute moments...I haven't had to reach for the tissues for a while now...but this one got me 😭 so freaking cute!!! Everything about this chapter was amazing. Cheers 😄
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I guess I shouldn't but I'm still hoping for some justice when it comes to the football jocks attacking Troy and Adam. Love seeing Adam blossom and actually getting to enjoy and be more involved as an highschool kid. Cheers 😄
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Questions, Questions, Questions
mally commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Questions, Questions, Questions
Gotta say Teddy is really very resilient. Not sure if Oli getting a look at Ryder like that was a good idea at his age but it's necessary considering they all live together. Wonder how they're going to behave when they're all together again. Cheers 😁 -
I'm glad Kohen recorded a message of what he heard, I just hope the captain hears it and can decipher it before it's too late. That hum is sounding very suspicious, like an explosion or something planet side...hmm. looking forward to seeing the next turn of events. Cheers 😄
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Mr. Haner just reminds me of Oli. The stubbornness and the whole once they have an idea it's hard to redirect or change their minds. Even though he's being unreasonable I still understand where he's coming from, plus some people take more time to forgive than others, especially when the person you have to forgive is yourself. Cheers 😀
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Proud of Oli for standing up for himself, but the seeing red and blacking out while fighting kinda preludes to violent tendencies caused by blinding anger and that worries me. Hoping he finds a balance before it gets worse. And Mrs. Haner...as awesome as always...can't believe after all that was said and done this school still doesn't have a working system to prevent bullying, such a crock of s**t. Loved the chapter. Cheers 😁
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As always...a great chapter update. I was wondering when he would bump into Mr. Haner can't wait to see how they work through their differences. Enjoying the dynamic between Oli, Teddy and Ryder...social healing at its best. Cheers 😄
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So happy Adam is safe now....and he got his skinny jeans hehe. Cheers 😁
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Ss'merit the Snake....hmm makes sense, he seems to have his own little following as well which could cause problems. Let's see what Cohen does with this information. Cheers 😁
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This chapter was superb. I really mean that because I've been waiting for the moment he gets his tired, desperate, trifling a** self fired. Oh and Cait, Girl I love you! Kept it professional but still showed him where to shove it. Highlight of my evening. Cheers 😁 Sorry got caught in the moment lol. Yayy Tedz and Ryder!!!! Looking forward to seeing where their journey leads this time.
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I was too upset with Nate to even comment on the last chapter because nothing suitable could come to mind except profanities and dirty names. But after Ryder fessed up and it's foreshadowed that he's finally gonna get the boot, I can think clearly now. So happy that Ryder was honest with Teddy and Teddy handled it really well. Still hoping to see Ryder grow to be the strong, empowering and independent individual we all know he can be. Cheers 😁
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Poor Captain sounds like he almost had an aneurysm with him risking his life like that...can definitely see his attachment growing. Cheers 😁
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Ooohhh if I could squeal like a pig right now, I would be squealing. My heart...just wow...I'm proud of Ryder, feels like a proud parent moment.**insert sniffles here** and then you hit us with a kiss and playful banter and whoa....I guess the word is gleeful....Yeah that's how I feel. Plus it helps that the douche got a serving *snicker* Cheers😁
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Oooooohhh. I was okay with them not getting together. But it looks like I might be in for an ever better ending..fingers crossed hehe...nice to see a different side of Klaus and get an idea of his thoughts. Cheers 😁
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Damn right. You get your skinny jeans Adam. Thanks for another chapter. Cheers 😁
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Yayy my hope that they would make it might actually come true. I've read your other stories before so happy endings are...well...I guess it depends on how you look at it, but they're far in between lol. Excited to see the journey these two will take together. Well I already called him a douche and a douche he shall remain...**refrain from using any swear words mally**...Teddy really needs to put him in his place. Taking this possessive jealousy thing to a whole new level the little brat. Wish I could swear like Ira right now lol. Thanks so much for a new chapter. Cheers 😁
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So happy to see bridges being mended in a more healthy way. It was good to get more insight on Oliver and why he acts the way he does sometimes. Cheers 😁
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Glad that Oli got to see them interact. It's good for Ryder not to always feel like he's being psychoanalysed. Creates a more relaxed and social setting. Even though I understand that Teddy is busy saving lives I still thought he would've been a better big brother. He is in his own way but what happened with Ryder sounds like it really changed the kind of person he was for a bit there. Cheers 😁
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Hehe wonder how the captain is gonna react to what he just did. Cheers 😁
