Laura S. Fox
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You will see the kiddo - in the epilogue.
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Never doubt me I'll always find a way toward the happy end, no matter how stubborn the characters!
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It was about time
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Epilogue The faint aroma of brewed coffee, mixed as it was with the antiseptic particular to any hospital, was enough to keep Lyn alert. That and the way the boy beside him kept on swinging his legs against the chair. He reached out and ruffled the boy’s hair. “You know, if you keep it up like this, your dad might have to pay for broken hospital furniture instead of that cool baseball mitt I know you’ve been eyeing since last year.” Alex turned his head to look at him. He looked
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Oh, Maestro, keep a few things for when you'll be writing the review! You know you can't escape now... not after commenting after each chapter and analyzing the characters with such an incredible degree of sophistication. You've read the guys so well... Brad, Lyn, Alexander... I hope they made a lasting impression, and not only on you! Alexander, the seducer... oh, I definitely love it! -
I did intend it as a snapshot... they deserved to be happy then, and they would again. I know this scene can be interpreted in various ways, but I like to believe that it is also hopeful
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He-he, thank you!
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They were happy, yes Life has such moments, too.
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Wow reaction because, well... I have to confess, I did imagine it in a very cinematic way, sort of how some series or movies would end with the credits rolling over the image, while the characters still interact on the screen... You see right through me, he-he...
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We do have such moments in our lives, I believe... when we're simply happy. And I wanted to show it for these guys, too. Thank you so much @LeeSA! You've been so supportive, though I did challenge you with these characters and their choices!
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How well do you know Alexander? He'd only change it with a pic from the wedding!
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I didn't want to leave that unrevealed!
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Never thought of that! But yeah, I believe you can say that...
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But life has its beautiful moments, too And Lyn now remembers those, as well.
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Thank you so much! It was an important moment in their lives, because they were so happy.
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Chapter Sixty-One – Say It Out Loud There had to be an expression to describe how he felt, standing in the reception area of the hospital where Alexander worked, cradling a huge bouquet of red roses in his arms, while all around him people walked with purpose, stealing curious glances at him. Everything here was white or hospital-blue, and then there was him, breaking the pattern with that romantic cliché. Lyn had to wonder briefly if the receptionist might find the size of that bouquet eno
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Since everyone reacted with fingers crossed... I did the same
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That was what I wanted to convey... for all Theo believes that his pack is gone, he cannot bear the thought of losing his new pack
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That is such a nice thing to take from my lil' writing! But it's so true! It costs nothing to be kind.
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I'm glad you're interested in Jack! He may seem like a support character - and he'd argue that he's pretty supportive - but he's also right, front and center! If you were alluding to the bad things happening in the US... it even reached our news. It's bone-chilling.
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Each of them is tuned to their surroundings in a certain way because they're different. But that's what makes them perfect to each other.
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He might do that!
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I hate you... lol, just kidding. It's so cold where I live. Theo is hurrying up!
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And the big bad wolf in on his way!
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They will go through a lot, but they will be together, too. Thank you for reading and commenting!
