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  1. Rob singing with Bono 😎
  2. unilive

    Prologue

    hey, I've added pictures in chapter 36 using A.I, very close to how I picture them in my head if you want to check it out
  3. and Rob, looks exactly how I picture him here!
  4. Having fun creating pictures of Mark! This is how I picture him in the beginning of the story
  5. Nice, right!
  6. Hey, I'm having a little fun with A.I, trying to recreate the Coming out picture! not in black and white and not exactly how I want them to look like but close enough
  7. A peek through Damien’s eyes I stand in the doorway of their home studio - yes, they have a home studio - watching three of the band members and fighting the urge to turn around and leave. I know them, not personally, of course, but in the way everyone knows them. They’re always at the top of the charts. Every record they release goes straight to number one. I’ve never seen them live, but I know their work, and I love their sound. Dylan and Damon, the pianist and drummer, are sitting o
  8. unilive

    Prologue

    Update : I’ve revised the story… again! Spending time with Robbie and Mark has always been my little getaway, so I’ve been spending time with them a lot recently. I first found something in my files that I wrote a while back - a piece from Damien’s point of view. It’s probably not the update you were expecting, but I’ve developed it, and it let me spend some more time with Rob and Mark. And then I wrote a couple new chapters that take place not long after the end of the story and I r
  9. I mention it in the chapter' note. This is an erotic story, I enjoy writing the sex scenes and yes you're right, I wrote this story for myself, kinda. I wanted to share it but i didn't write it for Gayauthors but for Nifty where I used to read sex stories when I was younger and then Gaydemon or Literotica where people read for the sex just like me 😆 If you're going to comment on a story, please try to find something nice and positive to say before saying something negative like this, I spent hours and hours writing this and I love it, so it just ruins it a little tbh, i mean there must be positive things to say for sure
  10. OK that's just mean 🥲😄 plus, this was just a chapter I wrote for fun weeks after concluding the story. Then I wrote more later
  11. unilive

    Chapter 31

    @FanLit it was fun writing the sex scenes, less challenging than developing the story, which is the reason why there's sex in every chapter even when they're physically apart 😆 and also the reason why they screwed up a little, so in this chapter, breaking their rule was what made it exciting to write, and hopefully to read as well! about their last name, I'd say they just kept their own last names.
  12. @FanLit it's about time I reply to your post, my apologies, life is so busy. I first wrote this story when I was 18 but stopped abruptly because it had become too challenging, and then gave it another try years later and it has become what it is now so I can understand continuing a story 30 years later... Maybe someday, @ShadowDweller knows there is a good part of it already written so who knows 😄for now it still feels like an overwhelming task tbh
  13. Here after reading Mrsgnomie's story? Don't worry this chapter was first written in 2005 and then reworked in 2017 and after so many years, it's still nice when people leave a comment 😉
  14. unilive

    Chapter 31

  15. You're welcome, I'm glad you had a good time reading about them, doesn't matter if you're late to the party! There are no other characters in my brain, but I had a compulsive need to write about Robbie and Mark. I wish I could tell you I'll write more about them but it's unlikely, it's a bit too late now.
  16. @Ford48 this is cool! Thanks for leaving a comment and telling me you're enjoying the story, always nice to know there are still people reading this!
  17. I haven't logged on in a while, plus I have a stye and my vision is blurred but I still managed to read this chapter and the previous ones, not thoroughly though, but I'll try again later. This chapter was such a feel good chapter, I love that you ve written about their lives now in details, the characters feel like real people and the closeness they now share is awesome. Well done, you really know how to write a story and I'm looking forward to reading the next one
  18. I prefer Nash's point of view too, I liked Penn's pov and I think it'd be nice to read his side of the story again in future chapters (how many left though? 1, 2, 3?) but I'd still prefer reading the next one from Nash's pov, and yes, why not both?
  19. Well the next chapter should be interesting! This one was, as I once called the chapter with Nick in Italy, a very well written edging chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen during the storm, is it a work in progress? Again, I'm glad you're safe.
  20. I'm sorry to hear you live in the area that is on fire, that must so scary, after Australia, now America. 2020 is such a terrible year, it's insane! I hope your house isn't lost, damn, I can't even begin to imagine how devastating it must be. Stay safe.
  21. True! it would've been better. Oh well, whatever, I'm so done editing this story! 😅
  22. @Marty I thought I'd changed that, but apparently I didn't, not here. I still think it's obvious Mark says you and I because it's the band's name.
  23. unilive

    Chapter 28

    you'll soon find out! Maybe you have already lol
  24. @Indigoskye I might write more, but I'm still undecided. Glad to discover a new reader even if it's the last chapter 😉
  25. unilive

    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed it a lot. Will you write more? Your writing style is compelling and I'd love to know what happens next for Mark.
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