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Everything posted by mally
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Ugh, what a douche. I'm sure you know who I'm talking about. Still cheering for Teddy and Ryder to be together forever lol and I'm seeing progress hehehehe. Nice to see that Mike has become a fine gentleman in the end. I can see him and Teddy reconnecting. Cheers π
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Three Months in the Summer
mally commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Three Months in the Summer
This Nate guy sounds like he has an interest in "Dr. Haner".... don't like him already lolz. progress...Oli sure is a tough nut to crack. Very adamant once he believes he knows the whole truth. Not a very good quality in most cases so hopefully that changes a bit. Cheers π Can't wait to read more on Teddy and Ryder -
...and the plot thickens hehe. Things keep getting more interesting between these two, I laughed so hard at Jake's ramblings but I believe he meant it all. Klaus is in for something spectacular....feelings wise I mean. Cheers π.
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What can I say....I'm happy Teddy decided to give it a shot and I really believe that he should be the one who talks to Oliver because their parents are sheltering him too much. I hope Ryder can pull together and earn Teddy's trust again. That's going to be one of the major things for them to overcome. Still waiting to see when and if they find a donor or are gonna need one for Ryder's liver. Thanks for the update. Cheers π
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You seem to be hinting at the parents knowledge of their love. Or at least for the dad's knowledge of it. Love seeing their relationship grow. Can't wait to see what happens next. Cheers π
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Ooh that was risky. Loving them both. Your writing shows the innocence of unchartered territories so well. Hesitant but decisive, sweet yet passionate. Love it.
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Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
mally commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
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This guy Ss' merit has some kind of issue. Can't tell yet if he's just an arrogant a*as or a bad guy. Thanks for the update. Cheers π
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Looking forward to seeing how things between them (Nick and Peter) play out and if they end up recognizing each other from the past or not. Can't wait to read more. Cheers π
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Why is everyone so down on Teddy. He's not being mean he's hurt and he was denied closure for 14 Years. He experienced the worst kind of heartache at such a young age, that's emotional trauma. Then he's faced with the reason behind that trauma. He's not being mean, he's coping. That's all he's trying do and when I consider how I would've reacted...uhm..hell yeah he has every right to. He just needs time to work through his emotions. There are no quick fixes in life, and I'm glad this story always upholds that.
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Love how he's growing and getting more comfortable with who he is. Cheers π
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Still waiting to see how it plays out...nice intro though. Loose ends are slowly coming together.
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Uhm...uhhhh....huh? What just happened?...I'll comment later when the shock wears off or when my heart can comprehend what just happened...cause I feel like I'm on the verge of a breakdown after that....yeah...so...I'm gonna go and read this again cuz I...I don't even know anymore.
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R.I.P Mama Sullivan ππ
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Ouch...my heart has shattered...WWS 100 π wasn't expecting it so soon and definitely not like that. I hope Ryder will be okay.
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Why do you keep making me cry....gonna have to stay close to the Kleenex box from now on...ππ
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You keep leaving me stunned....I was prepared for heartache and instead I ended up leaking happy tears. More power to Ryder, he handled that interview like a boss. Being from a minority group myself, it always shocks me when people who don't understand the strife that life and the people in it throws at you take it upon themselves to critique the way we chose to empower ourselves and try to take away our strength by making us feel as if we're wrong and shameful. F*** that! So many emotions right now don't even know which one to give in to Hehe. So I'll just end with....OMG Ryder's gonna make it to homecoming!!!! Yayy!! Hehe ππππ I'm even more of an emotional weirdo after this chapter Hehe and I love it π
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Lol I wish I was. But that's okay I layer up hehe
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I'm totally gonna miss my bus now...but it was sooooooooo worth it. Hehe...I get so excited when I see a new chapter that I swear OCD kicks in and I just have to read it...like right there and then or my brain won't stop. One word, that I think says so much... Goosebumps. Cheersππ
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I feel like I'm connected to Teddy and Ryder emotionally because I felt every emotion in this chapter as if it were my own....I am likewise hoping for a ending that involves them both being together...fingers and toes crossed. Cheersπ
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Started from chapter 1 and got myself caught up. It's such a lovely read. Guess I shouldn't be surprised because I always find myself enjoying your writing and how relatable your characters are, even for a straight woman. Can't wait to read more ππ
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I thought so too. But I think it's because it was such a laid-back chapter. No burst of emotions and frantic antics lol. Glad they were able to enjoy a leisure day. Reminds us that they're still just kids. ππ
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I teared up while reading this chapter. So happy that he's finally read the letter, I feel like this will jump-start his belief in himself and those around him who shower him with love. Gotta love Teddy. His actions towards Ryder when he is at his lowest always warms my heart, even though he struggles to find the right words his presence alone is enough. Looking forward to more. Cheers!!π
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Such a powerful chapter...I'm just speechless...
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He's trying so hard to have his cake and eat it too, but sometimes it's just not possible. As a childhood friend you would think Mike would behave better and be more sensitive towards Teddy but nope. Happy for Liz and Blake..knew they would get there hehe. I hope Teddy isn't too hurt, losing a friend like that is more closer to the feeling of losing a family member. Ryder is turning into a total bada**....Love It! At least at this level.Thanks for the update. Cheers!π
